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Reviewer: piltad Signed Date: 2008.09.18 - 07:51AM Title: Nightmares and Feinting
You make things to causal I really don't think you really want to be writing the story right now that your just lining things up for later which is unfortunate since you could really make this one of the better stories on here.
Reviewer: mrsmeggiepotter Signed Date: 2007.08.25 - 12:59AM Title: Nightmares and Feinting
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Reviewer: CodeRomance Signed Date: 2007.08.08 - 08:17AM Title: Nightmares and Feinting
ooh it would have been cooler if you had waited for everyone to hear the part with lily and james! to see what their reaction would be! well i loved the quidditch commentary...that was really good!
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Reviewer: Ginny_Weasley568 Signed Date: 2007.04.21 - 07:24PM Title: Nightmares and Feinting
Okay, that was definently my favorite chapter so far. I have no clue why but it is. Keep up the good work!
Reviewer: JPotterNY Signed Date: 2007.03.24 - 01:43PM Title: Nightmares and Feinting
Great story, I'm enjoying it.
It appears that Voldemort is getting bad info - Ginny is 5th year not 6th.
Reviewer: morgie Anonymous Date: 2006.03.22 - 05:16PM Title: Nightmares and Feinting
:) Quidditch is c00l.
Reviewer: janvi Anonymous Date: 2006.03.17 - 07:03AM Title: Nightmares and Feinting
You have made a mistake in this one, ginny weasley is in fifth year not sixth year. Read the part again when narcissa meets voldemort and tells her that harry has fallen in love with sixth year girl ginny weasley!
Reviewer: hattiepotter Anonymous Date: 2005.01.05 - 11:17AM Title: Nightmares and Feinting
The couch scene was a bit full on - I don't think they'd do that in the middle of Gryffindor Common Room somehow - but I'm enjoying the story!
Reviewer: anna_banana Anonymous Date: 2004.10.15 - 03:54PM Title: Nightmares and Feinting
read this chapter only after being told about will read the rest soon now
Reviewer: billybob Anonymous Date: 2004.03.19 - 07:45PM Title: Nightmares and Feinting
good for you, allowing Ginny to be the agressive one. tastefully done.
Reviewer: ayanami Anonymous Date: 2004.03.07 - 07:28PM Title: Nightmares and Feinting
hey, fabulous story and excellent chapter! I LOVE the dreams scenes with the marauders -- add more! And if you're open for suggestions, I think you should put in a few pranks on malfoy^_^ update soon!
Reviewer: HGForever Anonymous Date: 2004.03.04 - 01:54PM Title: Nightmares and Feinting
I think the couch scene was right on. A hormonal teenage boy being felt up by his beautiful girlfriend? Lay back and enjoy it as long as it last. These chapters are great - please don't kill off any of the foursome (you did mention tragedy).
Reviewer: Sleepy Anonymous Date: 2004.03.01 - 05:16PM Title: Nightmares and Feinting
excellent chapter I have to agree I'm sure Harry would have freaked out way more than he did but on the whole the chappie was excellent as I said above waiting for more!!
Reviewer: laurablack Anonymous Date: 2004.03.01 - 04:42PM Title: Nightmares and Feinting
i agree, i think that harry would freak out more. i did enjoy their little couch session, hehehe. can't wait for more of that! i liked the part where james and sirius came to visit harry too.
Reviewer: Melindaleo Anonymous Date: 2004.03.01 - 03:34PM Title: Nightmares and Feinting
Well, I thought the nightmare was rather exciting, not to mention the couch in the common room!! Our kids are growing up! I did think Harry handled the threat to Ginny a bit too well, seems to me that would freak him out more.
