Reviews For HB Prince: Year of Love
Reviewer: Torak Signed Date: 2005.11.02 - 09:53PM Title: Chap 21- Re-Organized Doesn't! "Gran doesn't know about those," not "gran don't know..."
If nothing else, you really need to work on your tenses. The narrative is full of switches from the past to present tense, which gets annoying. Reviewer: oceanblue Anonymous Date: 2005.06.01 - 12:11AM Title: Chap 21- Re-Organized can't wait for more!!! love your story! Reviewer: oceanblue Anonymous Date: 2005.06.01 - 12:10AM Title: Chap 21- Re-Organized can't wait for more!!! love your story! Reviewer: David Wolfskill Anonymous Date: 2005.05.31 - 06:54PM Title: Chap 21- Re-Organized Hmmm... Harry learned a lesson, eh?
BTW, it was a bit ironic to see "He was getting used to the miss spellings" -- I believe trhat should have read "He was getting used to
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