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Reviewer: I Love Ginerva Signed Date: 2010.06.28 - 09:47AM Title: The Thirtieth Flower

actually, I didn't think the chapter was all that bad...



Reviewer: mice93 Signed Date: 2009.07.05 - 01:30AM Title: The Thirtieth Flower

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I LOVE THIS STORY!



Reviewer: bart Signed Date: 2009.01.09 - 07:56PM Title: The Thirtieth Flower

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Reviewer: piltad Signed Date: 2008.09.18 - 12:32AM Title: The Thirtieth Flower

Well I like it though some of it was worded oddly to me I really think you have quite a great begining cant wait to see were you take this story.



Reviewer: mrsmeggiepotter Signed Date: 2007.08.25 - 12:03AM Title: The Thirtieth Flower

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Reviewer: CodeRomance Signed Date: 2007.08.06 - 09:11PM Title: The Thirtieth Flower

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well i think it was a good start for a story....you know someone mentioned to me that this was the best love story ever written on siye so i just had to read it! you can thank James Evans for that one!

CodeRomance



Reviewer: HarryGinnyMustLiveOn Signed Date: 2007.05.10 - 04:14AM Title: The Thirtieth Flower

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I loved this story! I found it really sad. With the bit with candles in earlier chapters you had me crying. In fact, you had me crying alot. I used to not like tragedy, but I'm warming to it.



Reviewer: Ginny_Weasley568 Signed Date: 2007.04.21 - 06:02PM Title: The Thirtieth Flower

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That was not a terrible chapter! I quite liked it. Good Job!



Reviewer: nevascared Signed Date: 2007.01.01 - 12:50PM Title: The Thirtieth Flower

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i like that harry and ginny aren't rushing into a serious relationship just yet. i hate it when people rush things and it just seems like theyre just 2 hormone-guided teenagers



Reviewer: XeroBlitz Signed Date: 2006.11.10 - 04:03PM Title: The Thirtieth Flower

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Okay. VERY good, but here:


“Because I’ve seen it before. Lily and James were exactly the same. Well, not exactly the same, because they fought every day up until the day they got together,” said Lily.

said 'Lily'.

Isn't that supposed to be Lupin?

Anywhoooo... great job!

10/10



Reviewer: Dragen Signed Date: 2006.08.31 - 07:01AM Title: The Thirtieth Flower

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First of, I ahve to say that the start of this story isn't terrible, in fect it's a great start, so don't put yourselve down about it... I know I've read this before, but I'm reading it again as it's been a long time since I've read it.

So anyhow, I love the presnt that Ginny give to Harry, it truly came from the heart, and that to me is the best gift of all...

keep up the great work...



Reviewer: Luna Anonymous Date: 2006.04.26 - 11:33PM Title: The Thirtieth Flower

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don't say that.. it was a most wonderful chapter.... a bit choopy, but still seemed well thought out. And as soon as they started listening to the record i just knew that it was James and Lily. I love that you put the James/Lily & Harry/Ginny connection into a story. It fits so perfectly, and it's a very subtle suggestion.



Reviewer: knightsbridge Signed Date: 2006.04.25 - 08:12PM Title: The Thirtieth Flower

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Not a terrible chapter at all. Just a prologue to set the stage for your story.



Reviewer: janvi Anonymous Date: 2006.03.16 - 07:15AM Title: The Thirtieth Flower

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No it was terrible at all! It was amazing! I thought it explained everything! I cant wait to read your nrxt! Go on you are doing a good job!



Reviewer: savannah Anonymous Date: 2006.02.22 - 07:52PM Title: The Thirtieth Flower

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one thing woulden't ginny be a little embaresed by like sleeping with harry. I do not think it would happen that essaly



Reviewer: hannahparker Anonymous Date: 2006.01.09 - 06:02PM Title: The Thirtieth Flower

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AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW WWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW WWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW WWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW WWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW Is this before the HBP? they mentioned.... ERM... the old headmaster (ive read the series 11 times)



Reviewer: Ginny Rox the Burrow Signed Date: 2005.11.06 - 06:23AM Title: The Thirtieth Flower

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TERRIBLE CHAPTER?!?!?!?!?!?no way!!!!i woz giggling like a silly little girl and i never do that,EVER, so b proud in the knowledge to what u made me revert 2.lol.i loved the gift and that little kiss tho(so sweet!!!)i dunt kno whether u'd class this as critisism but wen lupin says'they argued every day up2 wen they started seeing eachother' or sumthing u sed that Lily sed it,not Lupin.neway,loved.cant wait 2 read more!!!woo-hoo!!!!*GRtB*



Reviewer: The Black Tower Anonymous Date: 2005.09.07 - 03:11PM Title: The Thirtieth Flower

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Never apologise for the quality of your work. Be proud of what you have written.



Reviewer: brhsoccer14 Signed Date: 2005.08.26 - 03:41PM Title: The Thirtieth Flower

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Well, I just finished reading the story and although it is not my favorite I have to say I am very impressed with the quality of your work! Of course, with no doubt, your story is much better than any story I could write, but there were just a few things that were mentioned by other reviewers that you should work on, but really you have a great story! Thanks for sharing it with us!



Reviewer: Dianne Anonymous Date: 2005.08.16 - 10:37PM Title: The Thirtieth Flower

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I thought I'd drop by and start reading some of your stories. I have to agree with the others here that the chapter is not terrible as you claimed it was. I agree also that Ginny and Harry were rushed, but they are after all teenagers and teenagers don't think, they just do...I could see this happening. After reading HBP, I am drawn more and more to stories that have emotion, like this one did, so I will continue to read the story. I'm glad it' finished because if I like it, I can read a chapter a day and just enjoy it without having to wait for more, which is a bonus. So far, I like it, though I had a hard time picturing Lily and James performing..but then in the movie, the depiction of them dancing around kind of dressed like hippies, made this part more believeable for me. The chapter is flawless spelling and grammar wise which is always appreciated. My story was written before I even knew what a beta was! Now the poor dear has to go over the entire thing so I can replace chapters with the more coherent versions! Bless her! Well, I like the story and will continue reading as time permits. Congratulations on your outstanding amount of reviews! Very impressive!




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