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Reviewer: mysinger Signed Date: 2012.04.23 - 01:13AM Title: Touch

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Brilliant!



Reviewer: ginnyweasley777 Signed Date: 2009.04.15 - 02:14PM Title: Touch

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love the story



Reviewer: DebbieO Signed Date: 2007.12.25 - 01:05AM Title: Touch

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Ha! I knew all they had to do was touch. The other characters were a bit thick, but I enjoyed the chapter anyway.

Author's Response: Yeah...in hindsight there are a few issues I'd change, but I chalk that up to a learning experience and appreciate you for sticking with me through it all!



Reviewer: Sssith Signed Date: 2006.03.24 - 11:39PM Title: Touch

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Finally caught up. I have been enjoying your two stories over the week or two. Nicely done and well thought out. Only complaint was the whole Malfoy kidnapping and DD being a dense old man. From your author notes it seems that people have already given you some grief about that. I must say it warms my heart to think of Snape in Azkaban. Looking forward to the conclusion.

Author's Response: lol - yes, that part did inspire some discussion. But that's okay - that's how you learn, right? :)



Reviewer: Kathy Anonymous Date: 2006.03.20 - 10:41PM Title: Touch

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Yay! They're starting to heal! Wonderful! Now: HURRY UP AND UPDATE! I WANT TO SEE HOW IT ENDS!

Author's Response: lol - I'm just back from vacation and will get right on it!



Reviewer: amblewat Signed Date: 2006.03.10 - 12:35PM Title: Touch

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Wonderful job! Keep up the great work and update when you can.

Author's Response: Thank you!



Reviewer: Xfactor Anonymous Date: 2006.03.06 - 10:24AM Title: Touch

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Such an emtionally powerful chapter with all of their visitors talking to them! I'm going to go nuts waiting for the next chapter. I understand that it is a WIP and perfection takes time but please, please, please, let it be speedy perfection. Anyway, keep up the great work.

Author's Response: Thank you! The next chapter is almost ready. It will be up soon, I promise!



Reviewer: colpinky Signed Date: 2006.03.05 - 08:21PM Title: Touch

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I've enjoyed your story, and I'm looking forward to the next chapter. Keep up the good work.

Author's Response: Thank you!



Reviewer: potter widow Signed Date: 2006.03.05 - 04:38PM Title: Touch

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Holy Cow!!!!!!!!!!!!!! That was perfect. The way you wrote Fred and George was beyond perfect cannon. I love the way you conveyed so much info thru the visits. Your writing was very clear and the descriptions beautiful. The change in the pair was so small, and underplayed only to make it scream at you. You have done an incredible job with this chapter. I can't wait for the mext one. Are you going to do an epilogue as well? Congratulations, you have just outdone your best work with this chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
< br>Author's Response: lol - I don't think I've ever received "Holy Cow!" in a review. :) I loved this chapter. It was one of those that just wrote itself (with a little help from my beta.) Glad you liked it!



Reviewer: Mara Angel Anonymous Date: 2006.03.04 - 10:00PM Title: Touch

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Sweet and so beautiful... so simple...

Author's Response: Thank you!



Reviewer: Wolfs_Scream Signed Date: 2006.03.04 - 05:21PM Title: Touch

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Heh -- I wondered how soon someone would figure out that Harry & Ginny needed physical contact. :-} And Moody's characterisation was brilliant! :-) Oh -- one oddball typo: I hope the word meant in conjunction with the spa in the Witch Weekly article was "regimen," not "regiment." :-} All in all, very nice & well done.

Author's Response: Yeah - a little slow on the uptake, but they got there. Thanks for the catch on the typo, too! Glad you liked it!



Reviewer: Sibling Creature Signed Date: 2006.03.04 - 11:24AM Title: Touch

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*smiles* a heartening ending to the chapter. :-) Considering the nature of the magic involved though 'm surprised it took so long for someone to work out what the problem was.

Author's Response: Thank you! For that length of time, bonds aren't common. Prior to Harry and Ginny, it had been many years since someone had bonded (Catarina and Tom) so not much is known about them. Or at least that was my resaoning... :)



Reviewer: bengpotter31 Signed Date: 2006.03.04 - 09:46AM Title: Touch

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Ooh, what a great chapter. Good angst and drama. I've loved this story and the plot since Ancient Magic came out. Great job. Please update soon.

Author's Response: Thank you! The next (and last! gulp!) chapter is almost done. Stay tuned!



Reviewer: seshhat Signed Date: 2006.03.04 - 04:25AM Title: Touch

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I love this story so much, and you never disappoint with each chapter. I'm sad that the story is soon to come to an end, but as soon as that last chapter goes up, I plan to sit down and have a marathon read from start to finish!! Thankyou for sharing your great creativity and talent for writing!!

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm sad too. I might have to join you in that marathon read through! :)



Reviewer: LILY 101 Anonymous Date: 2006.03.03 - 10:07PM Title: Touch

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OHH I FOUND YOU HERE TO THAT'S THREE NOW! Mugglenet, wizerdtales, and here! Please update soon because this is one of my fave's!

Author's Response: Yes, you did! :) Thanks for looking!



Reviewer: PatronyBologna Signed Date: 2006.03.03 - 08:48PM Title: Touch

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Oh, there's no better way to end the week than with a box of Junior Mints and a new chapter to devour! 'Meet me in St. Mungo's' loved it! Fred and George, what will they think of next... Percy singing... I'm right along with Arthur on that one, let me know! I loved how everyone would come and visit and talk to them. It gave wonderful insight to their emotions... poor Bill. Tonks was perfect. And Arthur, very touching. I have to tell you that all the time in the hospital, (a good portion of this chapter) I was yelling at the screen, "Put them together, put them together... geez... come on!") Gotta give Ron the proper credit for bringing it to Nathan's attention, albeit with an upset stomach! And the 'limp', very funny. Brilliant chapter yet again, I'm always impressed. I'm torn, I look forward to the next chapter... but not the end. I suppose that's what hard-drives are for! lol Take care! ~Patrony :)

Author's Response: lol - yay! Nice to know I can help in making the end of the week enjoyable. You know, I debated about the length of time until they figured out what was wrong. Keeping in mind that bonds are really rare - the last one prior to H/G was Catarina and Tom, the Healers wouldn't know much about how a mediator like Ginny could heal Harry through the bond (and vice versa). Nathan was distracted by Anna and the baby. And if you remember, he was learning along with Harry and Ginny on bonding because it was his mum who was the expert. And I just loved the idea of Ron coming up with the cure. It seemed fitting. :)



Reviewer: H/G 4ever Anonymous Date: 2006.03.03 - 08:20PM Title: Touch

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Thanks for the latest chapter. Good story.

Author's Response: You're welcome! Thanks!




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