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Reviews For HB Prince: Year of Love
Reviewer: Sssith Signed Date: 2006.03.10 - 05:27PM Title: Chap 56- Cheating LOL
That was a scarry insight into the horrors of gossip. Reviewer: Xfactor Anonymous Date: 2006.03.06 - 09:36AM Title: Chap 56- Cheating Nice update. A bit chatty but still good. However, I had really hoped that you were going to let Ron and Hermione have some happiness together but it doesn't seem to be heading that way. This "cat & mouse" game you are having them play is getting old. Reviewer: Chreechree Signed Date: 2006.03.06 - 03:44AM Title: Chap 56- Cheating Oh, Ron. How foolish! And last chapter had Hermione lamenting how Ron had hurt her in the past. She opens up and decides to accept him and slam! he turns into a drunken letch. Well, this won't cause problems. And just when everyone was starting to get all cozy and settle into their relationships. Well, the next chapter is going to be very good (fireworks and all). Good job on this chapter. Reviewer: Wolfs_Scream Signed Date: 2006.03.04 - 10:43PM Title: Chap 56- Cheating I confess that Harry has a lot more compassion for Ron than I'd have. :-}
What's up next? :-) Reviewer: Soccer Devil22 Signed Date: 2006.03.04 - 10:15PM Title: Chap 56- Cheating Great chapter. PLEASE dont wait a month to update. Reviewer: H/G 4ever Anonymous Date: 2006.03.04 - 09:50PM Title: Chap 56- Cheating Wow what angst! It was a real soap opera. Come on, get on with Harry and Ginny's honeymoon. Please, pretty please. Reviewer: bahjcb Anonymous Date: 2006.03.04 - 09:47PM Title: Chap 56- Cheating I just love your story. Ron and Hermione's relationship is one that I question if we will ever see the start of. Those two are slower than molasses. I'm hoping that we'll have another Harry and Ginny moment. Those are always so cute. You write them so well. I also like how Harry now has a family. Reviewer: Sssith Signed Date: 2006.02.17 - 04:31PM Title: Chap 55- Photographic Memory Well I just caught up with the story and I must say that I am enjoying it very much. Some nice original ideas in this story with a nice build up of H/G relationship. If there is one thing that I would encourage you to do it would be to not use exclamation points and UPPER CASE to provide emphasis in your story. You do a very nice job with your narative and you should allow that to convey your emotions.
Great job...keep it up...I look forward to more. Reviewer: Larry Anonymous Date: 2006.02.15 - 03:02PM Title: Chap 55- Photographic Memory Great chapter and a good read, looking forward to the next one. Reviewer: Xfactor Anonymous Date: 2006.02.15 - 10:54AM Title: Chap 55- Photographic Memory Excellent update. Harry and Ginny seem happier now that Harry seems to have laid down the law. Glad to Ron and Hermione are getting closer. I just hope nothing happens on her trip that will steer them away from each other. Reviewer: Tron Anonymous Date: 2006.02.12 - 01:41PM Title: Chap 55- Photographic Memory Thank you for a nice chapter.
Hermione seems to have finally realized that Harry loves Ginny and Ginny loves Harry. How dare she think she would be the better choice for him! I happen to think she would drive Harry crazy with her bookworm self. Harry likes to have fun, play Quidditch, and so on. Ginny is perfect for him. I'm so glad you think so too!
I look forward to the next chapter. I'm always happy to see an update to your story. Keep up the great work. Reviewer: Wolfs_Scream Signed Date: 2006.02.12 - 12:59PM Title: Chap 55- Photographic Memory The interaction between Harry & Ginny, especially when each wants to be awakened by a kiss from the other, and then at the end of the chapter (when they're discussing their hoped-for progeny), is especially amusing and well done.
It seems that Hermione has received and made constructive use of a bit of "course-correction." :-}
And I note that this chapter ends on a singularly optimistic note. :-)
Excellent! Reviewer: esbiehl Signed Date: 2006.01.25 - 01:57PM Title: Chap 54- Special Dinner Well after a couple of days I've caught up and read your story up to this point. and all i can say is WOW! It is a totally fresh idea. I like Luna being the surrogate sister isn't instead of Hermoine for a change. You keeping the marriage secret for so many chapter is great too. So many writers cave in and rush the story and reveal things to quickly. You've taken your time and developed your charactors very well. I've always enjoyed Hermoine's charactor and you've got me not liking her in this story....plus I really like how strong you developed Harry caring side towards Ginny. Most deal with the Magical aspect of Harry's strenght, SO it's a nice change. Though I'm sure Harry's magical sid ewill grow stronger too. Well Keep up the great writing, I look for for the rest of the story. Reviewer: H/G 4ever Anonymous Date: 2006.01.24 - 06:09PM Title: Chap 54- Special Dinner Thanks for your wonderful story. The secret wedding of Harry and Ginny is a great idea and the aftermath has been very well done. I'm glad that Ron is finally making a play for Hermionie. Please keep writing as I'll looking forward to seeing the end. Try and get Harry and Ginny some honeymoon time. I'm getting almost as frustrated as they are. Reviewer: Xfactor Anonymous Date: 2006.01.23 - 10:35AM Title: Chap 54- Special Dinner Excellent chapter. The date was perfect and I'm glad Snape has realized that he can't get into headquarters. Keep up the great work. Reviewer: lola Anonymous Date: 2006.01.22 - 12:13AM Title: Chap 54- Special Dinner oh i love it, but why hasn´t Harry tell Ginny that Luna knows about the mysterie? It is really good and Ron invites Hermione to the party ~ oh la la ~
Go on, i love your story.... Reviewer: Chreechree Anonymous Date: 2006.01.21 - 06:42PM Title: Chap 54- Special Dinner The date was sweet. And Hermione finally seems to get it, but I notice that she hasn't yet let go of her desire to research. I know she thinks she's helping...
A frustrated Severus makes me giggle. It just gives me great pleasure.
Well done as usual.
Reviewer: Wolfs_Scream Signed Date: 2006.01.21 - 05:47PM Title: Chap 54- Special Dinner Well done! I noticed that Harry didn't tell Ginny about Luna knowing. And -- just maybe! -- Hermione is adjusting to the notion that Harry & Ginny want to be together.... :-}
Snape seems ... antsy. I suppose he needs to practically exude patience when he's in Snake-Face Tom's presence, so he needs some sort of outlet. :-}
[Grammar checks sent under separate cover. :-)] Reviewer: Torak Signed Date: 2006.01.21 - 11:38AM Title: Chap 54- Special Dinner Just two and a half niggles I found this time round: the past tense of "feed" is "fed"; you just need to snip an E in each instance. Same with the past tense of "lie", which is, in the context of lying in bed, "lay". And in Britain, we don't "write someone", we write to someone.
Oh, and what's this about Belgian dairy products? Having lived in Belgium for eight years, trust me, British milk and stuff is infinitely superior. The Belgian stuff tastes ghastly. ;-)
Anyway, it continues getting better. The plot thickens.... Oh, and are you developing a penchant for the word "facetious"? ;-) Reviewer: Rachel Anonymous Date: 2006.01.21 - 12:10AM Title: Chap 1-Alone Great! | |||||||
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