Reviews For Blood of the Heart
Reviewer: ginnyweasley777 Signed Date: 2009.04.15 - 02:06PM Title: Acceptance I loved the part with Neville talking to Joanna's parents Reviewer: Ginavera Signed Date: 2005.10.16 - 07:34PM Title: Acceptance Please Hurry and post!!!! I need to read more!!!! PLEASE * on knees begging!!!* Reviewer: PatronyBologna Signed Date: 2005.10.11 - 04:30PM Title: Acceptance Where to begin? (I think I need to take notes...) Loved the scenes with Neville. Mrs. Belvins is quite a woman, she knows a good thing when she sees it. Poor Neville though, I could only imagine the nerves. The 'bouncing' was wonderful and the playful jabs of concern from Ron and Harry. Fish and chips with Bill and Anna... funny, the fishsticks I was eating at the time weren't nearly as good. Bill a heartbreaker, yeah, I suppose he is! I enjoyed the whole scene as Anna convinced him to at least take a peek. Nathan and Anna... I'm usually one not to laugh out loud during anything, much to the annoyance of my hubby, but I couldn't help it when Nathan compared Anna to McGonagall at the end of the scene. Very funny. Bills reaction was well done, he knew he had to keep his cool and getting some 'air' was the right thing to do. Harry joining him was touching, (I'm hopeless, I know.) Draco, Draco, Draco... I'm still holding out hope (canon and otherwise) that he'll 'choose the right'. I felt bad for him, I feel bad for him. Thanks again for another excellent chapter and providing me with a good excuse to plop myself down for a minute or two. As always, looking forward to the next installment! Keep up the good work!! ~Patrony :) Reviewer: Sibling Creature Anonymous Date: 2005.10.11 - 12:57PM Title: Acceptance oh just a couple of things that stood out while rereading this chapter is that you twice misspelled Blevins as Belvins (or you misspelled Belvins as Blevins 4 times, in which case you've been doing that a lot throughout) :-) and :-
"Any you?" Bill asked. - I assume this was supposed to be "And you?"
Reviewer: Sibling Creature Anonymous Date: 2005.10.10 - 11:59PM Title: Acceptance "Leave those on."
"Why?"
"Makes it easier to picture you as Minerva."
There is a wrongness there which goes beyond words... that said it was also one of my favourite exchanges, and left me chuckling despite myself. :-)
I loved Bill's reactions, both when Anna first clued him in (and in the conversation that followed) and when he was faced with the spellwork...
I could go on an on about various aspects that I liked.. suffice it to say that I love this story as a whole, and your writing is amazing. I look forward to the next chapter... a new career path? sounds interesting. :-)
Reviewer: fritz42 Signed Date: 2005.10.10 - 06:15PM Title: Acceptance Another great chapter. I am really enjoy "watching" Joanna and Nelville fall in love. They are so cute together. My favorite part of this chapter was the scene between Anna and Nathan in bed. Loved the comments about the glasses. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Reviewer: Been Reading Signed Date: 2005.10.10 - 05:50PM Title: Acceptance As always, it's an adventure with you. I'm curious how Joanna's parents will react to the bonding... something tells me her father wouldn't be thrilled about it. I just love seeing Neville happy! You have me intrigued with this new career path for Harry... Wonderful job as always! Reviewer: Wolfs_Scream Signed Date: 2005.10.10 - 05:34PM Title: Acceptance Well done! There were so many brilliant interactions all through this chapter! | |||||||
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