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Reviewer: noylj Signed Date: 2006.08.29 - 04:13AM Title: Chap 43 - End of a Long Day

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Please...learn when to use doesn't and when to use don't. Still, story is very good, but how long will you torture Harry and Ginny? Has anyone ever wondered how all these old spells were first created? Were sorcerers in the past that much smarter and stronger? Shouldn't spells be getting more complicated and powerful over time? I just never understand the logic of secret spells and objects from the past that are ever so powerful.

Author's Response: Teenageres doesn't always speak in perfect grammer. Harry & Ginny are forever tortured. - Kids at school only learn the basics. There were centruies of time when spells were created. Some would not have been widely publushed if they were evil. Fred & George are inventing new things all the time.. as in the Muggle world... not everything was invented in the last 20 years. Glad you still continuing the story.



Reviewer: lorena Anonymous Date: 2006.01.14 - 09:17PM Title: Chap 43 - End of a Long Day

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seriously I am getting sick of the damn pillow its ok with the hands but a pillow!!??

Author's Response: Ah! The pillow. It seems to bother lots of people. =/



Reviewer: General Kenobi Signed Date: 2005.11.15 - 05:08PM Title: Chap 43 - End of a Long Day

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Great story. One thing however. There are several typos. You use "don't" a lot when you should be using "doesn't, or didn't". With these typos, it just doesn't seem right, almost like ebonics. Just letting you know so you can have an almost flawless story. Other than that, great concept on the plot!

Author's Response: Thank you sooo much for the review. Really glad you like the story. I got beta now. Hope it is better =)



Reviewer: Danielle Anonymous Date: 2005.10.09 - 09:29PM Title: Chap 43 - End of a Long Day

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hey, this story is really good. plz continue it. do ron and hermione get together? they need to. keep up the great work!!! : )

Author's Response: Thankie! You will have to wait and see =)



Reviewer: Luminara Anonymous Date: 2005.10.07 - 11:24AM Title: Chap 43 - End of a Long Day

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Hey, I love what you are writing here. plz continu, I'm feeling the frustration of Harry and Ginny caus they can't be together really. It's sad, plz make them happy :-) xxxLumixxx

Author's Response: Thankie for the kind words. Poor Harry & Ginny. Life is not easy for them. Maybe one day . . .



Reviewer: Wolfs_Scream Signed Date: 2005.10.05 - 11:54PM Title: Chap 43 - End of a Long Day

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Indeed; that would be a long day. Probably just a typo, but did you mean "Imperius Curse" instead of "Impervious Curse?" Interesting twist that Harry's the one pushing Moony to even consider a relationship with Tonks. Maybe it even worked. Pity we didn't get to find out what form th eBoggart took for each of the Dursleys. :-} Harry's obviously pretty frustrated. Wonder if Ginny is, too....

Author's Response: You are corrrect about the Imperius Curse, copied the wrong file when I uploaded, then didn't notice. Bad Bad Hobbit! - - You will find out more about Harry pushing Lupin to Tonks in the next chap . . . Yea it was too bad the twins were not in the to see what the Boggarts were =( - - Thanks for your most welcome review =)




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