Reviews For Blood of the Heart
Reviewer: hogwartsprincess Signed Date: 2007.09.03 - 12:48PM Title: Mother's Love I love the story, and your author's notes are so funny! Great work! Reviewer: Chreechree Signed Date: 2006.02.08 - 07:15PM Title: Mother's Love This was a very meaty chapter. I love a good battle scene. I don't know how Nathan is functioning. He's in such a tough spot. That had to be gut wrenching to fight on the wrong side of that battle. I like Anna a lot. I enjoy reading scenes with her. I ache for poor Molly, and I hate what this is doing to her relationship with Ginny. Graet job as always. Reviewer: Soccer Devil22 Signed Date: 2006.02.03 - 10:40PM Title: Mother's Love Ok nothing against you cause I REALLY like your story but....I still cant get over the odd felling I have knowing that you're an adult. Am I the only one who has a problem with this? I haven't looked at your reviews to see if anyone else has mentioned it but like I said its just....odd. Great story by the way! 10/10 Reviewer: destin4fl Anonymous Date: 2005.07.28 - 04:05PM Title: Mother's Love awsome that was your best action scene to date, getting better and better! also love the interactions between ginny and harry! Reviewer: YelloWitchGrl Signed Date: 2005.06.23 - 01:58AM Title: Mother's Love so good and I am so sorry this took me so long! I have been away from a computer and I don't even have any corrections for you, just a "great job" and "please God let me find time to read the next chapter soon" :-D Reviewer: sugarquills23 Anonymous Date: 2005.06.22 - 08:56AM Title: Mother's Love Wonderful chapter! The battle in Hogsmeade was unexpected and well written! I know this is probably terrible, but when Stewart was injured it was a bit of relief. For some reason I don't trust him. Perhaps he's not outwardly a danger, but somehow I feel he could be tricked, bewitched, or scared into somehow betraying the Weasley twins as well as the others to the DE. I gasped out loud when Bill hit the floor...He's one of my favorite Weasleys' and Ginny's too. It would be a devasting blow to lose him for her.
Good work on tying several genres into one with this chapter. You melted action, drama, and even some touching moments into one cohesive piece. The Fat Lady interupting Harry and Ginny was a cute addition as well. Excellent.
Now, how long will it take for Harry to find out that there was in fact some research remaining from his mother. He was already looking into that very thing at the cottage. It seems only right that he would gain possesion of that. After all, it's one of the few remaining things from his mother and truly represents her love for him. I know the order will need to know about it, but I think ultimately it belongs to Harry. Good work! Now, onto the next installment. Reviewer: Lilith_Phoenix Anonymous Date: 2005.06.15 - 08:59AM Title: Mother's Love i love Chehalis. is there any kneazle in him? please update sooooon! Reviewer: Lady of the Dragon Anonymous Date: 2005.06.14 - 09:42PM Title: Mother's Love Action! This battle was, to say the least, unexpected! And after your answer I actually thought that Anna was safe for the time being! Silly me, lol. Poor Nathan, he has some serious explaining to do! The poor guy always seems to get the worst thrown at him... Just when I thought he would have a bit of happiness!
I loved that you made Harry Head Boy, as much as I don't see him a prefect, I see him as Head Boy.
What happened to Lily's parchment during the battle? I have a feeling that if that falls into the wrong hands the concequences would be dire indeed (how cliche does that sound, lol?)!
Anyway, loved the chapter, and as always, i can't wait for more!
Cathy Reviewer: wvchemteach Signed Date: 2005.06.14 - 05:02PM Title: Mother's Love That chapter had it all...a bit of fluff...some drama...some mystery...and fireworks...truly a marvelous chapter. Reviewer: amblewat Signed Date: 2005.06.14 - 04:50PM Title: Mother's Love what a wonderful job. I can see my step daugther being just like that in 10 years. She is eight by the way. The fight scene was intense. Anna is in for a shock when she awakens. I know she recognized Nathan and she thinks the worst! Reviewer: David Wolfskill Anonymous Date: 2005.06.14 - 02:02PM Title: Mother's Love Still quite good. Should be interesting to find out what Lily wrote. And Snape's double-cross (re: the potion that only alleviates symptoms) is an intruiging twist. Reviewer: Been Reading Signed Date: 2005.06.14 - 12:57PM Title: Mother's Love Things just keep getting more interesting! It's hard to believe we've just now reached the start of the term. I feel so bad for Nathan, I don't know how he'll be able to survive being a double agent. He, unline Snape, actually does have a heart! I'm very curious as to what will come of Lily's research. Wonderful job! I look forward to the next chapter! Reviewer: Muggle Witch Anonymous Date: 2005.06.14 - 12:02PM Title: Mother's Love I really like Anna. She is a really strong character. I lover your Harry and Ginny as well. You are doing a great job! Reviewer: Quilliver Anonymous Date: 2005.06.14 - 11:56AM Title: Mother's Love A nice old Molly-Ginny dingdong is always good news. Excellent battle - may the force be with you indeed! He's a keeper that one. I always look forward to your updates - Its cheered an otherwise rain-sodden London afternoon very nicely. Reviewer: melindaleo Signed Date: 2005.06.14 - 10:51AM Title: Mother's Love Grin, glad to tip the scales - the Molly and Ginny sparring was my favortie part. I think Ginny took a huge step towards adulthood in that scene. I'm very curious to see how Molly will take the attack on Bill, Fred, and George - spreading out her concern could take some of the heat off Ginny, or it could simply make it worse. I'll be interested to see where you go. | |||||||
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