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Reviewer: Green Fairy Anonymous Date: 2003.08.25 - 11:34PM Title: Shall we begin?

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I really like it. The only critisism I have is that I wish your chapters would be longer!



Reviewer: Sarah Anonymous Date: 2003.08.23 - 12:13PM Title: Shall we begin?

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I'll ditto Savvy for the most part! Sorry -- I've been reading since the first chapter, but time to review things has been hard to come by. :| Kudos on your characterizations, above all. I can't wait to see where this goes! :) -- Sarah >^,,^



Reviewer: ZanyMuggle Signed Date: 2003.08.21 - 02:07PM Title: Shall we begin?

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Very enjoyable! I'm very curious to see how it unfolds.



Reviewer: Savvy Anonymous Date: 2003.08.21 - 12:19PM Title: Shall we begin?

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Oh, I'm glad you're back! Got a little worried you might have hit a plot snag or something. ;) This chapter was altogether too funny! Honestly, those two... Funny thing: I always thought it would be interesting if Harry and Ginny found a common ground in Hermione and Ron's relationship. I loved the way you interpreted that idea here! You did a superb job of keeping track of all the characters involved. Ron's rueful acknowledgement that Beverly had a reason to desert him and his utter thick-headed-ness; Hermione's pass-word and inability to understand that books can't help everything; Harry's determination to hear his friend out, in spite of feeling that Ron needs a wake-up call; and of course, Ginny's eavesdropping and all her private thoughts about the whole situation were wonderfully on target. I suppose I could have just said I liked everything, couldn't I...? Never let it be said that I ever failed to take the long way round. :P Very nice set up you have here! I'm still looking forward to seeing what Harry has to teach Ginny. :)




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