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Reviewer: Ronald8472 Signed Date: 2018.01.11 - 02:22PM Title: The Spanish Phonograph

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This was quite different. You should write another one.



Reviewer: PhoenixFeather2 Signed Date: 2016.07.20 - 02:11PM Title: The Spanish Phonograph

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"Before him stood his brigade; composed of friends, and those hurt too much to care if they lived or die.
Much like himself." ~I really like this part. I feel like it could inspire many other stories as well.



Reviewer: ShellBell Anonymous Date: 2007.04.04 - 02:16PM Title: The Spanish Phonograph

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It takes guts to do what Ginny did. I don't hate her. Beautiful story with a great ending. I'm glad to see that Harry finally has his happy ending and his very own family.



Reviewer: preppygirl Signed Date: 2007.01.10 - 05:34PM Title: The Spanish Phonograph

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I don't not like Ginny. I can see why you didn't have her tell him. I loved this story.



Reviewer: StrawberryRice Signed Date: 2006.09.11 - 01:15PM Title: The Spanish Phonograph

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I just wanted to let you know that I loved it. Very angsty and loving at the same time. Good job.



Reviewer: pankie001 Signed Date: 2006.05.27 - 04:57PM Title: The Spanish Phonograph

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excellent story! I couldn't have written it better than myself. I love Harry and Ginny so much andI think I would never disliked them, worry not.keep it up!



Reviewer: scArs23 Anonymous Date: 2006.05.19 - 06:37PM Title: The Spanish Phonograph

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AU but beautiful nonetheless. The characterization in general, though, was fantastic. The little nuances are perfectly captured.



Reviewer: ashleigh2006 Anonymous Date: 2006.05.19 - 02:23PM Title: The Spanish Phonograph

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it was beautiful! I cried and laugh and i just loved it! you're a good writer



Reviewer: txreina Signed Date: 2006.04.15 - 08:49PM Title: The Spanish Phonograph

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beautiful story great ending.



Reviewer: saz j Signed Date: 2006.03.22 - 09:47AM Title: The Spanish Phonograph

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THERE'S NO ENDIN, AS IF, I WANTED A HAPPY ENDIN, NO WAY, AHHH WELL, IT WAS GD WHILST IT LASTED



Reviewer: hpgurlny Anonymous Date: 2006.01.29 - 10:05AM Title: The Spanish Phonograph

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You make Harry a little too in love with Ginny, if you know what I mean. And Oliver Wood kind of becomes a loose end. But otherwise, pretty good!



Reviewer: fatesfriend Anonymous Date: 2005.11.06 - 09:39PM Title: The Spanish Phonograph

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Bravo. Oh, no I don't hate Ginny!!! If something so evil was out to kill you- tearing at you from the inside out- how could you not do something, anything that you could to rid the world of the monster? Yes, I am sure Harry would be horrified, but this evil was trying to destroy their lives and everyone else they loved. No, Ginny was a brave Gryfindor taking a huge risk making a really big sacrifice and hoping it would work out in the end. Thanks for the story. lol



Reviewer: destin4fl Anonymous Date: 2005.10.25 - 06:27PM Title: The Spanish Phonograph

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holy c#!$ batman that was amazing!



Reviewer: Smith Anonymous Date: 2005.10.24 - 09:55AM Title: The Spanish Phonograph

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Pretty Good



Reviewer: Potter47 Signed Date: 2005.09.01 - 10:04PM Title: The Spanish Phonograph

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Um... I wanted to wrap up these reviews with something nice and encouraging, but... No offence, but these stories didn't fit together very well at ALL. They seemed very much disjointed... I dunno if that was intentional or not. I really don't like leaving blatantly negative reviews, but I just really didn't like this story. I'm sorry, I tried to, but I couldn't. You had some great ideas--I liked the earrings--but they didn't come together very well, in my opinion. I just... I'm going to stop now before I make even more of a fool of myself. Again, I'm sorry.



Reviewer: Antosha Signed Date: 2005.08.24 - 05:04PM Title: The Spanish Phonograph

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I know how frustrating it was to have the Ginny-as-Horcrux theory blown out of the water! You deal with it quite nicely here. I enjoyed the angstiness of this--I would have loved to see her pregnancy foreshadowed in the fourth chapter, but I'm not sure how you could have done that without tipping your hand. In any case, nice job!



Reviewer: Kerian Anonymous Date: 2005.08.10 - 11:22AM Title: The Spanish Phonograph

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Aww it was soo very angsty but enjoyable! I really like reading series of different connected events, so I really loved this story. Great work!

Author's Response: yes, I love the angst! I'm happy you liked it too! :)



Reviewer: Pink Lizard Signed Date: 2005.08.09 - 05:17AM Title: The Spanish Phonograph

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This whole group of ficlets (I get it now, lol!) was really well written and I enjoyed it alot. It's sad that its over but I liked the ending! Love Pink Lizard x



Reviewer: mmiluski Anonymous Date: 2005.07.30 - 07:00PM Title: The Spanish Phonograph

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it was great, but im really dissapointed taht ur not gonna write a sequel, ti would be really good to see how harry reacts to ginny later on, his full forgiveness, it was good anyways tho

Author's Response: Sadly - that's not my story to tell :) but thank you very much for the feedback!



Reviewer: Jeni Anonymous Date: 2005.07.29 - 11:38AM Title: The Spanish Phonograph

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I loved this story! I read while I'm at work so usually I want like a 50 chapter story to keep me busy all day but this one I couldn't resist. It was very well done.

Author's Response: Thank you, Jeni! I'm glaf you enjoyed this story; sadly no 50 part version but hopefully this was good enough :)




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