Reviews For HB Prince: Year of Love
Reviewer: anonymouspotterfan Signed Date: 2009.07.31 - 09:30PM Title: Chap 18 - Harvest Ball this whole concept of harry actually thinking there is a love charm and or a forgetting charm isn't very plausible to me, but i like the story regardless Reviewer: Katastrophe Signed Date: 2006.10.23 - 05:10AM Title: Chap 18 - Harvest Ball Admittedly, I am late coming to this story. I find the plot and sub plots very interesting, and pretty well done. I really have enjoyed the story so far and plan to continue reading until I get caught up. Reviewer: noylj Signed Date: 2006.08.28 - 03:32AM Title: Chap 18 - Harvest Ball Two nits: Reviewer: lorena Anonymous Date: 2006.01.13 - 09:28PM Title: Chap 18 - Harvest Ball I dont like that harry thinks he fancy ginny because of a "love charm" seems like he think that ginny isnt good enough how long it would take to harry realizes ginny because of her????? I love the story is really cool Reviewer: jeanne Anonymous Date: 2005.12.08 - 11:35AM Title: Chap 18 - Harvest Ball I take it all back,he really is dense .A lve spell??When will he wake up? I hope this doesn,t go through too many more chapters,and I do have a long way to go. Reviewer: Torak Signed Date: 2005.11.02 - 09:31PM Title: Chap 18 - Harvest Ball Ouch! The tenses have got you again! "He had did it on his first try" - no! Bad! "He had done it" is correct.
Other than that, and the usual errors, there's nothing major to criticise in this chapter. But oh, the frustration! Harry and Ginny are both so thick, they're missing out on vast tracts of fluff!
Hrm, don't mind me. I just get a bit soppy sometimes.
Oh, and just a quick note to the previous reviewer... why shouldn't Harry have sex on his mind? He's male, he's a teenager... even in the books there are definite references to him having decidedly mucky dreams and things. Reviewer: Jellybean Anonymous Date: 2005.07.20 - 04:02PM Title: Chap 18 - Harvest Ball omg it is SO unrealistic harry does not have sex on his mind like u make out him 2 have n who ever made ron a singer??? Reviewer: Jade_amethyst Signed Date: 2005.05.31 - 08:08PM Title: Chap 18 - Harvest Ball lol awesome fic...update asap Reviewer: Song Anonymous Date: 2005.05.27 - 04:28PM Title: Chap 18 - Harvest Ball Great job!!! Update soon!! :) | |||||||
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