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Reviewer: ginnyweasley777 Signed Date: 2010.10.08 - 10:22AM Title: Returning home
very nice chapter
one thing though, is that there are quite a few spelling mistakes which take away from the story. Perhaps you should get a beta to help?
Reviewer: foxfire23 Signed Date: 2010.07.14 - 05:05AM Title: Returning home
I have the ffeling that Harry wants to see Ginny more, or at least as much as Remus.
Reviewer: piltad Signed Date: 2008.12.23 - 03:11AM Title: Returning home
Hmm I do like it though I must say I do think that you did had Harry really not taken care of that badly. I mean yeah he was tortured but I must say I really do think that he would of had a lot more pain and discomfort right now than what you gave him. I mean I don't know at least won't have to read that much about him laying there and in the hospital wing but I do hope you don't make this just not matter after awhile.
Reviewer: Chelsea_Weasley Anonymous Date: 2007.04.14 - 10:41PM Title: Returning home
Your very talented ill say it agian well done....poor harry
CNW
Reviewer: knightsbridge Signed Date: 2007.01.06 - 03:19AM Title: Returning home
I have no idea how on God's green earth I missed this story before. Probably just as well, since I have many chapters to read without the usual wait. You have "nailed" the characters perfectly, including Dumbledore (who I always thought was using Harry for his own ends,,,right through HBP). Who makes a child be sure he drinks a font full of poison? Just another shite load of guilt to add to an already huge load. Ron? Well, certainly not out of character. At times I think the brains in the DOM did something to him...although Ron and brains don't seem to be useful in this context.
Ginny, bless you as an author, aren't doing the "poor little silly sister" bit, and for that we thank you.
Not much of a review, I realise...but if you don't get the idea that I love it, you would be sadly amiss.
Reviewer: redcannons Anonymous Date: 2005.11.24 - 05:15AM Title: Returning home
Dumbledore's really starting to bug me. In fact ALL the adults. I figure the kids have more and enough logic that they could win this war. Ginny's become more wise than the whole Order and Harry was like that to begin with. I'm not sure about Ron and Hermione but this is a great chapter; it really stirred up some emotions.
Author's Response: I'm so glad that you think that. I suppose that, after so much stubling around from situation to situation they were bound to learn a few things from experience. Ron and Hermione are still playing catch up, but that situation will be resolved further on. Thanks a lot for the review, it's great hearing from you!
Cathy
