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Reviewer: oceanblue Anonymous Date: 2005.06.03 - 03:50PM Title: Chap 22 - Christmas Ball

i wish he would just wake up and realize that he needs her to be stronger and defeat voldemort....and i hate the new ron i cant believe he would date those girls or do whatever he does with them......any ways i love your story hope you write another part soon!!

Author's Response: Ron is still in a "learning stage". There will be more about Ron later. =)

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Reviewer: d_chall Anonymous Date: 2005.06.02 - 05:50PM Title: Chap 11 - Questions-Burrow

Pretty good story so far, my only reccomendation is spend a little less on unimportant details and a lot more on the important ones. Examples: the exact layout of the house isn't important. What Ginny says to Harry to make him feel better is. Thanks for writing and keep it up!

Author's Response: Thank you so much. About the house, I feel the layout will be important in later chapters. =)

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Reviewer: ginny_weasley13 Signed Date: 2005.06.02 - 01:16PM Title: Chap 1-Alone

i think that it was very interesting

Author's Response: I hope you enjoy the rest =)

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Reviewer: oceanblue Anonymous Date: 2005.06.01 - 12:10AM Title: Chap 21- Re-Organized

can't wait for more!!! love your story!

Author's Response: Thank you very much. You are so encouraging =)

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Reviewer: David Wolfskill Anonymous Date: 2005.05.31 - 06:54PM Title: Chap 21- Re-Organized

Hmmm... Harry learned a lesson, eh? BTW, it was a bit ironic to see "He was getting used to the miss spellings" -- I believe trhat should have read "He was getting used to the misspellings."

Author's Response: Thank you for the review. Yes it is ironic that I misspelled that particular word. FIXED it. =)

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Reviewer: oceanblue Anonymous Date: 2005.05.28 - 09:20PM Title: Chap 20 - Exhausted

i love your story!! i came back and i was excited to see two updates!! can't wait for more!!

Author's Response: Thank you. More coming very soon. =)

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Reviewer: childers Anonymous Date: 2005.05.24 - 12:52AM Title: Chap 17 - Tonks' Visit

I was e-mailed this story - the link happened to bring me to the 18th chapter. I was sickened by it less than a quater way through. This has the appearance of being written by a kid in late elementary school. First of all, these people are British they do not speak southern U.S. and second this writer needs a new beta reader. The grammer stinks. This paper would recieve a failing grade in said elemenary school. A more fitting title "Wasted Time"

Author's Response: I hope you don\'t waste any more of your time. That is just sad =(

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Reviewer: oceanblue Anonymous Date: 2005.05.21 - 02:25PM Title: Chap 17 - Tonks' Visit

update soon!!!!!!! woohoo i lovet this story!!!

Author's Response: I\'m happy you like it.

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Reviewer: oceanblue Anonymous Date: 2005.05.18 - 10:22PM Title: Chap 16 - Award and Reward

anxiously awaiting more updates!!!!!!!

Author's Response: Thankie for raking the time to review =)

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Reviewer: Shane Anonymous Date: 2005.05.12 - 02:58PM Title: Chap 14 - Hogsmeade

I saw one problem Harry could have gone to his dorm grabed his broom and flew out the window back to the battle otherwise fantasic chapter

Author's Response: Harry took Snape at his word, that he couldn't get out. I should have made that more clear. That is all my fault. I be an amateur =(

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