Reviews For HB Prince: Year of Love
Reviewer: noylj Signed Date: 2006.08.29 - 04:13AM Title: Chap 43 - End of a Long Day Please...learn when to use doesn't and when to use don't. Still, story is very good, but how long will you torture Harry and Ginny? Has anyone ever wondered how all these old spells were first created? Were sorcerers in the past that much smarter and stronger? Shouldn't spells be getting more complicated and powerful over time? I just never understand the logic of secret spells and objects from the past that are ever so powerful. Reviewer: lorena Anonymous Date: 2006.01.14 - 09:17PM Title: Chap 43 - End of a Long Day seriously I am getting sick of the damn pillow its ok with the hands but a pillow!!??
Reviewer: General Kenobi Signed Date: 2005.11.15 - 05:08PM Title: Chap 43 - End of a Long Day Great story. One thing however. There are several typos. You use "don't" a lot when you should be using "doesn't, or didn't". With these typos, it just doesn't seem right, almost like ebonics. Just letting you know so you can have an almost flawless story. Other than that, great concept on the plot! Reviewer: Danielle Anonymous Date: 2005.10.09 - 09:29PM Title: Chap 43 - End of a Long Day hey, this story is really good. plz continue it.
do ron and hermione get together? they need to.
keep up the great work!!! : ) Reviewer: Luminara Anonymous Date: 2005.10.07 - 11:24AM Title: Chap 43 - End of a Long Day Hey,
I love what you are writing here. plz continu, I'm feeling the frustration of Harry and Ginny caus they can't be together really. It's sad, plz make them happy :-)
xxxLumixxx Reviewer: Wolfs_Scream Signed Date: 2005.10.05 - 11:54PM Title: Chap 43 - End of a Long Day Indeed; that would be a long day.
Probably just a typo, but did you mean "Imperius Curse" instead of "Impervious Curse?"
Interesting twist that Harry's the one pushing Moony to even consider a relationship with Tonks. Maybe it even worked.
Pity we didn't get to find out what form th eBoggart took for each of the Dursleys. :-}
Harry's obviously pretty frustrated. Wonder if Ginny is, too.... | |||||||
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