Reviews For Blood of the Heart
Reviewer: DebbieO Signed Date: 2007.12.25 - 01:05AM Title: Touch Ha! I knew all they had to do was touch. The other characters were a bit thick, but I enjoyed the chapter anyway. Reviewer: Sssith Signed Date: 2006.03.24 - 11:39PM Title: Touch Finally caught up.
I have been enjoying your two stories over the week or two. Nicely done and well thought out.
Only complaint was the whole Malfoy kidnapping and DD being a dense old man. From your author notes it seems that people have already given you some grief about that. I must say it warms my heart to think of Snape in Azkaban.
Looking forward to the conclusion. Reviewer: Kathy Anonymous Date: 2006.03.20 - 10:41PM Title: Touch Yay! They're starting to heal! Wonderful! Now: HURRY UP AND UPDATE! I WANT TO SEE HOW IT ENDS! Reviewer: amblewat Signed Date: 2006.03.10 - 12:35PM Title: Touch Wonderful job! Keep up the great work and update when you can. Reviewer: Xfactor Anonymous Date: 2006.03.06 - 10:24AM Title: Touch Such an emtionally powerful chapter with all of their visitors talking to them! I'm going to go nuts waiting for the next chapter. I understand that it is a WIP and perfection takes time but please, please, please, let it be speedy perfection.
Anyway, keep up the great work. Reviewer: colpinky Signed Date: 2006.03.05 - 08:21PM Title: Touch I've enjoyed your story, and I'm looking forward to the next chapter. Keep up the good work. Reviewer: potter widow Signed Date: 2006.03.05 - 04:38PM Title: Touch Holy Cow!!!!!!!!!!!!!! That was perfect. The way you wrote Fred and George was beyond perfect cannon. I love the way you conveyed so much info thru the visits. Your writing was very clear and the descriptions beautiful. The change in the pair was so small, and underplayed only to make it scream at you. You have done an incredible job with this chapter. I can't wait for the mext one. Are you going to do an epilogue as well? Congratulations, you have just outdone your best work with this chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Reviewer: Mara Angel Anonymous Date: 2006.03.04 - 10:00PM Title: Touch Sweet and so beautiful...
so simple... Reviewer: Wolfs_Scream Signed Date: 2006.03.04 - 05:21PM Title: Touch Heh -- I wondered how soon someone would figure out that Harry & Ginny needed physical contact. :-}
And Moody's characterisation was brilliant! :-)
Oh -- one oddball typo: I hope the word meant in conjunction with the spa in the Witch Weekly article was "regimen," not "regiment." :-}
All in all, very nice & well done. Reviewer: Sibling Creature Signed Date: 2006.03.04 - 11:24AM Title: Touch *smiles* a heartening ending to the chapter. :-)
Considering the nature of the magic involved though 'm surprised it took so long for someone to work out what the problem was.
Reviewer: bengpotter31 Signed Date: 2006.03.04 - 09:46AM Title: Touch Ooh, what a great chapter. Good angst and drama. I've loved this story and the plot since Ancient Magic came out. Great job. Please update soon. Reviewer: seshhat Signed Date: 2006.03.04 - 04:25AM Title: Touch I love this story so much, and you never disappoint with each chapter. I'm sad that the story is soon to come to an end, but as soon as that last chapter goes up, I plan to sit down and have a marathon read from start to finish!! Thankyou for sharing your great creativity and talent for writing!! Reviewer: LILY 101 Anonymous Date: 2006.03.03 - 10:07PM Title: Touch OHH I FOUND YOU HERE TO THAT'S THREE NOW! Mugglenet, wizerdtales, and here! Please update soon because this is one of my fave's! Reviewer: PatronyBologna Signed Date: 2006.03.03 - 08:48PM Title: Touch Oh, there's no better way to end the week than with a box of Junior Mints and a new chapter to devour! 'Meet me in St. Mungo's' loved it! Fred and George, what will they think of next... Percy singing... I'm right along with Arthur on that one, let me know! I loved how everyone would come and visit and talk to them. It gave wonderful insight to their emotions... poor Bill. Tonks was perfect. And Arthur, very touching. I have to tell you that all the time in the hospital, (a good portion of this chapter) I was yelling at the screen, "Put them together, put them together... geez... come on!") Gotta give Ron the proper credit for bringing it to Nathan's attention, albeit with an upset stomach! And the 'limp', very funny. Brilliant chapter yet again, I'm always impressed. I'm torn, I look forward to the next chapter... but not the end. I suppose that's what hard-drives are for! lol Take care! ~Patrony :) Reviewer: H/G 4ever Anonymous Date: 2006.03.03 - 08:20PM Title: Touch Thanks for the latest chapter. Good story. | |||||||
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