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Reviewer: hpf2114 Signed Date: 2006.06.11 - 09:28AM Title: Chap 60 - Justin's Party
I have just read your story strait through to 60. It is a great piece of writing! The part of the story that is REALLY bothering me is that dumble said was that voldy had to do is touch her like Herry touched Qurrual. Then you said that he would have to do to her what Harry did on his wedding night. Please don't let that come even close to happing. Let him burn up in public, In front of harry and her whole family. I don't think that should happen to any girl, for sure not our Ginny.
Author's Response: Ginny was saved from that fate when she married Harry. But that does not mean that she is not in any danger. I'm glad you like the story. I hope you will like the rest. Thank you so much for taking the time to review. =)
Reviewer: Wolfs_Scream Signed Date: 2006.06.02 - 10:03PM Title: Chap 60 - Justin's Party
Good, though it does seem rather out of character for Harry to use Legilimancy on an unwitting friend/ally.
Author's Response: Harry's use of Legilmancy will be explained a little later. Things will begin to move a little faster very soon.
Author's Response: P.S. YOU will be the FIRST to see =)
Reviewer: witowsmp Signed Date: 2006.05.30 - 10:00AM Title: Chap 60 - Justin's Party
Good story! Update soon.
Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing. I hope you will enjoy the rest of the story. =)
Reviewer: Xfactor Anonymous Date: 2006.05.30 - 08:38AM Title: Chap 60 - Justin's Party
That was a little better. There was some action but we still got it second hand. I'm glad R & H had a nice date.
Keep up the great work and update soon!
Author's Response: Thank you again for reviewing. You will hear more about the party later. Not too long before action will be coming. This next chapter is pure fluff though.
Reviewer: Chreechree Signed Date: 2006.05.26 - 11:41PM Title: Chap 60 - Justin's Party
I see you had some chapters disappear on you, and it looks like you lost your reviews. That stinks. Well, I can’t say I’m surprised that the party was attacked or that it was a failure. The D.A. was useful. Poor Dean is holding out for something that’s never going to happen. I loved Dumbledore’s remark about the group having plenty of experience cleaning up from detentions. Ha! Ron’s fear of Mr. Granger was funny. He just kept looking at her shoes to not get caught looking again. Ha again. Nicely done.
Author's Response: I had to get help to fix things. But our tech man fixed it. Everything should be there now. The reviews survived. You have to click on the ALL in the review menu and they are there. Anyway thanks again for reveiwing. Major fluff in the next chapter, then on to some serious stuff.
Reviewer: FawkesFan Signed Date: 2006.05.26 - 08:50PM Title: Chap 60 - Justin's Party
Wow...no updates for over a month and then two within a couple days! This is great!
I hope we'll get some action soon from Voldemort. The last several chapters seem to be somewhat of a filler. Even so, I am enjoying the story.
I'll be anxiously awaiting the next update!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for taking the time to review. The new chapter is up awaiting validation. Three more are nearly ready. Never fear, there will be some action coming.
Reviewer: Torak Signed Date: 2006.05.26 - 06:05PM Title: Chap 60 - Justin's Party
Hermione bringing a suitcase of makeup and wibbling about painting nails? Pretty implausible.
Apart from that, this is on average a good fic, but it wobbles from extremely good to extremely bad. This chapter was fairly good, if a bit rushed, but the last two were really quite bad. I had some more extensive comments, but they disappeared with the last round of chapter vanishings.
Author's Response: My dearest Torak, you are beginning to sound like Ron, fourth year. Hermione IS a girl, ya know. Hahahahhahaha - Your pervious comments were not lost in the reviews. You have to click on the dropdown in the review menu to ALL. They are all there. - - - warning - - I suggest you skip the next chapter Pajama Party. I'm almost positive you will not like it. But then, I would miss your review and I always enjoy your reviews. SOOOOOOOO let's just see how brave you are. =)
