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Reviewer: andy Anonymous Date: 2006.02.01 - 10:33PM Title: At First Sight
very nicely done, i'm looking forward to reading the rest of the story! and of course post hogwarts too right? ;)
Reviewer: Sir Ollivander Anonymous Date: 2004.11.19 - 01:53PM Title: At First Sight
It looks better with real paragraphs ; )
Author's Response: sorry about that. Write...that I can do. However, it takes me a couple tries before I can get it to look like something other than a mess...
Reviewer: Ann Anonymous Date: 2004.10.19 - 10:43PM Title: At First Sight
Very good, hope you continue.
Reviewer: emmamoonpotter Anonymous Date: 2004.08.18 - 07:03PM Title: At First Sight
I like this POV. Good story, update soon.
Reviewer: XiaoXiao Anonymous Date: 2004.08.18 - 01:15AM Title: At First Sight
Very sweet. I can't wait to see how this develops!
Reviewer: grs100 Anonymous Date: 2004.08.16 - 05:41PM Title: At First Sight
A minor nit to pick, but wasn't the wizarding world unaware, in general, as to the location and circumstances of Harry, up until he reached 11? I'm not looking at a book or anything right now, so I might be wrong. Otherwise, good story. I hope to read more.
Author's Response: I thought about that as well, but sort of weilded the "facts" to fit my story. Also, McGonnagal says in the first book that their would be lots of wizarding families who would be proud to raise Harry as a son. I simply had Mrs. Weasley offer to do this, as it seemed like something she was likely to do... no harm in nit-picking, I like to hear other's comments/suggestions!
Reviewer: HPgirl Anonymous Date: 2004.08.16 - 09:54AM Title: At First Sight
It really was very good. You should be proud of such a job well done! If you're planning on developing it past a one-shot, I would definetly encourage updating soon. Congrats!
Reviewer: Lord Dreadnault Signed Date: 2004.08.15 - 10:51PM Title: At First Sight
Excellent- there really aren't enough stories from this perspective I think. . . :)
