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Reviewer: MollyandArthur Signed Date: 2015.11.07 - 09:01AM Title: Chapter 6: Unspoken Wishes

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Really great writing.



Reviewer: chelsea Anonymous Date: 2005.06.21 - 07:54PM Title: Chapter 6: Unspoken Wishes

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awesome you had me a little scared with the last page but everything worked out for the best sorry so short wanna go see what happens

Author's Response: Great! I appreciate your dedication to review! Thanks for reading.



Reviewer: YelloWitchGrl Signed Date: 2005.05.05 - 07:47PM Title: Chapter 6: Unspoken Wishes

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Ahg! Oh the tension. It will be interesting to see how avoiding her goes... okay, so again, nothing helpful ;-)

Author's Response: He tries really hard,....but best laid plans, you know. :) I'm glad that my writing is conveying the tension of the characters. Thanks again for the post. Your encouragement is helpful by the way. I love to hear that readers are enjoying my story. It's great for an author's ego. Right? lol. Thanks again for the post.



Reviewer: Anony Anonymous Date: 2005.04.29 - 10:07PM Title: Chapter 6: Unspoken Wishes

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SEP field. Nice tribute.

Author's Response: Thanks very much! That was my pre-beta's suggestion. I'm glad you mentioned it actually because I had intended to include a A/N giving proper credit to Douglas Adams. Your post reminded me to do just that. Thanks for your feedback. :)



Reviewer: PotterVixen Anonymous Date: 2005.02.16 - 07:28PM Title: Chapter 6: Unspoken Wishes

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hm.... well, a very sexy scene indeed. the physical and emotional tension just hangs there in the *tiny* amount of air between them. one suggestion? a bit less internal monologue. harry and ginny seem to really weigh *every* facet of each thought they have. it gets a bit tedious, but it's still well-written! keep it up!

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you're enjoying my story. Sorry that you found the internal thoughts too excessive. I'll keep that in mind as I write. Thanks for your feedback. I really appreciate it! Hope to hear from you again! Happy reading.



Reviewer: Leanna Anonymous Date: 2005.01.30 - 07:59AM Title: Chapter 6: Unspoken Wishes

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simply wonderful! You're writing is completelty fantastic, I've enjoyed this from the beginning and I'm looking forward to your next chapter so much! I can't wait to see more moments between harry and ginny because that part where he touched her in the hallway was just... beautiful! I was holding my breath the whole time! anyway, just wanted to say that this story is fabulous so far and I hope u update asap. when I get the chance, I'll go check out your other fic too! cheers!

Author's Response: Wow! Thanks for the wonderful review! I'm thrilled that you are enjoying my story so much. There will be much more between H/G in the future as tensions build. Watch for the next update in a few days. Thanks again for the terrific post! I really appreciate it. I just posted the first two chapters of A New Beginning. It's quite different from this one as you'll see...I hope you like it.



Reviewer: Jade_amethyst Anonymous Date: 2005.01.30 - 05:47AM Title: Chapter 6: Unspoken Wishes

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UPDATE!!!!!! I LOVE THIS STORY!!!

Author's Response: Brilliant! I'm glad you are enjoying the first in my two part "Dream" series...at least it's two-part for now. I'm working on the sequel to this one at moment. I'll update soon. If you are interested, I'm also posting another story to this site. It's also post OOTP and is the first thing I've ever written. It's called A New Beginning. It of course includes H/G and a R/H thread as well. It's a romance, but includes more...If you decide to check it out, I hope you'll offer your feedback. Thanks for your readership!



Reviewer: nita Anonymous Date: 2005.01.30 - 01:16AM Title: Chapter 6: Unspoken Wishes

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hey this story is really good! I hope you update real soon

Author's Response: Thanks very much! I will be posting a new chapter very soon! I have one other story that I'm planning to post at the moment. It's called A New Beginning...also post OOTP. The first couple chapters should be up today sometime.If you decide to check it out, please let me know what you think. I appreciate reader feedback and always respond to every review. Thanks again for the post. Happy reading!




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