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Reviewer: piltad Signed Date: 2008.06.03 - 02:08AM Title: Chapter Eleven: Razor Ice Nice really well written. Think that Ginny's comment of the world knows it is really going to bother Harry for awhile. Also no doubt in my head that Ginny knows that it is Harry giving her the gifts. Reviewer: mrsmeggiepotter Signed Date: 2007.08.29 - 02:20AM Title: Chapter Eleven: Razor Ice No Review Reviewer: Magdalene Rose Signed Date: 2005.10.01 - 12:39PM Title: Chapter Eleven: Razor Ice I luv it!!!!!!!! 12/10 if it were possable. Reviewer: Zekren Anonymous Date: 2005.01.08 - 02:59AM Title: Chapter Eleven: Razor Ice Great story just read the whole thing through and only one thing is bugging me constantly for an answer. When Ginny found the sword what was she doing in Harry's trunk to begin with? okay now that i think about she could have fouind out from one of the others but either way i'm curious to know. again great story, keep up the good work. Zekren Reviewer: XiaoXiao Anonymous Date: 2005.01.07 - 11:30PM Title: Chapter Eleven: Razor Ice Great action sequence. I enjoyed Neville's leadership abilities. Loved the bit about Harry's pin. Reviewer: Serpentspawn Signed Date: 2005.01.07 - 06:44PM Title: Chapter Eleven: Razor Ice *bristles in indignation* I do -NOT- sparkle, Tom! Good job. *grins* Reviewer: Lourdes Anonymous Date: 2005.01.07 - 05:00PM Title: Chapter Eleven: Razor Ice 1. And so does Voldemort. Brilliant one-liner. 2.Very detailed. 3.Excellent description of scenes. 4.Good characterisation. 5.Good conversations and discussions. 6.Clear indication of some research done. Well done for this. However, in your desire to give details, you tend to use very long sentences. Try shorter ones. More effective and dramatic. Long sentences equal to a paragraph will lose the reader's trend of thought. If you can find a simple word like "careless", this is much better to use than "incautious." | |||||||
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