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Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2024.09.28 - 08:58AM Title: Chapter 93

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Well nice to see that harry has finally figured out that he can’t do it all….but then again i feel sorry for hagrid for losing another student but maybe gaining a perfessor some day…as for harry he is quick on his feet for sure but madam ponfrey will not be happy to see him again…kutgw

Author's Response: Yeah, as much as I wish Harry could juggle it all, he’s got too much on his plate. I like to think Hagrid has matured a bit as a professor and can take this disappointment in stride. Thanks for reading and commenting!



Reviewer: Arnel Signed Date: 2024.09.27 - 08:35PM Title: Chapter 93

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I'm glad you have decided not to make Harry into a superhero who just breezes through his week with aplomb. Showing that Friday afternoons are a challenge for him and giving him an understanding professor in Hagrid gives Harry more believability than someone who doesn't show fatigue at the of the week.

It was also nice to see how other students have improved in Defense and that Professor Flamel has taken notice of their progress. Harry's duel with Blaise was well-written, kept me engaged and gave me some ideas to mull about if I ever decide to write another duel. The tournament at the end of term sounds like fun.

Well done.

Author's Response: I would’ve loved to let Harry do well in all his classes plus excel in everything else he’s doing, but that’d be unrealistic. He tried to add in Care of Magical Creatures mainly for Hagrid’s sake, so I like Hagrid giving his blessing to Harry dropping it. I love writing magical duels, which is why I feature them so often. Glad you liked this one and I’ll be on the lookout for the next one you write! Thanks for the encouragement!




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