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Reviewer: madeye232 Signed Date: 2006.01.18 - 11:54PM Title: Chapter 3 - The Memories
Wow! This is different, I like it! I usually refuse to read anything that involves the death of Harry, but since it was obvious he was going to be alive, I started. I'm wondering what it was that Harry didn't want Ginny to see after the Prophesy was discussed. I'm going to have to go check my book but aside from talking about the Prophesy, nothing else happened? I'm looking forward to seeing how Ron and Hermione are coping and of course some H/G moments. I'm glad he showed her he was alive. I like this!
Reviewer: Melindaleo Anonymous Date: 2004.02.11 - 09:14AM Title: Chapter 3 - The Memories
Wow! This is different, I like it! I usually refuse to read anything that involves the death of Harry, but since it was obvious he was going to be alive, I started.
I'm wondering what it was that Harry didn't want Ginny to see after the Prophesy was discussed. I'm going to have to go check my book but aside from talking about the Prophesy, nothing else happened?
I'm looking forward to seeing how Ron and Hermione are coping and of course some H/G moments. I'm glad he showed her he was alive. I like this!
Author's Response: Ah, that would be easy. Harry and Dumbledore went on to discuss Neville. Harry has kept secrets for Neville for quite some time.
Reviewer: Angie Anonymous Date: 2004.02.10 - 05:29PM Title: Chapter 3 - The Memories
I think you have a good start here. I am interested in how you are going to go on with this. Will it be adventure or a love story? I think that you have some good writing but the pensieve visit and Ginny's visit with DD seemed a bit choppy to me. I know you cut in parts of OotP for the memory but I thought that DD and Ginny's conversation didn't flow as well as it could. But I still think that you are a good writer and I look forward to reading more.
Author's Response: Yeah, I know fusing two story writers into the same story always looks akward.
Reviewer: laex Anonymous Date: 2004.02.09 - 06:37PM Title: Chapter 3 - The Memories
I really like where you're going with this... it's very interesting. I've been reading one story where everyone but Dumbledore thinks Harry is dead and it's just really depressing... this, however, is interesting. Maybe it's not as sad because Ginny knows he's alive, they are in love, and you haven't mentioned Ron and Hermione's sadness?! Regardless, I like it - please keep writing!
Author's Response: I'm getting there. ;)
