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Reviewer: piltad Signed Date: 2008.06.03 - 01:24AM Title: Chapter Eight: Holly and Mistletoe
Hmm really like the added Holly myth or superstitions whatever you want to call it I never thought of that I am really enjoying the Harry your building.
Reviewer: mrsmeggiepotter Signed Date: 2007.08.29 - 01:36AM Title: Chapter Eight: Holly and Mistletoe
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Reviewer: Magdalene Rose Signed Date: 2005.10.01 - 12:21PM Title: Chapter Eight: Holly and Mistletoe
I love that "wandering bark" bit!! I t really made me laugh.
Reviewer: Silver Cat Anonymous Date: 2005.07.05 - 08:51PM Title: Chapter Eight: Holly and Mistletoe
Boy, is this chapter good! I was wondering when the braclet would show up again. Great job of writing and you are a wonderful story teller.
Reviewer: harry and ginny 4 ver Anonymous Date: 2004.12.25 - 05:35PM Title: Chapter Eight: Holly and Mistletoe
I always thought Ginny's name was guievere as well. And we were justified in our belifs. You CAN use Guinevere if you wish to. It's the italian translation of it. Really, i looked it up. Can't wait for more, i love this story. FYI. Harry has Phoenix core, Ron a Unicorn, and Hermione a dran heartstring. Any coinsidence to this?
Reviewer: XiaoXiao Anonymous Date: 2004.12.21 - 09:30PM Title: Chapter Eight: Holly and Mistletoe
I'm so glad that there is some sort of reconciliation. It's not right for people (especially soulmates ;) ) to be fighting at Christmastime. I'm also glad that Harry has the sense not to rush it.
Reviewer: Mathetes Anonymous Date: 2004.12.21 - 04:31PM Title: Chapter Eight: Holly and Mistletoe
I must say that after starting your story this morniing I am hooked. Excellent job. I am always thrilled to see fics that include music in them. Harry playing the cello seems to fit quite well. I look forward to your next chapter. I have to admit that it was your pen name that got me started on your story. Douglas Adams is a great writer isn't he.
Author's Response: Someone recognised it! Thanks for the complements too. -Tom
Reviewer: destin4fl Anonymous Date: 2004.12.21 - 10:37AM Title: Chapter Eight: Holly and Mistletoe
excellent chapter dude! you showed your american side with the merry christmas salutation! otherwise great job and happy holidays!
Author's Response: Shame I'm not American :) Thanks anyway. -Tom
Reviewer: Lourdes Anonymous Date: 2004.12.20 - 07:26PM Title: Chapter Eight: Holly and Mistletoe
Tom, dear. This chapter clarified the "learning the cello in such a short span of time." You are right, he is a very powerful wizard and I am just a muggle so it takes years to play to a high standard. I salute you with the new spell. Has anyone been harassing you about updates? Do not worry too much about apologising for it because you update frequently. You do have a life outside of fanfic and it is understandable that you will not be updating every minute. All I ask, however, is that you complete the story. I will be devastated if I will not have an ending when I have read 8 chapters to date and will continue to read because this is a very good fic. Now, question. I agree about the holly and well researched too, thank you. However, the Burrow must have charms and wards. It would be lapse of security if Voldie entered the property. Also, much as visiting friends and relations over Christams period is an excellent tradition, I would question this when HP is a target and the Weasleys are active in the War efforts. While I understand Ginny's reasoning, I am still confused because in the first chapter, she and Harry were behaving normally towards each other. It was only when Harry rushed to "write a letter to Luna" that there was an abrupt change in attitude. I think that was the glitch because the explantion in ch8 does not really complement what started the sudden change of attitude. But do not worry, I am just being difficult. I look forwrad to more chapters... Thank you for updating so soon.
Author's Response: Thanks loads for the review, I really appreciate it. Now, to answer some questions... you might be interested to know that I have already written the ending of the fic, as well as one other passage that won't come for a while yet, so don't worry: there isn't much danger of me not finishing this, which is something of a first for me, I must admit. The wards and so on around the Burrow: I considered this too, but reasoned that they wouldn't effect something with no actual physical substance: I didn't want to ramble on about the technicalities of a simulacrum spell (inspired, I'm sorry to say, by a spell in Dingeons and Dragons). The point about everything bein rather lax considering the situation is well made, but Voldie is keeping a fairly low profile; think 'amber alert' for terrorists or something like that. And the thing in the first chapter: the answer to that is in the future, but it's wise to remember that Ginny, at l;east in my fic, is not always the most level-headed of people. Chapter nine is under way... -Tom
