Reviews For The Dark and Winding Path
Reviewer: immortalphoenix Anonymous Date: 2006.12.22 - 03:19AM Title: The Accidental Bastion No Review Reviewer: _kb_ Signed Date: 2006.08.02 - 08:28PM Title: The Accidental Bastion Hmm, very interesting twists, with both the horcurx and with Lupin. I'm glad you're back adding on to the story; I look forward to future installments. BTW, you have a technical issue to overcome. There are a lot of run-together words. I'm guessing it's a cut-n-paste problem or something like that. Try saving the file out in an HTML format and uploading that instead. Reviewer: witowsmp Signed Date: 2006.07.27 - 01:52AM Title: The Accidental Bastion Interesting idea about Wormtail's hand. That would mean it's not really silver, wouldn't it? Keep writing! Reviewer: Sibling Creature Signed Date: 2006.07.26 - 11:59AM Title: The Accidental Bastion hey wow.... now the hand is a possibility I must say I had never even considered as a possible horcrux, but it does make some sense... Reviewer: Wolfs_Scream Signed Date: 2006.07.26 - 11:03AM Title: The Accidental Bastion Excellent, of course! Yeah, I had a sneaking feeling that that hand might be a Horcrux.... Reviewer: Antosha Signed Date: 2006.07.25 - 06:38PM Title: The Accidental Bastion Wow! What an idea! I have to say in all of the speculation that I've seen about Hufflepuff's cup--and there hasn't been that much--no one suggested that it might have been the cauldron from GoF! And transfigured into the hand? Brilliant! Reviewer: matthias delario Signed Date: 2006.07.25 - 03:31PM Title: The Accidental Bastion Is there some way to fix the places where there aren't any spaces between words? It very slightly detracts from the story in breaking up the flow of things. Otherwise, this is a really good chapter. Oh! And this is something that's been bothering me: you keep typing "loosing" when you mean "losing." Not sure if you noticed that or not, but it keeps cropping up. There have been more than a few instances of it through the previous chapters of this story. Other than that, it's an all around good piece. And congratulations on your ten-year-old going to the Tae-Kwon-Do championships. | |||||||
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