Search:

SIYE Time:9:45 on 19th July 2024
SIYE Login: no


Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2023.07.14 - 05:21PM Title: The Defence Professor

starstarstarstarhalf-star

Nice to see something’s will change in some classrooms but probably won’t in others….nice also to give Ginny a little boost and allow her to grow more then she has been allowed in a while…kutgw



Reviewer: Aurorofthelight Signed Date: 2023.07.14 - 03:59PM Title: The Defence Professor

starstarstarstar

The first 3 chapers were a great start! Good to see Lupin stick to Slytherin! Looking forward to what you do with this!:D:D:D:D:D:D:D



Reviewer: Arnel Signed Date: 2023.07.12 - 03:29PM Title: The Defence Professor

starstarstarstarstar

I'm curious...if Egypt gets an average of fifteen day a year of rainfall, how can the tombs Ginny and her family be damp and smelly? That description of Ginny's trip with her family struck me as decidedly odd.

That quibble over, I love your characterization of Colin and how forgiving he is of what happened to Ginny. He's right that she was a victim of Tom Riddle just as he was and that she shouldn't blame herself for what Tom made her do. I really liked it when he came and sat next to her in Defense class.

I've always loved Remus Lupin as a teacher. He is the sort of teacher who wants you to learn and knows how to help you do it. He's also very fair when it comes to meting out punishments and the Slytherin girl earned every one of her lost points and the week's detention. However, I think his history lesson of the Great War and those who fought in it caught my eye the most. What he said really put the sacrifices of Harry's parents' generation into perspective for me. And we know from canon that Professor Lupin is best at getting the meek to perform their best. Go Ginny!

Well done.

Author's Response: I know their proximity to the Nile has caused mold issues, there's very little ventilation and things just tend to grow in that when combined with all the visitors. But also that's mainly assumption by Ginny due to not actually being allowed into the deeper tombs and just sub-consciously associating it with the chamber. Thanks for the support! Hope to have more out next week.




../back
! Go To Top !

Sink Into Your Eyes is hosted by Grey Media Internet Services. HARRY POTTER, characters, names and related characters are trademarks of Warner Bros. TM & 2001-2006. Harry Potter Publishing Rights J.K.R. Note the opinions on this site are those made by the owners. All stories(fanfiction) are owned by the author and are subject to copyright law under transformative use. Authors on this site take no compensation for their works. This site 2003-2006 ALL RIGHTS RESERVED. Special thanks to: Aredhel, Kaz, Michelle, and Jeco for all the hard work on SIYE 1.0 and to Marta for the wonderful artwork.
Featured Artwork © 2003-2006 by Yethro.
Design and code 2006 by SteveD3(AdminQ)
Additional coding 2008 by melkior and Bear