Reviews For Seeking the Truth
Reviewer: Mariposa Anonymous Date: 2006.01.31 - 10:56AM Title: Return to Reality I just picked up this story again. and i'm excited to read the next few chapters. I have to say I was dissapointed in the flashback sequence. It was very flat and rough. And then it went on into Ginny and Hermione talking and it was all great like it normally is. the flashback lacked realism, it felt forced and thin and common. You have to find a way to balance between getting out a story on a schedual, if that is your top priority, and writing a good story. My advice to other writers has always been to wait for your Muse and if it takes a month, so be it, the result is always worth waiting for from a great author and you are a great author. The rest of the chapter was great and it sounded thin in Ginny's dream also but it wasn't bad there because it was a dream and actually made it feel more dreamlike. So a C for the flashback but an A+ for the rest, which should average to and A- overall. May your Muse bless you with more attendance. Reviewer: Rebecca Anonymous Date: 2005.12.07 - 11:15PM Title: Return to Reality Okay if I was Ginny (and thank goodness I'm not because I would probably ruin the plot of the story lol) I would call a meeting with all those guys and be like "Okay so who's the jerk who's threatening me and Harry?! I would seriously confront them. I mean I know she could lose her job but who cares lol? And maybe if she made it clear that nothing is going on with the two of them... Well, ya know... Its just kinda annoying that Ginny is just gonna keep this quiet and stay away from Harry. I love them together! You have to update this soon, I really love this story so much. Oh and poor Ginny, those dreams are scary... Reviewer: amber Anonymous Date: 2005.12.01 - 02:28PM Title: Return to Reality amazing beatifull plz never end dis story its amazing plz ryt soon i cnt wait!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !! Reviewer: soxxloony Anonymous Date: 2005.11.29 - 09:28PM Title: Return to Reality 1 of the best stories ever, PLEASE UPDATE! Reviewer: Xfactor Anonymous Date: 2005.11.29 - 10:12AM Title: Return to Reality Great chapter. Excellent job with the dream, by the way. Reviewer: ginnyluvsharry Anonymous Date: 2005.11.28 - 09:53PM Title: Return to Reality i love the storry and UPdate..i love it i really do Reviewer: destin4fl Signed Date: 2005.11.28 - 09:06AM Title: Return to Reality interesting turn of events! Reviewer: Spenser Hemmingway Signed Date: 2005.11.27 - 03:48PM Title: Return to Reality Poor kids. It was bad enough hiding their feelings from Voldemort, and now the team as well. I have the feeling that this family day is going to be a turning point on a few matters. Interesting dream. Not that any of it could happen, but it is revealing what is going on in her sub-conscious. Thanks. Eric B. Reviewer: emilie iannarelli Anonymous Date: 2005.11.27 - 09:33AM Title: Return to Reality i liked that you made ginny have a nightmare. you triked me for a second there. anyway it shows how all her worries are back all because they had to "return to reality". It really shows that she is thinking. I hope you have time to make a new chapter cause i can't stopreading! It's too addicting. all in all it is marvoless. Reviewer: Desslok Signed Date: 2005.11.26 - 08:59PM Title: Return to Reality Wow, that was quite the intense dream at the end! Great chapter. I really love this story. Can't wait to see if Arthur comes to Family Day and how he interacts with Harry and Hermione!! Reviewer: CLOZ Anonymous Date: 2005.11.25 - 08:35PM Title: Return to Reality Absolutley incredible....it is 3 in the morning and just read your whole story....couldn't stop reading! Update soon! Reviewer: cori_b Anonymous Date: 2005.11.25 - 07:26PM Title: Return to Reality how sad!!! I love it though, AND i REALLY wonder who and what the letter is about, well... all in good time! Reviewer: libbypotter Anonymous Date: 2005.11.25 - 06:55PM Title: Return to Reality thanks for updating. good chapter, I can't wait to find out what Harry's secrets are ;-) Reviewer: EJAUS Signed Date: 2005.11.25 - 03:32PM Title: Return to Reality Hermione's fertility or lack thereof is a fanfiction plot twist that has been used an awful lot. Please be careful in how you deal with it. I have to admit this is a frustrating story. Everyone is being so stupid, Harry doesnt't want to hurt Ginny. Ginny doesnt want to Hurt Ron, Hermione dosent't want to keep Ron fro being happpy. All noble sentiments, but everybody is is in pain. Its difficult to read about character I like so much suffering needlessly. I hope that the trio will be able at leat to talk to each other by the end of the story. but then I am an optimist. Don't tell me. | |||||||
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