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Reviewer: pottermania Signed Date: 2010.10.02 - 09:47AM Title: Epilogue: Voldemort's Last

A cracking story. was snape aware that someone died in place of harry. cant help thinking it didnt finish quite as voldermort wanted..



Reviewer: pottermania Signed Date: 2010.10.02 - 09:46AM Title: Epilogue: Voldemort's Last

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A cracking story. was snape aware that someone died in place of harry. cant help thinking it didnt finish quite as voldermort wanted..



Reviewer: Circuitsoft Signed Date: 2009.12.06 - 01:35PM Title: Epilogue: Voldemort's Last

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Just finished reading this story for the second time. My first read was at PhoenixSong, so you may have a review from me, there - I don't remember. Either way that was years ago and I still think this is among the best stories I've read.



Reviewer: harrypotterspirit Signed Date: 2009.05.18 - 06:01PM Title: Epilogue: Voldemort's Last

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Read this all in one go and waited till now to review mostly because it has been finished for several years now. I enjoyed the new location of the ending plus the meso-american influence to this story. I was hoping the confrontation with Voldemort was more suspenseful but still it was good. DD's death in the end was unexpected as was Snapes but I can DD protecting Harry right to the end. Looking forward to reading your other stories.



Reviewer: Ginny Guerra Signed Date: 2008.06.28 - 02:52AM Title: Epilogue: Voldemort's Last

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Interesting story despite some inaccuracies.

Thank you for sharing it.



Reviewer: thrushwolf Signed Date: 2008.02.08 - 11:04AM Title: Epilogue: Voldemort's Last

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First of all, this story was amazingly well done. It was exactly what i was looking for in a story. I felt that you actually had a story to tell unlike many other fanfics which are frivolous and more focused towards ultimately marriage for H/G and sex, NOT for the story.
I especially love how you included elements of not only action, but also of the deep love that is shared between H/G and made it seem almost believable and to be honest, the plot was ingenious and a breath of fresh air as far as i am concerned.
This story captivated me and held me in simply because the amount of detail you put in to it, i mean honestly who would have thought to pair HP in with Aztec (Pretty sure its Aztec if not Mayan, correct me if im wrong) culture and actually make sense of it?! Simply brilliant.

You left the story open, however it would have been much more open ended if you had left Snape alive, but it was good to have some closure on it nonetheless.
Anyways my hat is off to you for writing such a beautiful fic.
10 on all fronts, and i sincerely hope that you will either continue this universe or publish more fics soon! I would love to read a more 'mature' fic dealing with the real elements of life (i am currently about to read your fic 'Bring Me To Life' on CM)
Bravo!



Reviewer: monkeyboy Signed Date: 2007.10.06 - 04:10AM Title: Epilogue: Voldemort's Last

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I'm pretty sure that was the shittiest ending I have ever had the mispleasure to read in my entire life, no offense. But now I'm just plain pissed. Good rest of the story I guess and good luck with any future writing.



Reviewer: werekitten Signed Date: 2007.04.11 - 10:42PM Title: Epilogue: Voldemort's Last

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Whoa. That is quite a story! I loved it!
I admit I got scared when I thought you were gonna kill Ginny. I admit I skipped to a latter chapter to ensure that she had dialague. :D
Killing Dumbleore like that was... shocking. So was the ending. Not bad, but shocking. I did think that the final battle progressed to quickly, and (I'm shocked to hear myself say this) there weren't enough losses. Like, we know some Weasleys are going to die... but no one actually died in the final battle.
That said, I LOVED how you incorperated Mesoamerican culture into this, and the general plot was very good. Great job!!

Author's Response: Thanks. I do realise the final battle seemed a bit rushed, but when I got there I didn't really see it playing out much different. I too was suprised by how short it was, but I see the Epilogue as an extension of that final battle, as well as the preceeding chapter. I'm still hoping that JKR spares the Weasleys... all of them, even Percy. May be unrealistic, but I can hope, right? Thanks for reviewing!



Reviewer: harryandginny Signed Date: 2007.04.09 - 10:06PM Title: Epilogue: Voldemort's Last

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Well... shocking is an excellent word to describe the ending. However, I am infinately happy that you chose to end it that way, even though I would strongly love for you to keep going with this series. If you had ended this fic with the chapter before this, the fanfiction would not have as much depth as it does with the last chapter. Amazing how much more one little chapter can add.

I really liked the last sentence of this story. Normally, I hate rhetorically questions at the end, but this one was quite... suitable. Unfortunately, I don't have time at the moment to write more now, but I really would love another story in this series. In case my opinion matters at all. :) Lovely reading. Thank you so much!

Author's Response: I was very pleased with the epilogue and agree that it polished off the story, giving it something that it lacked up to that point. I'm not certain I'll ever come back to play in this world, but the opportunity is there if I change my mind and that's comforting. Thanks for reading and reviewing!



