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Reviewer: Mariposa Anonymous Date: 2006.01.31 - 11:25AM Title: Family Day

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Yummy ending, great chapter! I just want to eat it up ;o)



Reviewer: Rebecca Anonymous Date: 2005.12.19 - 10:23PM Title: Family Day

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I know who it is thats threatening them. But I won't say because I don't want to ruin it for the people who haven't finished the story. I am proud to say that I was right though! I said it was this person in a previous review of mine. Haha I read the story on fanfiction! I was so happy when I found it. It was so beautifully done! I love how you ended it, not like a happily ever after because that wouldn't be true to life, but a happy ending. And I started your sequel, can't wait for more updates of that! I would go into more details of how much I loved it but I can't because words can't really describe. All I can say is that no other fanfiction makes me think so much about it. And I'll still be sticking with the updates on this site to see the revision chapters. Update soon!



Reviewer: HeatherWesley_lover Anonymous Date: 2005.12.19 - 08:24PM Title: Family Day

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Ahh.... I love it. It's so good.



Reviewer: amber Anonymous Date: 2005.12.15 - 11:48AM Title: Family Day

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just to say im so glad you updated it its so good wicked story line thatno one has thought of thissotry line please write adain sooo it is soooooooooo goood!!!!!

Author's Response: The next chapter is with my beta... Thanks for reviewing!



Reviewer: eaglebird Signed Date: 2005.12.14 - 04:57PM Title: Family Day

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This story grabbed me right rom the beginning, so this is basically a review of all 12 chapters. WOW!!!!!!! Can't wait for your next update. The depth of emotions in your canon-like charactes, centred around Hermione's tragic curse is a fabulous plot idea. You weave your tale beautifully.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! Somewhere in the course of writing this, I felt like Ginny just completely took over the writing... of course, she later abandoned me, but I happen to like the chapters she wrote! Thanks for reviewing!



Reviewer: aZnKaWaIiGiRl Anonymous Date: 2005.12.13 - 07:22PM Title: Family Day

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O.o Its nice!!!!! I wonder what they r going to do to get mionie and ron to talk!!! an rvil cliff hanger!!! : )



Reviewer: emily Anonymous Date: 2005.12.12 - 07:31PM Title: Family Day

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AWESOME!!!!!!!!! CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE!!!



Reviewer: Melvin Anonymous Date: 2005.12.11 - 10:38PM Title: Family Day

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Ginny's eyes twinkled. "I have a few ideas." Gee, how about pointing out to Hermione that she's being selfish? If it was only her who was affected by her decision, it wouldn't be so bad, but the affect is destroying so many others. It was bad enough that Ron lost his mother and brothers, but because she decided she had the right to dictate who he lives his life, he also lost his best friend and the woman he loves. The bulk of the story is good, but the basic premise is such a head scratcher that the entire story suffers.



Reviewer: mia Anonymous Date: 2005.12.10 - 03:05PM Title: Family Day

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omg i luvv this story!! plz update soon! i cant stand that ron and harry are not speaking! cant wait for the next chapter!



Reviewer: amber Anonymous Date: 2005.12.09 - 02:38PM Title: Family Day

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excelent plzzzzzzzzz ryt soon i cnt wait



Reviewer: annabananna Signed Date: 2005.12.09 - 07:11AM Title: Family Day

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I love it.



Reviewer: Rebecca Anonymous Date: 2005.12.08 - 11:30PM Title: Family Day

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Yay, you updated! And I just had an idea, is Coach Mason the one threatening them? Because I remember he reminded Ginny of Snape (and who likes Snape?)... Well hey, its just a thought. Lets go through this. I don't think its Jacob because he likes Harry, I don't think its Dustin because that would be too obvious, I don't think its MJ because he's too cool (he reminds me of Lee Jordan), I don't think its Tank because that would also be too obvious. It could be Jeff! I mean, he may be jealous of Harry because he went to the banquet with Ginny and he's friends with Ron! It could be Wesley too but I don't really think it is? Basically it has to be someone no one will expect, right? LOL like you'll tell me! I luv this story its such a mystery. Please update A.S.A.P!!! I seriously can't wait! (As you can tell from this long review lol).

Author's Response: You're right, I'm not going to tell you, lol! Good try though! Thanks for reviewing!



Reviewer: Jen Anonymous Date: 2005.12.08 - 11:22PM Title: Family Day

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No!! You have to update again now! I was so excited when I saw that this story was updated, I've been waiting for the family day and it was so great when Ron came. I think Hermione should raise the baby with Ron. I mean the baby could use a dad, no? Someone should make Hermione realize that (Mr. Weasley?). I mean she won't be with Ron because she can't have children with him but I mean, she does have a child anyways... (And I like that she's calling the baby Lilly too) Well I really can't wait for more. Please, please, please update soon!

Author's Response: Hermione will figure out how hard it is to be a single parent soon enough. Thanks for reading!



Reviewer: libbypotter Anonymous Date: 2005.12.08 - 05:09PM Title: Family Day

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First, thanks for updating. Second I have only just realised who was all those glamerous ladies going to parties with Harry! Sorry for being so thick! Anyway great chapter ( as usual) and thirdly pleeeeeeeease update soon. I can't wait to find out how R&H get together

Author's Response: Lol, that wasn't one of my better hidden surprises, so I'm glad I still fooled someone! It's a busy time of year for my beta and myself, so I'll get the next chapter out as soon as possible! Thanks for reviewing!



Reviewer: IHateSnakes Signed Date: 2005.12.08 - 11:12AM Title: Family Day

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Great chapter. Poor stubborn Ron & Hermione! S.

Author's Response: Thanks!



Reviewer: Spenser Hemmingway Signed Date: 2005.12.08 - 10:33AM Title: Family Day

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I smell mischief! I can imagine all sorts of scenarios for getting Ron back with Hermione. It's just too bad that they are both so stubborn. Thanks. Eric B.

Author's Response: Lol, they are too stubborn! We'll see how it goes!



Reviewer: gemz1313 Signed Date: 2005.12.08 - 10:08AM Title: Family Day

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wow wow wow,amazing. I've just read the whole story and enjoyed it SO much. I think it's a great story line, unquie. You're writting style is brilliant and very proffessional.I like how you don't rush the relationships, ot makes it seem more real. Keep up the excellent story and please update soon. Gem 10/10 and more

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I really appreciate your kind words!



Reviewer: Xfactor Anonymous Date: 2005.12.08 - 09:45AM Title: Family Day

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Excellent update. I can't wait to see what Ginny has planned. They need to be a foursome again. Great job and update soon!

Author's Response: I'm not sure how soon the foursome will happen. Should probably focus on not wanting to kill each other first!



Reviewer: jandersen Anonymous Date: 2005.12.08 - 04:01AM Title: Family Day

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It really is amazing how much better this story is with details you have added (it was already great in the first version). This story is so good!

Author's Response: Thanks so much!



Reviewer: Chreechree Anonymous Date: 2005.12.08 - 02:48AM Title: Family Day

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Ah! And so it begins (fixing Ron and Hermione, that is). I had been certain Arthur was on Harry's side, but I didn't think he knew everything. How could he not tell Ron and Ginny? Well, I still love him. I adore this story and can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Magical contracts stink, don't they? Fixing Ron and Hermione won't be as easy as they think. Another obstacle for them will enter the scene next chapter. Thanks for reviewing!




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