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Reviews For Blood of the Heart

Reviewer: ginnyweasley777 Signed Date: 2009.04.15 - 02:05PM Title: Simple

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another great chapter



Reviewer: DebbieO Signed Date: 2007.12.23 - 09:08PM Title: Simple

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This story is amazing. I love all your original characters. Particularly Anna's clumsiness and habit of saying private things aloud. Joanna is sweet and fun and Nathan is wonderful. I loved Catarina too, and was sorry she had to die. This is just great writing.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I know original characters in JKR's world aren't everyone's bag, but I'm thrilled to hear you liked mine. I couldn't have written them without such a wonderfully made world in the first place!



Reviewer: H/G4ever Anonymous Date: 2005.10.10 - 09:38AM Title: Simple

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I've really enjoyed reading your two companion stories about Harry and Ginny and their blood bond. Of course, I am now anticipating more, so I hope your home life is calm with the kids in school and your husband keeps his "Star Wars" encouragement up. I became obessessed with the H/G fanficton after reading HBP. You have really made it more enjoyable. I like your idea of the blood bond, since it reflects a lot of the reality of a couple in true love. Keep up the good work. I'm glad you didn't write about anyone unbinding or healing Malfoy and his cronies. I prefer to think of them still bound up and in pain. The Neville/ Joanna relationship is novel, but slightly distracting from the HarryGinny/RonHermoinie interaction.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! Homelife with a two year old is always fun, isn't it?! You are not the only one who has found Neville/Joanna distracting. They continue to pop up - more in the next chapter, but do fade back down again following that. Thanks!



Reviewer: Been Reading Signed Date: 2005.10.09 - 05:17PM Title: Simple

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Well, I've been in a reading funk since HBP, and there's nothing like an obscene amount of homework to catch me back up! I love Joanna and Neville. You have such a gift to make me care about OCs as much as canon characters. To be honest, I like Neville/Joanna more than Ron/Hermione, but I've never been the world's biggest Hermione fan... she just comes in handy to have around! I'm really excited to see how everything is going to play out!

Author's Response: LOL - it's all about priorities, isn't it? :) I'm glad you like Joanna/Neville - they've drawn mixed reviews across the board and I learn from both sides! Hermione is handy to have a round, but to be honest, I find her a little hard to read and write sometimes, too. Thanks for sticking with it - good luck on that homework!



Reviewer: oscar Anonymous Date: 2005.10.05 - 07:40PM Title: Simple

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i loved the new chapter. keep them coming!!

Author's Response: Thank you! Check back next Monday.



Reviewer: Xfactor Anonymous Date: 2005.10.04 - 09:23AM Title: Simple

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I love this fic! You are a wonderful author. Keep up the great work and, please, update soon.

Author's Response: Thank you! I try to update on Mondays. Stay tuned



Reviewer: amblewat Anonymous Date: 2005.10.03 - 07:59PM Title: Simple

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that was great. Well done. I'm so sorry for not reviewing sooner! I have been reading.

Author's Response: No worries at all! I'm glad you're still enjoying it. Thanks for checking in!



Reviewer: PatronyBologna Signed Date: 2005.10.03 - 02:37PM Title: Simple

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l'd hate to be in Draco's shoes when Daddy Lucius comes home. Loved the scene with Anna and the boys and all the girlfriend stuff. I love how she is so easy going and comfortable with them to bring up such a subject and that they seemed to accept her. Oooh, things got a bit um, heated in the room of requirement. Fred and George, always looking out for Ginny... and Ron! Ron needed a good snogging and I'm glad Hermione took matters into her own hands. H/G bond-- it's a complicated thing, isn't it, but I pretty sure I understand it or at least what Hermione was trying to explain. (Remembering tidbits from previous chapters) Are we going to see more Legillimency between Harry/Anna or is Harry going to sharpen those skills? It could be 'useful'... Joanna and Neville, I'm excited that he was the one who accepted their bond first and brought it up with her, it shows that he's the 'stand-up' kinda guy we all know that he is. I've never been caught kissing a boy by my mother... and I'm not sure that if I ever had been, I'd be able of proper thought. Good thing those Belvin women are so stubborn!! Lovely all around, it's nice to have a break from the gloom and doom that is Lord Voldemort and the war, I've been extremely busy as of late and my 'online' time is very limited, but I do make time for your story and look forward to my next furlough and the next chapter! Thanks ~Patrony :)

Author's Response: Go Hermione, eh? :) That legillimency business...yes, well, you know, funny you mention that. I touch on it in future chapters. I admit, it went by the wayside a bit, regretfully so. I love thinking of Neville as a 'stand-up' kind of guy! He so totally is! Thank you so much for making time for this tale - I know how much time family takes up and I really appreciate you spending some of your precious free time here. Take care!



Reviewer: Sibling Creature Anonymous Date: 2005.10.03 - 11:48AM Title: Simple

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FWIW I've quite enjoyed reading about the characters you've been writing about. :-) You write your characters so vividly that I'm finding myself just as absorbed in Anna and Nathan's story and Joanna and Neville's story as I am in Harry and Ginny's story... As you may have gathered from my previous reviews I love the way your characters interact.There's usually one or two exchanges that I especially enjoy though, and in this chapter it was this one: (though I guess its only really funny when taken in context) "We, uh, we wanted to tell you," Neville said, "we're going to do the bonding ceremony." "Really?" Ginny breathed. Joanna snorted. "Really," Neville replied rolling his eyes.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I love my characters, too, and am glad you do as well. My goal is for them to live happily with canon, not take over. :) And I always love it when you quote my lines back - I have my favorites, including the one you picked out! Thanks!



Reviewer: wvchemteach Signed Date: 2005.10.03 - 09:31AM Title: Simple

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Oi...I caught some brit-picking mistakes we missed...as one of your beta-readers I need to apologize. I like this chapter...it goes a long way to develop Neville and Joanna...and highlights the differences between Harry, Ron, and Neville and why each of the girls love their man. I have to say I wouldn't want to be Draco right about now, after Lucius paid for his mistakes. I liked how Neville was willing to stand up for Joanna and she for him to her parents...that was very well done. I also thought the setting for the dance...on the lake...was fabulous.

Author's Response: Yes, Dennis, go beat yourself with a wet noodle then shoot me a mail and tell me what me missed so I can fix it. And you do remember, the dance by the lake - that was your idea. :)



Reviewer: Wolfs_Scream Signed Date: 2005.10.03 - 12:14AM Title: Simple

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Very nice! It was good to see Neville & Joanna so happy! And what would we do without Hermione??!? Well done!

Author's Response: They deserved to be happy, don't they? :) And yes, where would we be without Hermione? Thankfully, she's on our side! Thank you very much!




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