Reviewer: Gin110881 Signed
Date: 2024.05.14 - 07:42AM
Title: Chapter 5
Oh, what a fun story. I couldn't help a good giggle several times, especially when Ginny placed one of her dry comments.
For a moment, I really thought Ginny was so desperate to forget her feelings for Harry that she'd actually take the potion. And I wasn't wrong, was I? I was even more relieved when she took the potion to suppress her feelings for Dean, thanks to her conversation with Harry the day before. I love it when Harry moves his bum a little faster and snatches Ginny right from under Dean's nose!
Well done. Loved your story!
And before I forget, I loved the almost friendly relationship between Ginny and the ghoul.
Author's Response: Thanks so much for leaving a review! It was a fun story to write that just poured onto the page once the idea hit me.
I enjoyed keeping Harry and readers guessing about what Ginny was doing. In a way, she's the real mystery in the attic.
I couldn't write Ginny cheating on someone or Harry pushing someone to cheat on someone, especially a friend. I've seen lots of authors play off Ginny's relationship with Dean as a joke to get under Ron's skin at the end of OotP, but I liked using it as a plot point that made both my main characters consider who they are and what they're willing to do.
Having the ghoul act partly as guard, partly as confidant, and partly as wingman was fun for me. Glad you enjoyed it!
Reviewer: gxrridxc Signed
Date: 2024.02.29 - 03:04PM
Title: Chapter 5
omg I love the ending so much this is great. Keep it up! Also, when is the next chapter of ritual's memory coming out I can't wait!!!!
Author's Response: So glad you enjoyed it! RLM updates on Fridays, so we’re close to the new chapter dropping tomorrow. Thanks for commenting!