Reviews For Watching the Daughter of Heroes
Reviewer: griffindorechicky101 Signed Date: 2007.04.02 - 07:16PM Title: The Child draco her father waho not expecting tath at all Reviewer: ginnyp_harryp Signed Date: 2006.10.15 - 02:24PM Title: The Child confused Reviewer: Raiining Signed Date: 2005.03.03 - 02:59PM Title: The Child you know, I really really liked it. Mind you, I enjoy some good Ginny/Draco fics too, but the second person narrative was good.
reading on then ... Reviewer: DazedMarauder Anonymous Date: 2005.03.01 - 06:00PM Title: The Child Ok, I thought it only fair that I review for every chapter (as I know that I would have liked that for myself). You really are a talented author. I really want to steal your muse. I wonder who that Slytherin boy is...
Insquequo terminus,
amanda Reviewer: Potterfan4ever Anonymous Date: 2005.03.01 - 05:31PM Title: The Child ::GASPS:: Oh no! THAT NAME!... Sorry.
Anyway, this review will have to be short, as I'm supposed to be meeting my friend at the gym.. but then I saw you in the "recently added" section and I was like, "I HAVE TO READ IT!"
Er.. okay, well the letter was awesome. It was very.. Draco.
But seriously, in all honesty, the name was what got me thinking. Bronwen? I'd consider that child abuse, I would. But then again, I've secretly sworn to myself to name my first daughter Hermione.. ::clears throat::
I'm one of those people that love nicknames.. so I was thinking about what could possibly be a nickname for that.. I'm thinking Bren.
Anyway.. I loved this chapter, as well as the rest of your work.. But now I have to go, because my friend is calling my cell phone to see where I am, and I haven't even left the house yet.. Oops. :)
signed,
Samantha
::tens stars, naturally:: Reviewer: Just Marie Signed Date: 2005.02.15 - 07:53PM Title: The Child First I would like to say that I absolutely hate stuff written in second person, but I liked your other fics so I persevered, and it was definitely worth reading :)
I too am very hesitant about the Ginny/Draco thing, so I eagerly await your back story to prove me wrong :P
I was a little disappointed at the fact that her Slytherin managed not only to sneak into Gryffindor Tower, but up the stairs without tripping off the klaxon. I imagine you have an idea as to how, but an explanation would have slowed the story down... without one, though, it seems like a bit of thumbing your nose at canon. Reviewer: Potterfan4ever Anonymous Date: 2005.02.12 - 02:39PM Title: The Child ::Gasps:: I LOVED IT! You don't see many of these lately, where Ginny and Draco had a "thing" but then it all fell apart.
I also like how you have Harry and Ginny in love. Though this is a Harry/Ginny archive, I've too often seen stories where Ginny only marries Harry for comfort and protection after Draco leaves her.
I loved how Harry told their daughter that it was okay if she was in Slytherin.. that was the first clue for me that something interesting was afoot.. I'm glad that Harry loves her, and is as supportive of her as he is with his other children.
Now, unless I'm mistaken, I didn't read the daughter's name anywhere. Did I miss that, or will it show up in later chapters?
Also, I'm wondering what happened to the Gryffindor boy who she beat out for the Seeker position.
Like you said, there are plot holes, and hopefully we'll see them filled in in future chapters! ;)
Wonderful story, if I didn't mention it before. :) 10 stars so far.
signed,
Samantha Reviewer: amulder Anonymous Date: 2005.02.12 - 01:14PM Title: The Child Hullo,
I find the style of writing to be very innovative. It is an interesting way to tell a quick moving story. It is also interesting to consider just what kind of a life Harry and Ginny's children will lead. I recall how at the beginning of book 1 Dumbledore thought it best that Harry grow up away from the limelight. Many of us thought that Harry would possibly have grown up to be an arrogant berk like Draco was in book 1. So yes, what *will* it be like for the next generation? Will Harry and Ginny's children grow up as arrogant children used to privelege?
But then the content of the plot... I won't say "enraged", but yes I am disappointed that you would pair up Ginny with Draco, even if only temporary. Read the books, and ignore what Tom Felton looks like in the movies. Draco Malfoy is a spoiled, self-centred, arrogant, twit. I don't think JKR has ever given him *any* redeeming qualities. I don't think JKR has *ever* written Ginny having anything nice to say about Draco. And finally, this is the son of the man who gave her the diary. And the son gives every evidence of striving to follow in his father's groveling footsteps.
And so, the answer is "no". No I do not think that Ginny would ever willingly enter into a relationship with Draco Death-Nibbler Malfoy.
Rare is the story that successfully convinces me of redeemed!Draco.
best wishes, and thanks for sharing.
Reviewer: kjpzak Signed Date: 2005.02.12 - 10:03AM Title: The Child Wow! I loved the voice - it tells of a strong woman. My heart breaks for the hurt Harry and Ginny had to overcome. Great story twists. I'm looking forward to the other pov's. Well done! Reviewer: trouble(too lazy to sign in) Anonymous Date: 2005.02.12 - 04:54AM Title: The Child I really really liked this story. It's sharp, fast, controversial and very very good. Can't wait for the next few installments. | |||||||
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