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Reviewer: Torak Signed Date: 2005.11.02 - 09:53PM Title: Chap 21- Re-Organized

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Doesn't! "Gran doesn't know about those," not "gran don't know..." If nothing else, you really need to work on your tenses. The narrative is full of switches from the past to present tense, which gets annoying.

Author's Response: Gran don't know. That is Neville's words. - - - narrative? well there you are. I don't have a clue. Hopefully many of the changes I made fixed those. HOPEFULLY. I hate to annoy peoples. =)



Reviewer: oceanblue Anonymous Date: 2005.06.01 - 12:11AM Title: Chap 21- Re-Organized

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can't wait for more!!! love your story!



Reviewer: oceanblue Anonymous Date: 2005.06.01 - 12:10AM Title: Chap 21- Re-Organized

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can't wait for more!!! love your story!

Author's Response: Thank you very much. You are so encouraging =)



Reviewer: David Wolfskill Anonymous Date: 2005.05.31 - 06:54PM Title: Chap 21- Re-Organized

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Hmmm... Harry learned a lesson, eh? BTW, it was a bit ironic to see "He was getting used to the miss spellings" -- I believe trhat should have read "He was getting used to the misspellings."

Author's Response: Thank you for the review. Yes it is ironic that I misspelled that particular word. FIXED it. =)




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