Reviews For Shadow of the Serpent
Reviewer: pottermania Signed Date: 2010.09.25 - 03:33PM Title: The Ballgame So the chief had his own agenda. It seems as if he had no time for stephen either. Loved harrys angry rant at him. But who is coming to harrys rescue now? Reviewer: txreina Signed Date: 2008.02.17 - 07:44PM Title: The Ballgame What a super jerk the cheif is being. Can't say I'm completely surprise though. Glad Harry told him off. Just as I expected each chapter is filled with one great surprise after the next. You really did your research and really know how to hold your reader captive. Bravo. Reviewer: immortalphoenix Anonymous Date: 2006.12.22 - 03:55AM Title: The Ballgame No Review Reviewer: HP Fan22 Anonymous Date: 2005.12.04 - 02:24PM Title: The Ballgame Wicked! Hurry up and finish the story please!!!!! 10/10 Reviewer: quine Signed Date: 2005.12.01 - 07:56PM Title: The Ballgame Good luck with real life, and hope you can return to your wonderful fantasy world soon. Reviewer: harrylad Anonymous Date: 2005.11.04 - 07:54PM Title: The Ballgame I have reviewed on checkmated.. I am still a loyal fan but what in God's name is taking you so long. Great Story Though>>>>>> Update or feel my wrath! Reviewer: H/g4ever Anonymous Date: 2005.10.27 - 04:15PM Title: The Ballgame I have been rereading your two stories. They will not leave my mind. When I read the following: Harry shrugged; he didn't think it was as big a deal as Hunter was making it out to be. Certainly others could do it too, right? "Can't you?" he asked Stephen. "I thought you said you could produce a Corporeal Patronus." "I can," Hunter nodded, his eyes still wide. "But I've never seen one like- like that before, Harry. Every Corporeal Patronus I've ever seen, including mine, may take a shape but it's still just vapour. What you just did- well, it's supposed to be impossible." I thought that this Harry would reply " I know a girl who can make a solid corporeal patronus and she talks to hers, too." said with a smirt of course! Then when it looks like Harry is going to be attacked, hopefully you will have Ginny help him and have her patronus shoot our of Harry's wand! I'd also love it if Harry could bring back a set of wrist bands for Ginny. Don't worry about cannon differences. You are already into alternative storylines with the Indian influence. I've visited the Yucatan peninsula and your story fits in so well with what I know. I love the way you took the ball game and turned it into a wizard ball game. Great job. We will all hang tight and know that when you get settled in Japan, you will continue. Your remake of Home Alone on another site is different, but I like the original version so far. The dance contest was a nice touch. 10++++++++++++++++ Reviewer: H/g4ever Anonymous Date: 2005.10.26 - 06:46PM Title: The Ballgame Wow, what a cliff hanger, I've read through Home Alone and now have caught up with you! This is great! I can't wait for Harry and Ginny reuniting. I'm also picturing Malfoy and Harry and Ginny's snakes. How will the snakes fit in at Hogwarts? Please keep working on this storyline. Reviewer: OneEyedThief Anonymous Date: 2005.09.24 - 06:26PM Title: The Ballgame I love this story! Please uodate soon! Reviewer: MISSHOLYWUD Anonymous Date: 2005.09.24 - 12:02AM Title: The Ballgame PLEASE UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!PLEASE UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!! 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Good luck with your move, hope it all goes well, and when yo've settled down you can update for us. ********** Reviewer: Sssith Anonymous Date: 2005.09.13 - 06:46PM Title: The Ballgame Good times. Looking forward to the next installment. {hopefully soon ;-)} Reviewer: toolazytosignin Anonymous Date: 2005.09.11 - 11:48PM Title: The Ballgame Heyyy, I finally came back and was glad to see that you added two more chapters! :p Do you think that you're going to finish this story??? Anyways, wonderful work. Reviewer: annabananna Signed Date: 2005.09.04 - 08:57AM Title: The Ballgame PLEASE UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!! Reviewer: jnhink Signed Date: 2005.08.26 - 05:48PM Title: The Ballgame Yes, it is better than HBP! Keep up the good work. Reviewer: Demon_Spawn Anonymous Date: 2005.08.18 - 02:43PM Title: The Ballgame this is one of the best 'fics ive ever read and i actually did enjoy it more than J.K.'s HBP keep going !!! im enthralled | |||||||
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