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Reviewer: immortalphoenix Anonymous Date: 2006.12.21 - 09:41PM Title: THE TUNNEL

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That was certainly interesting. VERY great imagination. My brother could come up with stuff like this if you asked him to... and if it pretained to aliens but he's 11. This is just... ingenious. Ive thought of things like this before but have never thought of putting them together into this sort of... maze or whatever you want to call him and especially not with the flawlessness you've done so in.

WOW!
Kortnee // Immortal Phoenix



Reviewer: naiad Anonymous Date: 2006.01.20 - 11:52PM Title: THE TUNNEL

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I have spent the last week working my way through all of your stories, and I have enjoyed every minute of it. I especially like this current post-HBP story. I hope to read more soon! As far as the SS Potter world, your characterizations are lovely, and I really grew to love the Harry/Ginny interaction, and the philosophy offered throughout. Beautiful and true. Although the story got to be a bit too superpowery and deus ex machina at points, I still had to keep reading, given how much I loved the characters.

Author's Response: I'll tell you this much - sometimes I have no control over where a story goes. Sometimes the 'superpowers' made me a bit uncomfortable too, but they wouldn't be unmade - it just didn't work. Ah well. This one is attempting to be more 'realistic'. Thanks for reading!



Reviewer: TMuse Anonymous Date: 2006.01.19 - 10:48PM Title: THE TUNNEL

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I really love this story. You're one of the few fanfiction writers I've read who is able to create both an exciting plot and interesting, human characters. Keep up the good work!

Author's Response: It helps that I write for a living! (I write fanfiction for fun!) Thanks for reading!



Reviewer: redandgoldlion Anonymous Date: 2006.01.18 - 05:42PM Title: THE TUNNEL

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Please, please update soon! The story's great!



Reviewer: murgel Signed Date: 2006.01.16 - 02:16PM Title: THE TUNNEL

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Brilliant story you did here. all the things are well done. Characters feel quite JKR and you did some job in extrapulating possible events from HBP. Well done



Reviewer: EvieMarie Signed Date: 2006.01.15 - 07:32PM Title: THE TUNNEL

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Ah!! I love it, I love it! Well done!



Reviewer: Kerian Anonymous Date: 2006.01.15 - 12:27PM Title: THE TUNNEL

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And Im not sure of anything either!!! I was anxious the whole time wondering where they were going and now I really really am soo excited to see where they end up! I have to give you complete credit- this is absolutely pure brilliance! All the staircases and each room so well described. I'm worried about Ron and Hermione though- are they still in that awful darkness?!?! Please update again soon- the story is truly amazing!

Author's Response: Ah yes, we will come back to Ron and Hermione - I have something extra special planned - as you will see. :D



Reviewer: Sibling Creature Anonymous Date: 2006.01.15 - 12:22PM Title: THE TUNNEL

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You really did take the 'dark and winding path' thing literally didn't you? ;-) Good to see Harry and Ginny's bond strengthening... though why should the portal have had that effect?

Author's Response: Nice catch of detail! :D I love it when people catch the small things that I throw in. A hint thought - yes, it is the portal (at the present) that has increased the strength of their bond - though after Christmas events (yet to come) they will no longer need outside influences. Piqued yet?



Reviewer: Norman Barnes Anonymous Date: 2006.01.15 - 12:16AM Title: THE TUNNEL

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It is an interesting path they've taken. The standard of writing continues to be very high and I really like your portrayal of all of the characters, particularly Harry & Ginny.



Reviewer: melindaleo Signed Date: 2006.01.14 - 10:44PM Title: THE TUNNEL

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Hmm, very interesting. The tension in this chapter was superb. I'm anxious for our heroes, wondering what happened to Ron and Hermione and feeling Harry and Ginny should "stay away from the light" lol. I loved Ginny scolding Harry when he was being a brave, noble, stupid git. Good job.

Author's Response: Ah yes . . .the light . . .funny you should mention that!



Reviewer: Wolfs_Scream Anonymous Date: 2006.01.14 - 09:58PM Title: THE TUNNEL

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Hmmm... when the gang first went "down" to (what appeared to be the top of the Astronomy Tower), I was reminded of some of Escher's drawings. :-} Nice allusion to _Alice in Wonderland_, too. :-) So what happened to Ron & Hermione, then -- maybe we'll get a chance to read about that later...? Ginny's not-so-subtle (after all, guys tend to be thick-headed, yes?) reminders to Harry (as they were contemplating entering the "office") were particularly well done, as well.

Author's Response: Thanks. :D This chapter was fun, but also necessary (as you'll see!) Thanks for reading!



Reviewer: Antosha Signed Date: 2006.01.14 - 03:55PM Title: THE TUNNEL

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Interesting, interesting! The Joseph Campbell fan in me is bouncing up and down, waiting to see where this journey leads....




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