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Reviewer: immortalphoenix Anonymous Date: 2006.12.22 - 03:19AM Title: The Accidental Bastion

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Reviewer: _kb_ Signed Date: 2006.08.02 - 08:28PM Title: The Accidental Bastion

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Hmm, very interesting twists, with both the horcurx and with Lupin. I'm glad you're back adding on to the story; I look forward to future installments.

BTW, you have a technical issue to overcome. There are a lot of run-together words. I'm guessing it's a cut-n-paste problem or something like that. Try saving the file out in an HTML format and uploading that instead.



Reviewer: hp4_source Signed Date: 2006.07.28 - 11:02PM Title: The Accidental Bastion

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Reviewer: witowsmp Signed Date: 2006.07.27 - 01:52AM Title: The Accidental Bastion

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Interesting idea about Wormtail's hand. That would mean it's not really silver, wouldn't it? Keep writing!

By the way, it seems that a lot of your words didn't have a space between them.



Reviewer: Sibling Creature Signed Date: 2006.07.26 - 11:59AM Title: The Accidental Bastion

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hey wow.... now the hand is a possibility I must say I had never even considered as a possible horcrux, but it does make some sense...



Reviewer: Wolfs_Scream Signed Date: 2006.07.26 - 11:03AM Title: The Accidental Bastion

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Excellent, of course! Yeah, I had a sneaking feeling that that hand might be a Horcrux....

Not sure what possessed Neville to touch it, though!

(Congratulations to your son, and welcome back from Real Life. :-})



Reviewer: Antosha Signed Date: 2006.07.25 - 06:38PM Title: The Accidental Bastion

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Wow! What an idea! I have to say in all of the speculation that I've seen about Hufflepuff's cup--and there hasn't been that much--no one suggested that it might have been the cauldron from GoF! And transfigured into the hand? Brilliant!

Just hope Neville's okay!



Reviewer: matthias delario Signed Date: 2006.07.25 - 03:31PM Title: The Accidental Bastion

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Is there some way to fix the places where there aren't any spaces between words? It very slightly detracts from the story in breaking up the flow of things. Otherwise, this is a really good chapter. Oh! And this is something that's been bothering me: you keep typing "loosing" when you mean "losing." Not sure if you noticed that or not, but it keeps cropping up. There have been more than a few instances of it through the previous chapters of this story. Other than that, it's an all around good piece. And congratulations on your ten-year-old going to the Tae-Kwon-Do championships.




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