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Reviewer: Wolfs_Scream Signed Date: 2006.10.25 - 08:58AM Title: Chap 63 Freaky Storm
I doubt there will be many tears shed over the Dursleys.... :-}
Reviewer: Xfactor Anonymous Date: 2006.10.23 - 01:05PM Title: Chap 63 Freaky Storm
Excellent update (finally got some action going) but what was up with the storm and it's affects? Was it truly the disapparating that caused the listlessness?
Keep up the great work and update soon.
Reviewer: Torak Signed Date: 2006.10.20 - 05:59PM Title: Chap 63 Freaky Storm
This is probably one of the weaker chapters you've written of late; there's no coherent narrative, and you need to practice writing action scenes.
On the plus side, your grammar is much improved; the only grammatical error that really stood out this time was "Tonk's". It's also worth noting that you don't actually need to put "of age" in quotes.
Your grammar and spelling are much better than they used to be - now it's time to concentrate on the storytelling.
Author's Response: Thanks for taking the time to reivew... whether you like it or not it is appreciated. Fixed the Tonks thing.... in MY books "of age" is in quotes...feel wrong if I don't follow suit.
Reviewer: witowsmp Signed Date: 2006.10.19 - 09:56PM Title: Chap 63 Freaky Storm
Glad Harry punched Vernon and Molly fought Petunia.
Of course, what I'd have done if I was Harry and found out Death Eaters were attacking the Dursleys is send a thank you note to Voldemort.
Author's Response: I think that Harry may just agree with you.... =)
Thankie for taking the time to review.
