If you want to check the spelling of canon words - Chudley Cannons, Hogsmeade and the like - have a look at www.hp-lexicon.org You also really need to work on your word use. Most of the time it's not a big deal, but sometimes there are glaring - and sometimes hilarious - errors like "an autistic guitar".... The past tense of "shine" is "shone". "Don't be sending" is a very American construction, and certainly out of character for Vernon.

Author's Response: Chudley Cannons are fixed. Looked it up in the book and STILL got it wrong. No excuse! Hogsmeade . . . same thing. Now THAT irriates me too! - - - the autistic guitar was hilarious. A friend told me that since the guitar played itself, it could be autistic, but alas, it was a MUGGLE guitar so it couldn't be austisic, which made it all the more hilarious! How that slipped through is a long story in itself. - - - "Don't be sending" didn't know. I have made a note that this is the American Edition.