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Reviewer: immortalphoenix Anonymous Date: 2006.12.21 - 05:08PM Title: THE THIRD TURNING

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Reviewer: noylj Anonymous Date: 2006.03.12 - 06:16AM Title: THE THIRD TURNING

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"Talk about getting into your role!" Hurray!!!! Most fanfics would have written "...into your roll." Bravo..



Reviewer: noylj Anonymous Date: 2006.03.12 - 06:07AM Title: THE THIRD TURNING

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Once again: "...heading for the aloof-looking manner house." This house has manners? Was etiquette and proper manners taught here? Or, just maybe, did you mean manor house? Gahhhhh

Author's Response: You must be an english teacher! I haven't had so many gramatical corrections since I was in high school. It must be horrible to read a story and only see bad grammar. :)



Reviewer: plastered, again. Anonymous Date: 2006.01.11 - 04:35AM Title: THE THIRD TURNING

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ugh... in the PS BOOK, Harry plays the flute that Hagrid gave him to make fluffy fall asleep. It was in the PS MOVIE that it was replaced with a harp.

Author's Response: Just as a note HARRY played the flute, Quirrell played the Harp, according to SORCERER'S STONE.



Reviewer: eviemarie Anonymous Date: 2005.11.05 - 12:46PM Title: THE THIRD TURNING

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Ah! What a cliff hanger. I'd be terrified if I was harry... Please update this again soon!!



Reviewer: Antosha Signed Date: 2005.11.05 - 11:46AM Title: THE THIRD TURNING

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Some wonderful twists and turns! I loved the detente with Pettigrew and the slightly edgier arrangement with Snape. Very nice. Though I thought Harry was rather an idiot to drink that wine. But that's just me. ;-)

Author's Response: Yes, but that's Harry, he may be a powerful wizard, but he doesn't always think things through!



Reviewer: Wolfs_Scream Signed Date: 2005.11.05 - 12:24AM Title: THE THIRD TURNING

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Very well done!



Reviewer: vt Anonymous Date: 2005.11.05 - 12:04AM Title: THE THIRD TURNING

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another amazing chapter... and what an ending. Snape is so evil it is cool. I am assuming that Harry is still tied to the chair and that is why Snape is taunting him about sending Voldemort to headquaters. hope your next chapter is up right quick because i don't think i will be able to contain my anxiety to find out what happens next.

Author's Response: Snape is (unfortunately/fortunately) a very complex character. You never know quite what to think. I've tried to stay true to form in this regard.



Reviewer: snuffles007 Signed Date: 2005.11.04 - 11:43PM Title: THE THIRD TURNING

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This is a fantastic story! You've dug deeper to find a plausbile plot than any other fan fic author I've seen. I can't wait for more!



Reviewer: Merlani Signed Date: 2005.11.04 - 06:44PM Title: THE THIRD TURNING

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I'm really enjoying this story, but then again I love all your stories.



Reviewer: redandgoldlion Anonymous Date: 2005.11.04 - 05:40PM Title: THE THIRD TURNING

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OMG, excellent! I'm totally hooked on your story. I do wish Ron and Hermione were with Harry (because I think they will be in Book 7), but other than that, it's perfect. Please keep the updates coming! ~redandgoldlion~

Au thor's Response: They will be - once the time is right. I think Harry will need some time alone in book seven, if for nothing else than to discover just how much he really needs his friends!



Reviewer: fourcorners Anonymous Date: 2005.11.04 - 03:04PM Title: THE THIRD TURNING

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Story gets better every time I read it, and trust me, that's saying something. One hell of a fic you've got going here. Can't wait to see the next chapter! Keep up the good work ;)



Reviewer: DOLPHINGIRL79 Anonymous Date: 2005.11.04 - 11:15AM Title: THE THIRD TURNING

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Very intriguiing, Snape and Wortail helping Harry! I am intrested in reading more! So keep the updates comming. Keep up the great work!



Reviewer: kmagarden Signed Date: 2005.11.04 - 09:36AM Title: THE THIRD TURNING

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Great chapter! Snape is interesting. Saved Harry - but didn't explain himself. What exactly is in that newspaper anyway? And WHY on earth would Harry drink from that bottle when he didn't know where it had come from? Could it be the cup, transfigured into a bottle? Harry drank and fell into a deep sleep, which he really needed. Healing? Maybe I'm grasping a straws. Very interested to see Ginny's reaction to all this. When will they, and Ron and Hermonie see each other again? Any idea when you'll update again? I'm on pins and needles!

Author's Response: I'm trying (keyword trying) to post once a month. But seeing as that I am also involved currently in nanowrimo, I can't promise more than once a week for updates! Harry drank from the bottle because it had come from the wine cellar at the Riddle House, and he was (or so he thought) the only one there. As to the rest . . .read on!



Reviewer: melindaleo Signed Date: 2005.11.04 - 08:49AM Title: THE THIRD TURNING

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Wow, intense chapter here full of good stuff. So, Snape isn't as bad as he appeared. I could have strangled Harry for drinking that wine when he didn't know where it came from. My theories on what's to come agreed with a lot in this chapter - that there is something at Hogwarts and that Wormtail will somehow help Harry because he's disillusioned with Snape's new status with Voldemort. What I really enjoyed was Harry's thoughts on being back in the cemetary. I loved how he repaired some of the broken headstones, and his confrontation with Wormtail was electric. Nicely done. I'm now really eager to see Ginny's response to that letter.

Author's Response: If you really want to know where I'm going with this (or to get a good 'hint') find a copy of the Reims Labyrinth. It seems to fit so well! Thanks for reading!




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