Reviewer: GINNY__POTTER258 Signed Date: 2007.03.21 - 06:16PM Title: Epilogue: Voldemort's Last

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ohh that was such a great ending from a angst stand point but it's kinda an open ending so i hope you do come back to play in this world who knows maybe harry and ginny could take a little trip back to the island???... Congrats on such a fantastic story i've really enjoyed reading it! : )



Reviewer: EmeraldFire Anonymous Date: 2007.03.16 - 05:34PM Title: Epilogue: Voldemort's Last

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Excellent stories these two have been. Have always loved the stories where Harry and Ginny have a connection like that, mixing in the Mesoamerican elements worked brilliantly as well, not to mention a unique perspective it gave. Really enjoyed this and a big thank you to yourself and your betas as this was definitely a favorite of mine!



Reviewer: QwayMelqnu Signed Date: 2007.03.13 - 06:01PM Title: Epilogue: Voldemort's Last

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Simply amazing. One of the most imaginitive fics I've ever read. Yeah, I know you got most of the Mesoamerican stuff from factual history, but the way you put it all together was magnificent. I also had no problems with the ending whatsoever. I can't think of a better way for Dumbledore to begin his "next adventure". I would've liked the confrontation in the temple to last longer, but I'll admit that I loved the way Voldemort was defeated. I look forward to reading more of your stuff! Keep up the good work!



Reviewer: BackInBlack Signed Date: 2007.03.11 - 04:34PM Title: Epilogue: Voldemort's Last

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I wish I could give your story a higher rating that a measley 10 :)

Well written, well thought out and well done. The chapters never seem to drag, even the transition chapters. I can't imagine the amount of research you had to put in to writing this story. It's fantastic.



Reviewer: Soccer Devil22 Signed Date: 2007.03.10 - 12:40AM Title: Epilogue: Voldemort's Last

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....wow....so it's finally over...dang...now I've got to find so more stories to wait to update. Or I could start focusing more on my story....(shurgs) meh'. Great series. By far one of SIYE's best. ~Jeff~



Reviewer: Black Rose Signed Date: 2007.03.09 - 03:52AM Title: Epilogue: Voldemort's Last

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That has to be the most mest up ways to finish a story, but I have to say thatI like it. becuse it was very different and cool. I hope you write more. Keep up the great work. -- Black Rose



Reviewer: Wolfric Signed Date: 2007.03.09 - 03:46AM Title: Epilogue: Voldemort's Last

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Congratulations on finishing this epic. I'm sure that it engenders considerable satisfaction for you to accomplish this. I wish I had the ability to accomplish something similar. I understand the compltion of the dramatic arc might require Dumbledor's demise but I probably wouldn't have the heart to kill him off, though in this story it might have been worse to kill off Stephen. Thanks for all your efforts and I look forward to your future endeavours. W.



Reviewer: Chreechree Signed Date: 2007.03.09 - 02:46AM Title: Epilogue: Voldemort's Last

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Oh, WOW what an unexpectedly dark ending! See, I said I didn’t trust Snape. Sure, it stinks that you killed off Dumbledore, but that also sets you up to address a post-canon story in the same universe that lines up certain main issues (Dumbledore being dead, for example). The question is would’ve Harry gotten a shield up in time or not? Seems like not. Very ominous and sad… but at least Voldemort’s dead. Er….. yeah. No, the reality is that even if Harry survives in canon, the ending won’t be completely happy. There will be too many loved ones lost that even if Harry, Ginny, Ron, and Hermione survive, there will always be a certain bittersweetness to the victory. I doubt she’ll end it with the murder of a beloved character with Harry feeling so down (let’s hope not), but I do think there will be a tinge of sadness that we’ll be aware of. Unexpected twist. I liked it! Kathy, congratulations again on completing this excellent story, and I look forward to reading what you have coming down the line.
~ Christine



Reviewer: pippan121 Signed Date: 2007.03.08 - 10:06PM Title: Epilogue: Voldemort's Last

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Congradulations on completing your story, although I was hoping for a slightly happier ending! Can't wait for your other ones!



Reviewer: ShayneSpectre Signed Date: 2007.03.08 - 08:01PM Title: Epilogue: Voldemort's Last

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I just want to say thanks for this wonderful story. I have to say it did not turn out quite as I expected. But when does it ever? Anyway, thanks so much for sharing it and I look forward to your writing in the future.

Shayne



Reviewer: Drummer321 Signed Date: 2007.03.08 - 05:34PM Title: Epilogue: Voldemort's Last

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Excellent ending to a great story. I actually thought you were going to kill Stephen too, that might have been an interesting twist, but I'm glad you didn't. I look forward to reading your future works.




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