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Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2023.07.13 - 08:59PM Title: A Whispered Truth

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Well its nice to see some ice is broken with Lupin and Ginny…and the twins where smart to aid Ginny in her education even if its not to molly approval….kutgw

Author's Response: Thanks!



Reviewer: Arnel Signed Date: 2023.07.11 - 07:04PM Title: A Whispered Truth

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Again, you're doing a nice job of showing these scenes from Ginny's point of view. I'd forgotten that Professor McGonagall had gone with Harry and Hermione and that another professor needed to run the Sorting. I'm glad Fred and George are so supportive of Ginny when Ron has turned mean and self-important. Well done.

Author's Response: I think Ron continuously struggles with feeling possessive of friendship, something easy to explain when you look at how he gets lost in the middle of all his siblings, but it brings out some truly nasty behaviour at several points in canon. I don't see it as self-important but really insecurity.




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