Reviews For Blood of the Heart
Reviewer: DudleyDemented Signed Date: 2005.09.20 - 03:59PM Title: Holes Very nice...go neville go. I patiently wait for more. Reviewer: Wolfs_Scream Signed Date: 2005.09.19 - 11:08PM Title: Holes OK; I loved the Nathan/Anna interchange as he was supposed to be unpacking & shelving books.... :-)
I may be somewhat on the dull-witted side, but I got rather confused starting with the first part of the scene in Nathan's office. The first sentence says they (Neville & Joanna, I gather) did *not* have a bond. The next says taht Neville *did* have one. That sounds as if Neville has a bond, but not with Joanna -- therefore, presumably, someone else. But the rest of the chapter goes on as if Neville & Joanna *could* have a bond, if they choose to take the step. Is the initial sentence merely stating that they did not *yet* have a bond? Or maybe I'm just completely confused.... :-}
Ginny, why must you trust communications that are, at best, insufficiently authenticated? In a time of war, no less??!? CONSTANT VIGILANCE! Reviewer: fritz42 Signed Date: 2005.09.19 - 10:32PM Title: Holes Loved this chapter. The scene between Anna and Nathan, how cute and touching with the rings. And Nelville and Joanna--can't wait to see how their relationship develops. What a good match those two are. And this ending--I am creeped out. Where will you take us the next chapter? Can't wait to find out. Reviewer: oscar Anonymous Date: 2005.09.19 - 06:28PM Title: Holes this is cool!! love the cliff hanger!! Great job!! Reviewer: Sibling Creature Anonymous Date: 2005.09.19 - 03:42PM Title: Holes I loved the interaction between Anna and Nathan. loved the scene with the books. :-)
I guess it came as something of a shock for Neville and Joanna, but I suspect its just a matter of time before they'll be comfortable enough with each other to decide to go ahead with it, and I've no doubt that they'll end up bonded in love, just as Harry and Ginny are :-)
Oh dear, it does look like Ginny may have walked into some kind of trap... heres to hoping she manages to walk back out, though of course I doubt its going to be that simple...
I look forward to finding out what happens next Reviewer: PatronyBologna Signed Date: 2005.09.19 - 03:07PM Title: Holes Well, first off, thanks for letting me know when this posts, as I'm always eager to find out what happens next. The newly restored Mr. and Mrs. Borgin was sweet, the treasures they have kept from the past tells it all. Well done! Neville and Joanna... hmm, I want to be okay with this, but have this 'gut' feeling that things are going to get dicy and not in a 'happy ending' sort of way. Hopefully I'm delusional! G/H... and darn that Voldemort! You know I'm slow on the uptake, but 'dying a little' doesn't sound good, possible... in a 'wizard' sort of way, but definately not good. There was one little glitch I had... where Ginny was saying that she was beginning to like being cranky... I think the words need to be flipped around to read better. But I'm in no way a grammar freak, so I could be wrong and probably am! lol Anna... torture is a speciality of yours, isn't it! I'm amazed at how fast you are able to write and post, the quality is wonderful and the story, as you can tell, keeps me and I'm sure legions of others coming back. Looking forward... ~Patrony :) Reviewer: Lilith_Phoenix Anonymous Date: 2005.09.19 - 02:22PM Title: Holes Whats has happened? Please, I must know.
(anna'a pregnant)
*Lilith* Reviewer: wvchemteach Anonymous Date: 2005.09.19 - 02:22PM Title: Holes Ooohhh...the suspense...DUM! DUM! DUM! What is going to happen to Ginny?
I thought the handling of introducing Joanna and Neville to the bond was wonderfully well done....properly angsty...but not drawn out.
I like the omninous clues to Ginny's fate that were interspersed throughout the chapter as well.
I can hardly wait for Chapter 23. | |||||||
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