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Reviewer: ginnyweasley777 Signed
Date: 2010.10.09 - 06:35PM
Title: Warfare and Deception
another super chapter
I'm half anticipating, half dreading Ron's reaction when he finds out that Harry and Ginny are together
Reviewer: DAVIDT Signed
Date: 2009.10.28 - 04:13PM
Title: Warfare and Deception
This is a great story. Fantastic! update soon i hope!
Reviewer: knightsbridge Signed
Date: 2009.08.13 - 02:25PM
Title: Warfare and Deception
Sorry I haven't reviewed before this, but all of these wonderful chapters were up and not having a lot of free time, I just kept reading until I ran out of chapters TO read.
You have put a whole new take on the usual super Harry story, and it works wonderfully.
Having grown up in a family that revolved around war, I undertsand to an extent what Harry is doing in the magical world. My Da' was and is one of the 'lines drawn in the sand.'
While I never, ever ask writers to update soon, I do look forward to reading the next chapter when you are ready to post it.
Darian
Reviewer: juice14 Signed
Date: 2009.07.31 - 06:47AM
Title: Warfare and Deception
I like your version of SuperHarry and Ginny. You've introduced many elements in this story. In most stories I've read, these AU elements are used blindly. However you've kept them in tight rein. Most importantly you've not forgotten Harry as a character. It's a pity Ron and Hermione have become marginalized. This does allow for significant H/G but hope that R/Hr can have a chance at redemption. Excellent style and control, looking forward to reading more!
Reviewer: hgromance Signed
Date: 2009.06.14 - 02:13PM
Title: Warfare and Deception
Hmmm. great story so far. can't wait for more.
Reviewer: ReaderRabbit Signed
Date: 2009.06.13 - 11:53PM
Title: Warfare and Deception
Great story so far, However...... :-)
The thing is there is this secret powerful group set up like a military right so how is it that Malfoy is not toast along with say Crabb and Goyel? I they are a secret group of the ICW which has jurisdiction over the ministry it would be easy to make them disappear and Malfoys money would not mead squat?
I mean it's not like a conventional war and we are talking about guerrilla type fighters which are hard to identify except were are not talking about a country we are talking about a very small amount of people that make up the magical Britain community so it would be easy to do snatch and grabs on people that were thought to be bad and interrogate them. This is always a problem when you introduce a commando type of organization into this story as it begs the question of where are/where they? and they aren't very good at it. It is far more believable that there are separately powerful people, that were just not aware that there was a dark underground. There is no way a elite commando group would not be ahead of the curve especially with all the things that magic can do that muggles could only dream of having to gather intel.
Reviewer: HGRHfan35 Signed
Date: 2009.06.12 - 05:18AM
Title: Warfare and Deception
Hi Cathy,
Although the last 3 chapters are rolling out of my printer as we speak, I just wanted to let you know that I absolutely love your story. I thought that I had read almost anything on this site untill I saw an update for a story that was rated high and with loads of chapters allready but I'd never seen it before.
I understand the reasons for it from your bio page.
I've put this story on my fave list because as I've said, I love it.
Good luck with the coming chapters.
Unti;l next time, take care. C
Reviewer: seekers_destiny Signed
Date: 2009.06.10 - 09:28PM
Title: Warfare and Deception
Very interesting. Some new threads are entering the story and Harry and Ginny have already chosen their career. I'm not surprised by Harry's choice, it's not that far from the only career he has considered - being an auror. However much Ginny wanted to fight Voldemort though, I never thought of her as being interested in a career like that. I wonder if she'll regret it later. She'll probably enjoy the company she keeps though.
Your storyline is reminding me a bit of Moshpit's "Echoes of Power, Part I: Anger". Harry is in a secret organization in that one and that organization is facing big problems too. There are also similarities in that Harry has contacts with goblins, a lawyer, etc. However, there are enough differences to keep both stories interesting. Keep it coming!
Author's Response: Lol, it's funny you should say that - I just finished reading moshpit's story, and I find it absolutely brilliant (but I had mine plotted out before that, so any similarities are a coincidence). And my idea for the Curators was mostly to have a place for Harry to excel outside ministry control, so we'll see where it goes. Thanks a lot for the review!
Reviewer: LeprechaunJV Signed
Date: 2009.06.10 - 12:11PM
Title: Warfare and Deception
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