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Reviewer: Senator of Sorcery Signed Date: 2012.12.08 - 07:00PM Title: Magical Ingredients

I have to congradulate you on excelent pranking. Loved the Inky Ice Pellets.



Reviewer: Tindual Signed Date: 2010.12.24 - 05:58PM Title: Magical Ingredients

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I absolutely adore your Ginny so far. She's just like I picture her, good job!



Reviewer: hms42 Signed Date: 2009.05.18 - 10:18AM Title: Magical Ingredients

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Reviewer: ginnyweasley777 Signed Date: 2009.04.14 - 03:36PM Title: Magical Ingredients

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brilliant chapter
I love the Inky Ice Pellets - Ron with pink hair is hilarious



Reviewer: txreina Signed Date: 2006.04.06 - 10:55PM Title: Magical Ingredients

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Ginny is someone you don't want to mess with. Hopefully Harry will stay on her good side.



Reviewer: Rocky235 Anonymous Date: 2005.03.29 - 09:52AM Title: Magical Ingredients

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You write well. I like your Ginny. She's a sweetie. The dialog is good and easy to read.



Reviewer: sugarquills23 Signed Date: 2005.03.05 - 07:52PM Title: Magical Ingredients

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I'm really enjoying this. I loved the exchanges between Harry and Ginny...subtle but sweet. Ginny giving the twins a bit of their own...too funny. Good work.

Author's Response: Ginny learned from the best! :)



Reviewer: wvchemteach Anonymous Date: 2005.02.24 - 07:15AM Title: Magical Ingredients

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Enjoying things thus far. I loved the Harry/Ginny interaction...I agree that she 'gets' him in a way that no one else can. Interesting the plot thickens with the Malfoys they are among the best of the HP villians.

Author's Response: I only hope I can do the Malfoys justice because I agree, they are just the perfect H/P villians!



Reviewer: Lourdes Anonymous Date: 2005.02.18 - 08:49PM Title: Magical Ingredients

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I like the way you section each scene and put some cliffhangers for future chapters to sort out. Very good chapter.



Reviewer: Anneleise Anonymous Date: 2005.01.26 - 06:11PM Title: Magical Ingredients

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Lovely. This has the makings of a truely gripping story. (That means the ones I check the site for about three times a day...no, not that often, but often enough...) Cant wait to read more! No one uses Borgin or Burkes, but thats a fantastic idea. Kudos on your creativity. Keep updating!

Author's Response: Nice to know I'm not the only one who checks this site multiple times a day! And I'm flattered to hear my story may be a reason you do it! More soon!



Reviewer: ll4evr Anonymous Date: 2005.01.26 - 03:19AM Title: Magical Ingredients

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Hmm.......Wonder what was so interesting to Lucius Malfoy. If only the entire page had burned! Ah, well, you wouldn't have a dark part of your plot. Actually, you most likely would...but whatever. I'm confusing myself. Anyway, great chapter! I can hardly wait for more.

Author's Response: That would proove to be interesting! Probably not the first or last time anything Lucius touched would go up in smoke, eh? I'm glad you liked it and really appreciate the feedback! Thanks!



Reviewer: Tron Anonymous Date: 2005.01.25 - 08:05PM Title: Magical Ingredients

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You have a fantastic start for your story. Please continue. I love the slow thaw that Harry goes through during the holiday with Ginny and the Weasleys. It seems Harry progressed more by spending a few days in Ginny's company than months with Ron and Hermione. For all the Malfoy blustering about their "standing" in the wizarding world, I find it very funny that he is little better than a common thief. How the mighty are fallen. Sorry, that just really struck me as funny. Please update soon!

Author's Response: Thank you! I know, the Malfoys have always struck me as slimey and not above doing whatever it takes as long as it benefits themselves. And yes, Ginny has a great impact on Harry. Ron and Hermione are fast friends and will stick by Harry no matter what. But sometimes badgering isn't the way to break through. That and maybe after six months Harry was just ready to move on. I appreciate the feedback!




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