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Reviewer: RoseSpell Signed Date: 2012.06.25 - 12:54AM Title: Chapter 9

to be honest I don't think Harry would take the info of Ginny still being pregnant so easily. But oh well I'm not the one writing



Reviewer: ginnyweasley777 Signed Date: 2009.12.17 - 12:49PM Title: Chapter 9

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glad they've sorted things out



Reviewer: hms42 Signed Date: 2008.08.31 - 06:50PM Title: Chapter 9

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Reviewer: Believer Signed Date: 2008.08.04 - 03:22AM Title: Chapter 9

Wow! I though Harry would be angier when he found out that Ginny had lied to him. But I'm guessing that he was just so happy to have them both back that he overlooked the lie. I was really mad at Ginny for her lie, it was completely selfish. I was totally outraged on Harry's behalf. I could see where Ginny was comming from, but that's no reason to take his child from him. Yet it was still a great chapter,



Reviewer: Little Trooper Signed Date: 2008.07.15 - 11:20PM Title: Chapter 9

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Oh my gosh this story is so good. I wish my marrige had some of the cute harry and ginny moments in it. I love how you did this. Hope their is more to this stsory. It is so good. Made m cry. I really wish marraige had those type of moments in it and not all the yelling.

amy



Reviewer: GodricsPhoenix Signed Date: 2008.03.13 - 02:22AM Title: Chapter 9

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This is an amazing story!!!! PLEASE update SOON!!!



Reviewer: ravenclaw_girl101 Signed Date: 2007.07.31 - 07:52PM Title: Chapter 9

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wow...i love this story...it is really good, i like Harry better like this...as a muggle...LOL...when are the other chapters coming? i can't wait to read the rest of the story...btw, i'm a Bay Area girl...born in San Jose, raised in Northern Cal.



Reviewer: riegert8 Signed Date: 2007.04.13 - 04:45PM Title: Chapter 9

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This is a good story. I have to admit that I stop reading it when I came up that Hermione was with Draco. But I was ask to finish it because Ron and Hermione were going to be together.



Reviewer: kiss Ginny Signed Date: 2007.02.20 - 07:45PM Title: Chapter 9

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I loved the chapter it was soooo good. When Harry found out Ginny was still pregnant I thought he was going to be mad but he wasn't good job getting him through that.



Reviewer: aprilmoon92 Signed Date: 2006.06.25 - 09:48AM Title: Chapter 9

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Excellent work, JLaLa! Was glued to this story for the past afternoon... can't wait to see the ending. :)



Reviewer: ginnyslittlesister Signed Date: 2006.05.01 - 06:50PM Title: Chapter 9

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I'm from the Bay Area! Fremont. Bay Area love, all right. Thanx for reviewing my story.



Reviewer: Cole Signed Date: 2006.04.28 - 06:58PM Title: Chapter 9

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I have to admit, while I wouldn't threaten someone to stop reading, I felt that the drama created was forced, and it "jumped the shark" so to speak. In any case I'm happy that things seem to be resolved between the two, or at least headed in that direction, but as I said, I just feel that the situation was written with a mindset of black and white, emotionally, and while I'll admit that from personal experience with various pregnant women, including my wife, that emotional shifts are unpredictable and strong, they are usually quick, and wreak a lot less havoc in the longrun, so I can't even chalk it up to that in my own mind. I have much enjoyed the story, just all the events in the last two chapters have "kicked" me out of the story so to speak, and caused me to stop reading it, and take a break before I was willing to give it a shot again. Who knows, maybe that's what it's supposed to do. Make you think about it. But I'll say this, you definitely got my attention.



Reviewer: LolaPotter Signed Date: 2006.04.20 - 03:11AM Title: Chapter 9

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i liked it!
but i think Harry should be a bit angry with ginny....

Author's Response: Someone else mentioned that to me and at I thought about making him angrier at her. At the same time, I wanted to show how much he understood her reasons for doing it by being calm. But like I told the other person, I'm not a fan of angsty Harry so I could be bias.



Reviewer: fairyville Signed Date: 2006.04.20 - 02:54AM Title: Chapter 9

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YAY im so glad theyre back together =D

awsome chapter!

Author's Response: I'm glad too! Thanks for the kudos!



Reviewer: harrylovegurl Signed Date: 2006.04.19 - 09:34PM Title: Chapter 9

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i loved it can't wait for more

mariann

Author's Response: Thanks for the compliment! Congrats on your soon to be born baby girl!



Reviewer: isabel526 Signed Date: 2006.04.19 - 07:28PM Title: Chapter 9

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Im so happy that u finally update very good chapter like always



Reviewer: MythWeaver Signed Date: 2006.04.19 - 05:29PM Title: Chapter 9

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Whew! The last chapter was good, but depressing. This one was proof, however, that making up is always fun!



Reviewer: UnrealityCheck Signed Date: 2006.04.19 - 04:57PM Title: Chapter 9

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I really like this story. It is so fun to think of Harry not being in the magical world at all until he runs into Ginny while looking for a snack.

I am very glad that you didn't drag on their angst for chapter after chapter. That sort of thing gets old real fast!

Author's Response: I was never one for angst--too much already in the world. I try to keep it as light as I can. :)



Reviewer: Zoltan42 Signed Date: 2006.04.19 - 04:44PM Title: Chapter 9

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IOn the whole, I like the chapter, However, there is one, for me, big problem: Harry's reaction, or should I say, non-reaction to finding out Ginny's still pregnant. His heartache, his feelings of loss -- not only for her but for his child -- are dismissed with a "I understand." I don't expect it to lead to a (potentially bigger) fight with him suddenly starting to yell her about how could she do that to him, how could she deprive him of feeling his child kick for the first time, but there should have been something. It was almost reduced to a McGuffin, dismissed with a simple "Oh that, it's ..." and forgotten. There is all this build-up, and no pay off.

Author's Response: You know what? I was actually thinking of adding more to that also! When I thought about it however, I thought that Harry should be more grown up about it. He is happy that his baby is alive and if you think about--he'll a lot of chances to feel the baby! His calmness toward this is more of a sign of maturity and understanding towards Ginny. I was never one of angsty Harry--so maybe I'm bias.



Reviewer: muggledog Signed Date: 2006.04.19 - 04:42PM Title: Chapter 9

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Very good, yes indeed! I still am on the edge of my seat to see how this one pans out. I enjoyed the resolution of the conflicts, especially Ginny and Hermione having a falling out.




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