Reviews For In The House of the Quick and the Hungry
Reviewer: pottermania Signed Date: 2009.08.04 - 06:45AM Title: Let These Be Your Desires I loved thiis chapter! I must be a fluff addict. Reviewer: Heartsong Signed Date: 2009.01.25 - 03:28PM Title: Let These Be Your Desires It's obvious from the discriptives that you know what this kind of love feels like, so strong that it has an unreal quality to it. Very nicely done. I actually had shivers run down my spine as I thought of someone I had felt that way for once. Thank you. Reviewer: Dumbledore Anonymous Date: 2007.02.05 - 10:24AM Title: Let These Be Your Desires Awww... how sweet. Great chapter. Reviewer: lucky_black_cat Signed Date: 2006.09.25 - 08:12AM Title: Let These Be Your Desires Another great one! I think we'll see Harry revisiting his memories through a Pensieve in Book 7, and that part with Luna was definitely hillarious. You say you just can't sit to write a poem, but I thought this song was pretty nice and fit well (though I doubt Harry and Ginny were thinking about that right then). The image of Voldemort sitting Harry down to do a test on his relationship with Ginny cracked me up completely ("Tsk tsk Potter, trying to use our mind link to get all the correct answers, are we?"). And the last quote by Hurry was LOL, a perfect ending for the chapter :) Great job, Laura. -Sonia Reviewer: critmo Signed Date: 2006.06.26 - 12:03PM Title: Let These Be Your Desires This was quick. Reviewer: Cassie Payne Signed Date: 2006.05.02 - 05:47PM Title: Let These Be Your Desires "he wasn't even sharing her with the creaky wooden floor." Reviewer: Cassie Payne Signed Date: 2006.05.02 - 05:47PM Title: Let These Be Your Desires "he wasn't even sharing her with the creaky wooden floor." Reviewer: Enchantedgurls Signed Date: 2006.04.23 - 08:45PM Title: Let These Be Your Desires AWWW! I LOVED this chapter. I want Harry and Ginny to get back together in book 7! I liked what he did with the pensieve, that was cute. And I like this quote: “What do you mean 'we've parted ways' ?” he sputtered, “What are we, Fudge and Dumbledore?” Reviewer: Delani Anonymous Date: 2006.03.30 - 12:04AM Title: Let These Be Your Desires "And believe it or not, it's still not over!" Thank GOD!!!! I about died reading the end. me and voldy, I tell ya...and now I can't remember my witty comment I was about to leave. Aw dammit, well I really do agree, X is just not that important. lol. And in the biggest picture my own person loves your own person and that's all there is to it.” was perhaps the cutest and best way a guy could declare his love (i'm making sure my future love takes notes. wherever he is...)
Ah, bugger it all, something witty. There. I've left my comment of wit. Now you have to update soon. So hah. (with this kind of wit, it doesn't take a wit to wonder why I'm so witless...) moving on, loved the fluff-angst-love-declaration-death-of-vo ldemort!
oh, and happy birthday. however long ago that was. oy vey, i need to start checking updates sooner...
Reviewer: kat Anonymous Date: 2006.03.16 - 11:51PM Title: Let These Be Your Desires I just stumbled across your story and read the whole thing - it's great~! Amazing writing and insight...can't wait to read the rest...make it long and drawn out please :) Reviewer: Azabaza Signed Date: 2006.03.16 - 06:16PM Title: Let These Be Your Desires "Nah, you've got six older brothers, you really don't need an evil overlord."
"Agreed."
Haha... loved this chapter, and the rest of your story. Too bad there isn't a rating higher than 10... your story's great! Reviewer: Angela Anonymous Date: 2006.03.14 - 12:11PM Title: Let These Be Your Desires I LOVE this story!!!! I feel like you have tapped into the dynamics of the Weasley family so well. My favorite chapter is the one on Bill. I have a similiar relationship with a family member that just made me want to cry! (OK I did cry. Happy now?) You are a wonderful writer! Thanks for giving us a quality piece of fan fiction to read.
