Search:

SIYE Time:8:57 on 28th March 2024
SIYE Login: no

Reviews For Blood of the Heart

Reviewer: mysinger Signed Date: 2012.04.15 - 11:49PM Title: Suspicions

starstarstarstarstar

You have done a good job of building the suspense. I am very curious about the identity of Catarina's bond. I'm probably off base, but Lucius Malfoy comes to mind or even Tom Riddle.



Reviewer: ginnyweasley777 Signed Date: 2009.04.15 - 01:29PM Title: Suspicions

starstarstarstarstar

another great chapter - very interesting



Reviewer: Artistand Signed Date: 2008.07.17 - 10:47PM Title: Suspicions

starstarstarstarhalf-star

No Review



Reviewer: ssariesen Signed Date: 2007.09.23 - 09:06PM Title: Suspicions

starstarstarstarstar

No Review



Reviewer: Getto Draco Malfoy Anonymous Date: 2005.09.25 - 12:32PM Title: Suspicions

starstarstarstarstar

Please forgive my spelling, I noticed it while reading the other reviews.

Author's Response: No worries ! Thanks for reviewing!



Reviewer: Getto Draco Malfoy Anonymous Date: 2005.09.25 - 12:22PM Title: Suspicions

starstarstarstarstar

She bonded with Tom Riddle, did'nt she!?!? I figured it out as Ginny was telling Harry about that morning- "... [he] does'nt exist anymore... seh would never forgive herself for what she had done..."

Author's Response: Yes, she did. But don't hold that against her. It was before Tom became who he became and she didn't have much of a choice - more on that comes up in later chapters...



Reviewer: David Wolfskill Anonymous Date: 2005.05.31 - 10:52PM Title: Suspicions

starstarstarstarhalf-star

This chapter works OK for me....

Author's Response: Ah, you and me both. That's the problem with transitional/informational chapters. Thanks for sticking with it!



Reviewer: YelloWitchGrl Signed Date: 2005.05.10 - 05:23PM Title: Suspicions

starstarstarstarstar

I love the interactions in this chapter. They were fun to read and the way you portrayed Nathan and Catarina, especially that bit in the begining, while funny, also bespoke of an underlying love and it is easy to see their building relationship. I am also completely confused about what is going on... I mean with what you are hiding with the bonding and I'm not even going to begin to speculate since I enjoy watching it unfold. Anyway, great job. :-)

Author's Response: Ah...kind of like that whole hynosis/possession thing, eh? :) Glad you're enjoying being confused!



Reviewer: sugarquills23 Anonymous Date: 2005.05.04 - 11:38AM Title: Suspicions

starstarstarstarstar

ARGGGHHHH!!!!! WHAT IS GOING ON? Okay, *taking a calming breath* In case you missed my subtle musings, I'm dying to know what the secret is between Dumbledore, Nathan, and Catarina concerning the Blood Bonding. Is this going to mean immortality for Harry and Ginny if they do this or something? Something of that nature would be both a blessing and a curse. There's got to be something twisted going on here though....hmmmmm I'm also curious about the parchment and the title that Harry kept reading over and over. It would be interesting to learn your take on the background of the spell that protected Harry through his mother. I'm wondering if at some point JKR will explain it further or if the details surrounding it aren't really that important in her mind. wvchemteach is wonderfully insightful btw, I always enjoy the feedback from his reviews. I've sent him a chapter for his thoughts before myself. You are in good hands with him as your beta. :)

Author's Response: Well, you know, true love is immortality in its purest form...but that being said, no, Harry and Ginny will not become immortal. I'm attempting to work in the spell that protected Harry from his mother - more will come up on that in the next chapter or so. And yes, where would this story be without wvchemteach?! I'll pass on your compliments! Thanks!



Reviewer: melindaleo Signed Date: 2005.04.28 - 08:53PM Title: Suspicions

starstarstarstarstar

Hooray for Ron, I'm so glad he came around! I'm worried about the spell and it's implications for Harry and Ginny, but I like how the two of them stick together. I liked seeing Harry trying to learn something about his mum, as well.

Author's Response: Thanks! You are so right - Harry is so much better when he is on good terms with his friends (aren't we all?!). I just couldn't see Ron staying mad for long - he might not agree, but his heart is in the right place.



