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Reviewer: immortalphoenix Anonymous Date: 2006.12.21 - 03:26PM Title: THE MOUTH OF THE MATRIX

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Great beginning for a story. I haven't read near as many post-HBP stories as I have other types due to the lack of post-HBP stories but so far, this has made it to the top 5 and there is more to come. If this chapter is as good as the rest of the chapters, this story may wind up being 2nd or 3rd. If this winds up as my favorite post-HBP story, then this truly is an awesome story because my current favorite is VERY hard to compete with (having been placed in many sites' highest rated story or the like) and the author is someone that has written many FFs that have made it to the top 5 list of most well-versed readers.

GREAT JOB!!
Kortnee // Immortal Phoenix



Reviewer: Rynfish Signed Date: 2006.10.20 - 02:04PM Title: THE MOUTH OF THE MATRIX

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Ohh good start, looking forward to this



Reviewer: saz j Signed Date: 2006.03.21 - 09:49AM Title: THE MOUTH OF THE MATRIX

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wow, tht was wow! wow, omg wow lol , different 2 wot i usually read, but wot the hell, ur nw goin on my favorites list, well dun!!!!!!!!!! plz keep up the good wrk!

Author's Response: More on the way - keep reading!



Reviewer: Rettet Signed Date: 2005.12.06 - 12:23AM Title: THE MOUTH OF THE MATRIX

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You never cease to amaze me. I've read every single SSPotter story you've written, and of course absolutely loved them. This story is shaping to be just as good. I love stories about a mental bond between Harry and Ginny, and I'm very happy you decided to put one in here. ^_^ Now hurry and update so I can read the next chapter, I'm getting anxious! Keep up the good work, I love reading you're stories. -Rettet

Author's Response: It's coming! Honest! Real Life is intruding - it's that time of the year after all, and everything is happening at once. Ah well. Thanks for reading!



Reviewer: A Fan Anonymous Date: 2005.11.29 - 02:00AM Title: THE MOUTH OF THE MATRIX

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This is the best Harry Potter fic I've ever read (and I've read quite a few). The only one that my highly critical eye has deemed worthy of a review. You are an excellent writer, your ability to show and not tell is apparent in your work and you have remained the truest to the character than anyone else I've ever read (besides Rowling herself). Keep writing and I'll keep reading.

Author's Response: I'm glad you're enjoing, because I'm having a great time writing!



Reviewer: emilie Iannarelli Anonymous Date: 2005.11.25 - 10:56AM Title: THE MOUTH OF THE MATRIX

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I enjoyed that very much. I liked how you connected with other events J.K. Rowling used in her books great job!



Reviewer: tam Anonymous Date: 2005.11.12 - 12:13AM Title: THE MOUTH OF THE MATRIX

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Completely, utterly fantastic - if you leave this half finished, I swear I'll cry! Love the Snape theory. Love how it follows cannon.



Reviewer: Spenser Hemmingway Signed Date: 2005.10.14 - 10:39AM Title: THE MOUTH OF THE MATRIX

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Excellent chapter. I really loved your description of Godric's Hollow. Ginny's letter was very good as well, and I can see why she wrote it out instead of telling him in person. You have a nice style, and I'm looking forward to reading the other chapters at my next break. Thanks. Eric B.



Reviewer: Ted M. Hammett Anonymous Date: 2005.10.07 - 03:57PM Title: THE MOUTH OF THE MATRIX

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I have enjoyed this chapter very much and will be reading the story. I hope you are not abandoning the other story you have been writing I have enjoyed it as well and would be very disappointed if you cease to write it. As to HBP, of all the HP books, I have liked it the least. To be honest I think JKR is getting tired of the story and hacked out the book just to get on with it. I would not be surprised if the next book is as mediocre as this last one and will be even less surprised if Harry doesn't buy the farm in the end and Voldemort wins. She certainly is cynical about politicians, you would have thought she would have gotten someone in there that was more concerned about defeating Voldemort than appearing to be a doing something rather than really doing something. I wouldn't be surprised either if some of the Weasley's aren't taken out as well, Ginny in particular. Well I have had my rant about HBP and I truly expect that the Fanfics that come out after HBP will be alot different that the seventh year JKR comes up with and probably alot better.