Definitely a 10 rating! Reviewer: Thunder's Shadow Anonymous Date: 2006.02.23 - 02:44PM Title: Let These Be Your Desires I've read this part probably a billion times before, but I've never left a review. I'm in love with this story, but the best part of the whole damned thing has got to be their discussion in the Leaky Cauldron. One particular line ("What do you mean 'we've parted ways' ?" he sputtered, "What are we, Fudge and Dumbledore?") is one of the best sentences I've read in awhile.
Also, the part where Harry tries to just simplify everything is just too adorable for words ("Well look bigger then!" said Harry, "Because in the biggest picture my own person loves your own person and that's all there is to it."). Trust Harry to say somethign like that.
Honestly though, I'd *love* to see a one shot of the Order, the Weasleys, or anyone for that matter, listening in on that conversation from the other room. Hint, hint. ::grins::
The end of this chapter was adorable ("I told him to hurry up and snuff it already so I could go make out with my girlfriend," he said, turning to her, before addressing the reporters once more, "And I'm about to say something similar to this lot."), and had me wondering if there is still another chapter to go. If so, I'll be waiting...
signed,
Samantha
::per fect 10 rating:: Reviewer: cwarbeck Signed Date: 2006.01.20 - 12:02PM Title: Let These Be Your Desires you can't imagine how happy i was to stumble on this story here in SIYE. (i was reading it on another site) finally, finally a chapter with harry and ginny actually together and happy--to a certain degree :)
anyway, i would really like to commend you on your writing style. very different from a lot of other fanfics because you seem to actually know these characters and you're not just making stuff about them. it's sometimes hard to read this story, because some chapters (my favorite is Ron Was Full of Woe) make me teary-eyed but i think that's a mark of a good story when it actually makes you feel real emotional while you read it. thanks for this story, and please, update soon! Reviewer: ladybug Anonymous Date: 2006.01.15 - 03:17AM Title: Let These Be Your Desires marvelous! and the best bit is it's not over! And the rest will be post-Voldemort (I hope)! This was a wonderful chapter. "Yeah? Watch me" - oh that was so sexy! Thanks for a happy chapter for a change (not that I don't love every one of the other chapters). Reviewer: Laura Anonymous Date: 2006.01.12 - 03:24PM Title: Let These Be Your Desires FINALLY!!! I've been waiting for this chapter ever since I read the very first one about Bill. You say you're not that good at fluff, but let me tell you, that was awesome! It was honest fluff, not that sugary, fake one that gets old really quickly. I'm so happy that I finally read this chapter, it took me a while, since I was on holiday when you posted it, But thank you, and I am so glad it's not over yet! Reviewer: Beth Anonymous Date: 2006.01.11 - 04:46PM Title: Let These Be Your Desires Happy Birthday. I'm so incredibly glad to hear that this story is not over. It's one of my favorites and definately one of the few I've cared to read more than once. It has good writing and simple and honest themes and I adore it. I think you did an excellent job with character depth. Keep writing awesome stories, I'll keep reading. Reviewer: rach Anonymous Date: 2006.01.08 - 09:32PM Title: Let These Be Your Desires I'M SO GLAD IT'S STILL NOT OVER!
excellent, excellent chapter!! Reviewer: LilyClio Anonymous Date: 2006.01.03 - 12:25PM Title: Let These Be Your Desires This is one of the best stories I've read. You actually got me crying, and not only when Percy died. Congratulations! Reviewer: H Anonymous Date: 2006.01.02 - 09:58PM Title: Let These Be Your Desires I really love the interaction you set up with Ginny and her brothers....I thought it really connected and was smooth. The story didn't feel at all contrived until the River chapter, because Ginny just seems so completely grown up. Yes, she's mature, but she's also 16. Sorry I didn't review on that chapter, but I wanted to finish the story before I did because I think it's important to get a wholistic view: and on the whole, it's a great story. I only wish you explored her relationship with Ron a little from his point of view rather than just his remarks on their relationships with Hermione/Harry, respectively. However, I love the Bill/Charlie chapters SO much because they feel creative but very true. Nice! | |||||||
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