Search:

SIYE Time:14:47 on 29th March 2024
SIYE Login: no

Reviews For Blood of the Heart

Reviewer: ginnyweasley777 Signed Date: 2009.04.15 - 02:03PM Title: Holes

starstarstarstarstar

love it



Reviewer: DudleyDemented Signed Date: 2005.09.20 - 03:59PM Title: Holes

starstarstarstarstar

Very nice...go neville go. I patiently wait for more.

Author's Response: Okay, you win! Go, Neville, go! I laughed out loud. Thanks!



Reviewer: Wolfs_Scream Signed Date: 2005.09.19 - 11:08PM Title: Holes

starstarstarstarstar

OK; I loved the Nathan/Anna interchange as he was supposed to be unpacking & shelving books.... :-) I may be somewhat on the dull-witted side, but I got rather confused starting with the first part of the scene in Nathan's office. The first sentence says they (Neville & Joanna, I gather) did *not* have a bond. The next says taht Neville *did* have one. That sounds as if Neville has a bond, but not with Joanna -- therefore, presumably, someone else. But the rest of the chapter goes on as if Neville & Joanna *could* have a bond, if they choose to take the step. Is the initial sentence merely stating that they did not *yet* have a bond? Or maybe I'm just completely confused.... :-} Ginny, why must you trust communications that are, at best, insufficiently authenticated? In a time of war, no less??!? CONSTANT VIGILANCE!

Author's Response: Excellent point! I'm not sure anyone would dare call you dim witted! Ever! A well placed could will clear the confusion up. You are correct in that Neville and Joanna COULD have a bond. These things are in my mind so long that it's always nice to know when they don't make sense on paper! And yes, Ginny - tut, tut. :)



Reviewer: fritz42 Signed Date: 2005.09.19 - 10:32PM Title: Holes

starstarstarstarstar

Loved this chapter. The scene between Anna and Nathan, how cute and touching with the rings. And Nelville and Joanna--can't wait to see how their relationship develops. What a good match those two are. And this ending--I am creeped out. Where will you take us the next chapter? Can't wait to find out.

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so glad to hear you think Neville and Joanna are well matched - to me, they certainly are! Stay tuned!



Reviewer: oscar Anonymous Date: 2005.09.19 - 06:28PM Title: Holes

starstarstarstarstar

this is cool!! love the cliff hanger!! Great job!!

Author's Response: Thank you! Glad you thought it was cool!



Reviewer: Sibling Creature Anonymous Date: 2005.09.19 - 03:42PM Title: Holes

starstarstarstarstar

I loved the interaction between Anna and Nathan. loved the scene with the books. :-) I guess it came as something of a shock for Neville and Joanna, but I suspect its just a matter of time before they'll be comfortable enough with each other to decide to go ahead with it, and I've no doubt that they'll end up bonded in love, just as Harry and Ginny are :-) Oh dear, it does look like Ginny may have walked into some kind of trap... heres to hoping she manages to walk back out, though of course I doubt its going to be that simple... I look forward to finding out what happens next

Author's Response: Yes, it was a shock for Joanna and Neville, to just start really liking each other and then pow! A trap? Well, not every chapter can be a holiday, can it? :)



Reviewer: PatronyBologna Signed Date: 2005.09.19 - 03:07PM Title: Holes

starstarstarstarstar

Well, first off, thanks for letting me know when this posts, as I'm always eager to find out what happens next. The newly restored Mr. and Mrs. Borgin was sweet, the treasures they have kept from the past tells it all. Well done! Neville and Joanna... hmm, I want to be okay with this, but have this 'gut' feeling that things are going to get dicy and not in a 'happy ending' sort of way. Hopefully I'm delusional! G/H... and darn that Voldemort! You know I'm slow on the uptake, but 'dying a little' doesn't sound good, possible... in a 'wizard' sort of way, but definately not good. There was one little glitch I had... where Ginny was saying that she was beginning to like being cranky... I think the words need to be flipped around to read better. But I'm in no way a grammar freak, so I could be wrong and probably am! lol Anna... torture is a speciality of yours, isn't it! I'm amazed at how fast you are able to write and post, the quality is wonderful and the story, as you can tell, keeps me and I'm sure legions of others coming back. Looking forward... ~Patrony :)

Author's Response: Ah - so you are a "for once, I was getting things done" kind of person. :) For you, I've flipped them. It does read better! And, believe me when I tell you that I LOVE happy endings. Does that sooth the delusional side of you any?



Reviewer: Lilith_Phoenix Anonymous Date: 2005.09.19 - 02:22PM Title: Holes

starstarstarstarstar

Whats has happened? Please, I must know. (anna'a pregnant) *Lilith*

Author's Response: LOL - (yes, Anna's STILL pregnant.) What has happened? Well, Ginny is now in Anna's cottage...Anna's very dark, cold cottage... :)



Reviewer: wvchemteach Anonymous Date: 2005.09.19 - 02:22PM Title: Holes

starstarstarstarstar

Ooohhh...the suspense...DUM! DUM! DUM! What is going to happen to Ginny? I thought the handling of introducing Joanna and Neville to the bond was wonderfully well done....properly angsty...but not drawn out. I like the omninous clues to Ginny's fate that were interspersed throughout the chapter as well. I can hardly wait for Chapter 23.

Author's Response: *giggle snort* Dennis, you are evil.




../back
‘! Go To Top ‘!

Sink Into Your Eyes is hosted by Grey Media Internet Services. HARRY POTTER, characters, names and related characters are trademarks of Warner Bros. TM & © 2001-2006. Harry Potter Publishing Rights © J.K.R. Note the opinions on this site are those made by the owners. All stories(fanfiction) are owned by the author and are subject to copyright law under transformative use. Authors on this site take no compensation for their works. This site © 2003-2006 ALL RIGHTS RESERVED. Special thanks to: Aredhel, Kaz, Michelle, and Jeco for all the hard work on SIYE 1.0 and to Marta for the wonderful artwork.
Featured Artwork © 2003-2006 by Yethro.
Design and code © 2006 by SteveD3(AdminQ)
Additional coding © 2008 by melkior and Bear