Author's Response: Talk about cynical! I agree that HBP wasn't the best I've read, but I think in a way that it is a bridging story. It is spanning the gap between OOP and year seven. She had to come up with something! I will not 'abandon' my other stories, but I did have to locate the disc they were stored on, (small home crisis). But I've located them and am putting the finishing touches on both the last few chapters of THE FORGOTTEN GIRL, and FACING FUTURE 2; UNDERHILL thanks for reading!



Reviewer: v_t Signed Date: 2005.09.26 - 09:40PM Title: THE MOUTH OF THE MATRIX

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What an amazing start... I absolutly love the letter that Ginny wrote Harry. We didn't learn to much of Ginny and how she talks to Harry in private but this is something that seems so fitting to the charactor I believe she is. I am anxiously awaiting your update.

Author's Response: In my estimation, Ginny has been highly neglected in cannon. She is strong - she survived the chamber. She is funny - the sister of Fred and George after all, and who can forget the war dance? She is brave. She deserves the best, aka, Harry!



Reviewer: dolphingirl79 Anonymous Date: 2005.09.24 - 11:27AM Title: THE MOUTH OF THE MATRIX

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very excellent story, keep up the great work. I can't wait for more!



Reviewer: Wolfs_Scream Signed Date: 2005.09.24 - 11:18AM Title: THE MOUTH OF THE MATRIX

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Excellent scene with Ginny & Harry! And the augmentation of his supplies was rather a special touch. :-) Dobby's assessment and "appreciation" for Kreacher fit well, too. It appears that Dobby's mastery of English seems to have improved quite a bit. :-} Speaking of "special touches," the note about the hand rail certainly qualifies.... Ginny's letter is amazing. I'm a little surprised that she writes so ... charitably, I suppose ... about Draco, but it's an amazing, beautiful letter. Ah; excellent beginning to what promises to be a wonderful story! [The offer to proofread -- and yes, there was a bit of evidence that more could have been used -- still stands.]

Author's Response: Yes. I know about GODDRICK/GODRIC I caught that bit too. Thanks for reading!



Reviewer: Dan Anonymous Date: 2005.09.24 - 11:07AM Title: THE MOUTH OF THE MATRIX

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Reaaly god job. It was awsome reading it and can't wait for more. I really loved all that was sais in Ginny's letter and how Harry reacted to it. Keep up the great work and better not take to long to post more

Author's Response: Thank you for reading! I'll try to oblige, in fact, chapter two is up, just for you! :)



Reviewer: intromit Signed Date: 2005.09.24 - 11:06AM Title: THE MOUTH OF THE MATRIX

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Absolutely fantastic!



Reviewer: Amythest Anonymous Date: 2005.09.24 - 02:45AM Title: THE MOUTH OF THE MATRIX

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Harry's response to the house and Ginny's letter are absolutely perfect. And the bit about the tree house is just wonderful.



Reviewer: cori Anonymous Date: 2005.09.23 - 08:48PM Title: THE MOUTH OF THE MATRIX

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WOW!!! continue, or I might hex you! I have an excellent background, no I am just kidding, though I absolutly loved your story and your style or writing! keep it up! from a very pretty fourth year Well maybe not so pretty Ask the guys Cori



Reviewer: xyz Anonymous Date: 2005.09.23 - 08:15PM Title: THE MOUTH OF THE MATRIX

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good begenning. and i hope u could continue this story. and hurry up. thank u



Reviewer: LuckyHP Signed Date: 2005.09.23 - 06:30PM Title: THE MOUTH OF THE MATRIX

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Keep up the very good work and can't wait for the next update!



Reviewer: Jorgie Anonymous Date: 2005.09.23 - 04:46PM Title: THE MOUTH OF THE MATRIX

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Very well done. enjoyable, and well written keep up the good work. are there going to be more to this? (I hope so) .



Reviewer: Zanna Anonymous Date: 2005.09.23 - 04:34PM Title: THE MOUTH OF THE MATRIX

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Wow. very powerful imagery & you made me believe it could happen like that. can't wait to see what's next!




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