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Reviewer: piltad Signed Date: 2008.09.18 - 07:16AM Title: Inner James
Well I don't know about the time travel really didn't add anything if you would of added more in there about what the future and the past did together that would of been a whole different story would of loved to see Harry interact with his dad and friends that would be one fun bunch I think.
Reviewer: CodeRomance Signed Date: 2007.08.07 - 09:55AM Title: Inner James
ok that was cool...but it did seem kind of rushed! and i wonder if they will really forget everything or if something will happen and they will remember bits ok it!
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Reviewer: Ginny_Weasley568 Signed Date: 2007.04.21 - 06:45PM Title: Inner James
i loved that wholoe time travel thing! Good Job!
Reviewer: Dragen Signed Date: 2006.08.31 - 08:15AM Title: Inner James
What a great chapter, I can't wait to see what happens next... keep up the great work.
Reviewer: Katie27 Signed Date: 2006.06.17 - 01:33AM Title: Inner James
Blah...I want to continue but I have to get to bed! Urgh...it is 1:30am and I have a huge graduation party at my house tomorrow...tons of people! Lol...anyway...so far wonderfully done. I am liking it a lot. I am not going to be able to read any more though until Monday. Thanks for writing! -Katie
Reviewer: morgie Anonymous Date: 2006.03.22 - 04:07PM Title: Inner James
I LOBVE the eunion! So cute;)
Reviewer: savannah Anonymous Date: 2006.02.23 - 10:23AM Title: Inner James
oooooooooohhhhhhhhhhhhhh this ending is too cute.
Reviewer: Livi Anonymous Date: 2005.07.30 - 07:57AM Title: Inner James
Woah now this chapter is monumental and cool. I love the randomness but it is a really hard concept to kinda get your head around and so it's really hard to explain!!! The whole time travel thing is cool but it would seriously mess with your mind lol! I liked the note from the marauders! Yeh anyway I'm gonna read the rest now...
Reviewer: hattiepotter Anonymous Date: 2005.01.04 - 11:17AM Title: Inner James
I liked the time travel, but it was a bit weird that they stayed for a whole week! REALLY looking forward to that exciting bit at the end - it's a shame my holidays are over now so I won't have as much time to read!
Reviewer: NoLabels Anonymous Date: 2004.12.30 - 05:42PM Title: Inner James
I liked the time travel thing, it was cool. I think that'll definitely help Harry with missing Sirius though.
Reviewer: purebloodwitch Anonymous Date: 2004.08.12 - 01:05AM Title: Inner James
bloody brilliant- i loved the whole chapter
Reviewer: Loud Mouse Anonymous Date: 2004.01.28 - 10:16PM Title: Inner James
Brilliant!! And the time travel, Harry finally getting to meet his parents, only to know they'll never remember him. Bloody Brilliant!! Mabey Dumbmledore had a Quick Quotes Quill going somewhere, Lily did have a similar idea, she just didn't get the whole conversation. Keep it up, I'm lokking forward to the rest of the story
Reviewer: Belle Anonymous Date: 2004.01.28 - 07:05PM Title: Inner James
I agree with Melindaleo, time travel may be frequent, but it is definately not boring the way you've done it! I loved how Lily and James reacted to Harry's story, and how they find out about everything, but still get their memories erased. I totally love this story, and I can't wait for more!!!
Reviewer: rach Anonymous Date: 2004.01.28 - 03:21PM Title: Inner James
i love time travel involving harrys parents, so dont worry about it, not boring at all!! this is really good, tho, update soon!!
Reviewer: Sleepy Anonymous Date: 2004.01.28 - 02:09PM Title: Inner James
excellent!!! just bloody brilliant! loved it thanks
Reviewer: Melindaleo Anonymous Date: 2004.01.28 - 01:47PM Title: Inner James
Not boring!! I don't care how many times the time travel is done, it has quite an impact. My only criticism is that it seemed a bit rushed, even though the chapter was long. You have SO much here to give an emotional punch with, but you breezed through it. I would have liked to see Harry's shock when he found the letter, his reaction to James' worry about his dream being a premonition. I would have like to see Harry struggling with meeting his parents and pretending to be a stranger. Please continue this in the next chapter - I want to see how Harry copes with the fact he just had to give up both parents and Sirius yet again! He still didn't get to say goodbye to Sirius!
