Reviews For HB Prince: Year of Love
Reviewer: Torak Signed Date: 2005.11.02 - 10:20PM Title: Chap 23 - Harry Christmas If you want to check the spelling of canon words - Chudley Cannons, Hogsmeade and the like - have a look at www.hp-lexicon.org
You also really need to work on your word use. Most of the time it's not a big deal, but sometimes there are glaring - and sometimes hilarious - errors like "an autistic guitar"....
The past tense of "shine" is "shone".
"Don't be sending" is a very American construction, and certainly out of character for Vernon. Reviewer: Moony32 Anonymous Date: 2005.06.11 - 07:37PM Title: Chap 23 - Harry Christmas Hey, I'm new to this site but happen to think your story is a lot better than some of the others in the top 25 or whatever, so keep writing, and I'm going to add a couple more reviews to boost your rating, cause you kick ass. | |||||||
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