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Reviews For Blood of the Heart

Reviewer: potterfan2008 Signed Date: 2018.02.26 - 06:18AM Title: Options

I love the conversation between Dobby and Harry at the ball. The revenge on Malfoy is brilliant!! Ron is once again being an ass. Not at all a fan of Quidditch captain Ron. He's not that good of a player and he's never really displayed his vaunted tactical skills anywhere but the chess board. He's certainly not a leader. Harry should be Quidditch captain. He's a much better player, he's only lost one match, and he's a much, much better leader.



Reviewer: potterfan2008 Signed Date: 2017.02.16 - 02:34AM Title: Options

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Dumbledore is very manipulative - he's not even consulting with Harry and Ginny before offering them up as lambs for the slaughter. I don't understand why Harry and Ginny put up with Ron treating both of them like mentally challenged children. He repeatedly acts likes a total ass and they forgive him because 'he cares'? That is crazy. I love my siblings, but I would never allow my brother to treat me so poorly with the extremely flimsy excuse that he cares so much - esp with so much evidence that he doesn't really (COS, POA). Ron needs to grow up and fast. Loving someone doesn't give you the right to invade their lives and run everything. Why would Ron and Hermione even have a say in when they did the bonding? It has nothing to do with them.



Reviewer: ginnyweasley777 Signed Date: 2009.04.15 - 01:58PM Title: Options

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interesting ideas going on with the blood bonds and the ancient magic



Reviewer: ssariesen Signed Date: 2007.09.24 - 07:16PM Title: Options

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Reviewer: YelloWitchGrl Signed Date: 2006.10.21 - 09:04AM Title: Options

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*dies* Not about you but I've been trying for the past, oh I don't know, 9 months! to finish this story and... well you know what it's been like. I simply haven't had time. So here I am, no kid, at my friend's house this morning and she's still asleep and I get to read!! BUT I had to scroll back 10 pages in reviews to figure out where the heck I had left off and goodness, that is truly pathetic on my part. So here I go again.

Onto the chapter: beautifully done, as per your usual standards. I also appreciated the fact that for once Nathan and Molly could find a common ground. Something I truly enjoy is the humor, which has been loads of fun for this chapter, especially when GInny socked Ron.

...and now my friend is awake and I only got one chapter read. Doesn't that just figure? Some day, though, I will finish it! :-D

Author's Response: lol - no worries! Thank you for returning. I'm amazed you have time now with everything on your plate! Don't worry - it's not going anywhere. :)



Reviewer: sugarquills23 Anonymous Date: 2005.09.20 - 09:28AM Title: Options

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Another great chapter! It won't be long before Voldemort knows what they've done. I look forward to seeing if they can come up with an alternative to the potion. Loved reading about Malfoy being hung out to dry! :)

Author's Response: Hee, hee - Malfoy deserved that and so much more. Part of me wishes I had been there in person to witness it... :)



Reviewer: Boomer Anonymous Date: 2005.08.21 - 12:51AM Title: Options

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wow ur really good!!!

Author's Response: Thank you!



Reviewer: dboyer28 Anonymous Date: 2005.08.19 - 09:41AM Title: Options

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If this was Book 7, I'd be happy! I can't wait for the next chapter(s)!!! This is by far my favorite story!

Author's Response: Oh, don't you do my ego good! Thank you!



Reviewer: Danielle Anonymous Date: 2005.08.18 - 08:16PM Title: Options

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i finally finshed what you had done and they are great!! Good job!! i can't wait untill the next chapters come out!!

Author's Response: LOL - thank you! Next chapters are with my spit and polish beta. As soon as I get them back, I'll start posting again.



Reviewer: Wolfs_Scream Signed Date: 2005.08.10 - 03:33PM Title: Options

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Very well done!

Author's Response: Thank you very much!



Reviewer: HBPfanatic Anonymous Date: 2005.08.05 - 12:53PM Title: Options

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This is easily the best fanfic I have ever had the pleasure to read, thank you for writing such a good story.

Author's Response: *blushes madly*! You are so kind! Thank you for reading!



Reviewer: melindaleo Signed Date: 2005.08.04 - 06:16AM Title: Options

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That was a very satisfying Quidditch match! I liked it. I'm extremely put out with the Order making these decisions without even a thought of if Harry and Ginny are willing. As far as I can see, the risks far outweigh the benefits and I'd love to see Ginny simply stand up for herself and say No. I'd get great satisfaction form Snape's reaction, in partiicular.

Author's Response: Yay - thanks! I felt much like JKR when I got done writing the Quidditch match - it's over. Phew! The Order is being very high-handed but their goal is to do whatever it takes, be it right or wrong, and this certainly doesn't bode well. Thanks!



Reviewer: Sibling Creature Anonymous Date: 2005.08.04 - 03:11AM Title: Options

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Nice game, though it will be interesting to see how Malfoy will respond.... I certainly hope they find another option, becuase I don't like the one presented at all. I'm liking the effects of the bond so far... it will be interesting to see how it develops.

Author's Response: And yes, Malfoy won't let that go, will he?...The effects of the bond are really fun to write just because they are so new to H/G. I hope you continue to enjoy them!



Reviewer: PatronyBologna Signed Date: 2005.08.04 - 01:55AM Title: Options

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First off, I love the scritch,scritch,scritch. So often I'm the one bonking her head and nearly falling out of my chair to hone in on scritchy little noises. I liked the intensity of Snape/Borgin/DD. I could feel the tension. You have me torn between thinking the potion is a good idea or a really bad one. As I see it, it could go either way... maybe a last minute breakthrough will be just what they need. Ginny will be of age? That could have some interesting consequences!! Enjoyed the Quidditch scenes. Wouldn't we all like to literally hang our own Malfoy's out to dry. H/G is very sweet. I love the descriptions of Ginny applying the paste and Harry checking her hand after practice. Rons' anger over the whole thing was just right, good thing he has Hermione to calm him down. I hope he was teasing about being more concerned about the match, though, at least that's how I took it. Ron couldn't get all mushy on his sister... Overall, as usual, loved it. I understand the drawbacks of not thinking it's good enough and being displeased with whats written, so here's a high five just for good measure to ease your worries.

Author's Response: LOL - yes, the whole bonking the head business was written from first hand experience. :) Of course Ron was teasing - there isn't a stronger family bond out there than that between the Weasleys which means great love and lots of room for ribbing! Thanks for the high five - I needed that!



Reviewer: Been Reading Signed Date: 2005.08.03 - 10:30PM Title: Options

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As always, wonderful job! I don't like the potion idea, so I really hope they can figure something else out. I love the H/G tenderness... they're really just so sweet! I have a bad feeling about them registering. That'll just be a nice sample of the blood, waiting for someone to steal it. Snape seems a little too sold on that idea for me... Can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: I'm so glad you liked it - thank you! There were parts of this chapter that were rather tough to write and I wasn't totally pleased with, so it's wonderful to hear you liked it. Of course, the H/G tenderness just seems to write itself. And Snape does seem a little too sold on the whole idea, doesn't he? Thanks for reading!




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