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Reviewer: immortalphoenix Anonymous Date: 2006.12.22 - 02:58AM Title: Losing Luna
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Reviewer: hp4_source Signed Date: 2006.05.30 - 08:17AM Title: Losing Luna
Some particularly well written descriptive lines in this chapter. Still an enjoyable story.
Author's Response: Thanks - I think! And thank you for reading!
Reviewer: lisa_lovegood Signed Date: 2006.05.16 - 09:23PM Title: Losing Luna
omg!! the ministry!!! shes at the ministry!!! update soon!!!
Author's Response: Well . . .then again . . .maybe not.
Reviewer: Wolfs_Scream Signed Date: 2006.05.10 - 11:00AM Title: Losing Luna
"Not only were the pointed wizards hats seemingly pointless..." Hmmm -- gives one pause, it does.... :-}
Excelelnt, of course -- the above merely caught me a little by surprise, and you got a chuckle out of it.
Hmm... while Haryr & Ginny were trying to converse privately in the hall near those Slytherins, why didn't they merely use their ability to communicate via their Bond? Surely there would be less risk of being overheard, yes?
Yeah, I noticed Ron stuffing his face while others were epxressing concern about Luna. :-}
I look forward to what's next!
Author's Response: When isn't Ron stuffing his face :) And as for Harry and Ginny using their bond - it's still a new thing, getting the hang of it so to speak. Thanks for reading!
Reviewer: ander Signed Date: 2006.05.08 - 02:56PM Title: Losing Luna
Great chapter, and managed to surprise me somewhat despite the title. Keep it up!
Reviewer: witowsmp Signed Date: 2006.05.08 - 02:10PM Title: Losing Luna
So, is it Wormtail that's got Luna? I can't wait to find out. What would be funny is for him to go their and end up rescuing someone else. ;-) Good chapter, Keep writing!
Reviewer: Sibling Creature Signed Date: 2006.05.08 - 01:15PM Title: Losing Luna
oh dear... poor Luna...
Reviewer: Exile250 Signed Date: 2006.05.07 - 07:51PM Title: Losing Luna
Great chapter, small problem with spacing between words and you wrote ... "mooncalf tripped the boarder ward." instead of "mooncalf tripped the border ward. " or "mooncalf tripped the broader ward. "
Author's Response: Yes. I've been having a problem with my home computer and converting to html. The program I use didn't load right and the spacing gets all messed up. I keep trying to make certain I do the bulk of my work from 'work'.