Reviewer: destin4fl Signed Date: 2005.04.28 - 07:15PM Title: Suspicions

starstarstarstarstar

excellent job love the interaction between characters its amazing how easily you get us to believe their motivation and desires as always! happy b-day to your son!

Author's Response: I'm so glad to hear that it is believable - I'm always questioning if the movites are appropriate and real. Probably drives my betas batty. So, thank you for the reassurance!



Reviewer: Lourdes Anonymous Date: 2005.04.28 - 07:12PM Title: Suspicions

starstarstarstarstar

Set your mind at rest, dear author. The chapter is not choppy. It has come together beautifully. What is Catarina, Dumbledore and Nathan holding back that is making Cat ever so miserable? Maybe once she reveals whatever it is to Ginny and Harry, she will feel a lot better. A problem shared and all that. Very well done indeed.

Author's Response: You're so sweet - thank you! And that problem will come to light soon enough!



Reviewer: amblewat Anonymous Date: 2005.04.28 - 07:12PM Title: Suspicions

starstarstarstarstar

this was an excellent chapter. I'm sorry it was stressful on you. But it portrayed their emotions very well.

Author's Response: Thank you!



Reviewer: Wild Magelet Anonymous Date: 2005.04.28 - 05:40PM Title: Suspicions

starstarstarstarstar

Wow. Very intense chapter. You have me completely intrigued about the blood of the enemy, blood of the enemy's heart thing. I'm starting to wonder about who Catarina was bonded to, though, and if it's who I'm thinking, this story could take an extremely interesting turn! I'm guessing that when she said the person doesn't exist anymore, she doesn't quite mean that they're dead, but rather they've become something...else? Someone Harry and Ginny know rather well? I could be completely wrong, but you've made it fun to speculate! Looking forward to Ginny's birthday! Hopefully a good time for some H/G fluffiness? =D

Author's Response: Ah, you may be on the right track...we all have a few skeletons in our closet, don't we? And that's all I'm saying for now! :)



Reviewer: Lady of the Dragon Anonymous Date: 2005.04.28 - 05:13PM Title: Suspicions

starstarstarstarstar

Don't worry about that nagging feeling. Usually (with me at least) the chapter I'm least happy with are the best. And, in my opinion, this chapter was very good. One of your best, in fact, it isn't at all choppy! More like full of plot questions and suspence that make me want more chapters, and soon! I loved the speed and rythm (spelling?) a little faster than your usual, and Catarina and Nathans' past is becoming more and more mysterous with each passing day/chapter. Any chance Harry will come out of the cottage with a healthy addiction to books? Lol, not likelly, I know. Happy birthday to your son! Cathy

Author's Response: LOL - you are good for the ego! Thank you! When I wrote this chapter, I started getting antsy about what is to come and wanted to get there soon! Harry and a love for books...well, that wouldn't exactly be canon, would it? :) But we could always hope...



Reviewer: Been Reading Signed Date: 2005.04.28 - 05:08PM Title: Suspicions

starstarstarstarstar

Well, I for one really enjoyed this chapter. It was the kind of chapter that had me wishing the next one was already up and waiting for me. Oh the intrigue!

It was good to see Ron realizing that leaving was in Harry and Ginny's best interest, even if he doesn't like it. I'm also really enoying the relationship between Nathan and his mum. It sounds like they've been through a lot, and it's nice to see them getting closer. I have to say I think finding out who Catarina bonded with is going to bring very bad things.

I'm anxious to see what you have in store, and I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: Oh, that means so much! Thank you! Ron is a wonderful character, isn't he? So much heart - Harry is a lucky guy to have him as a friend. I'm just hoping I do their friendship justice!




../back
‘! Go To Top ‘!

Sink Into Your Eyes is hosted by Grey Media Internet Services. HARRY POTTER, characters, names and related characters are trademarks of Warner Bros. TM & © 2001-2006. Harry Potter Publishing Rights © J.K.R. Note the opinions on this site are those made by the owners. All stories(fanfiction) are owned by the author and are subject to copyright law under transformative use. Authors on this site take no compensation for their works. This site © 2003-2006 ALL RIGHTS RESERVED. Special thanks to: Aredhel, Kaz, Michelle, and Jeco for all the hard work on SIYE 1.0 and to Marta for the wonderful artwork.
Featured Artwork © 2003-2006 by Yethro.
Design and code © 2006 by SteveD3(AdminQ)
Additional coding © 2008 by melkior and Bear