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Reviewer: Ginnykins Anonymous Date: 2007.07.09 - 12:10PM Title: Conversations, Confrontations, & Quidditch

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Another brilliant chapter! It was great that Ginny won that award!



Reviewer: Flavia Signed Date: 2006.08.22 - 10:55AM Title: Conversations, Confrontations, & Quidditch

Oh, and you *might* want to change "Cho was a little disoriented"....



Reviewer: Flavia Signed Date: 2006.08.22 - 10:32AM Title: Conversations, Confrontations, & Quidditch

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Fabulous as always, but, 2 things:

You used "obsidian" to describe Sirius' defenses in a [revious chapter

In the match between Cho & Luna, you muse have skipped something:

"Cho remembered the previous duel and dropped into a low crouch. Luna’s spell passed over the girl’s head and struck the blond-haired girl, costing Luna her wand along with the match. Harry had his suspicions though…"

Grammmatically, this makes no sense.



Reviewer: Dragen Signed Date: 2006.08.02 - 09:52PM Title: Conversations, Confrontations, & Quidditch

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What another great chapter, I like that Harry was able to talk to Ginny about the past/future... it was good for him, and help him too... I hope it goes will for Harry and Ginny.

I LoL when Hermione got tightly-rolled parchment out of her bag, which become a long list of questions... that's just like Hermione. So Hermione learns that she's going to marry Ron in the future, I hope she dose some to make that happen.

I love the trip that Harry and his firends made for the Slytherins. But who was the Slytherin that warned Harry about the attack on him... the f**king gut Dumbledore. Harry was right not telling him about the attack, if he did... the Slytherin that warned Harry would be hurt or wrose dead...

Anyhow this has been another great chapter, and I for one would like it that you keep up the great work.



Reviewer: hpf2114 Signed Date: 2006.07.30 - 02:11PM Title: Conversations, Confrontations, & Quidditch

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Reviewer: STA Anonymous Date: 2006.07.26 - 10:26PM Title: Conversations, Confrontations, & Quidditch

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End of year 2!!! Wow! i'm so excited!!! please please update SOON!!! ASAP!!! i need to know what happens!! this is a wonderful story!! update!!!



Reviewer: aprilmoon92 Signed Date: 2006.07.22 - 02:36AM Title: Conversations, Confrontations, & Quidditch

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A really excellent story, I wasn't actually inclined to read it, but i saw so many good reviews and couldn't help myself.... really wonderful and i hope to see another chapter soon!



Reviewer: lord seldon Signed Date: 2006.07.21 - 03:18PM Title: Conversations, Confrontations, & Quidditch

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lets hope the headmaster is really getting it are you going to bring moony into the loop soon keep up the good work



Reviewer: yellowshazzer Anonymous Date: 2006.07.19 - 11:00AM Title: Conversations, Confrontations, & Quidditch

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Can't wait for the next chapter.....you've left us hanging.....



Reviewer: h2o Signed Date: 2006.07.12 - 06:42PM Title: Conversations, Confrontations, & Quidditch

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I love this story so much that I've not re-read it for the third time :D It's definately one of the best AU fics ever and the way you handle the "changes" in this universe are just amazing! I'm really pining for year three now... any chance of it coming sometime soon? :)

Keep up the great work!
//Kev



Reviewer: hpf2114 Signed Date: 2006.07.09 - 03:31PM Title: Conversations, Confrontations, & Quidditch

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Reviewer: luckyHarry Signed Date: 2006.07.06 - 10:38PM Title: Conversations, Confrontations, & Quidditch

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I started reading this a few days ago, and couldn't stop. I just finished and all I can say is WOW. This is fantastic. It's so imaginitve, and the way you have written it is perfect. This idea is one that could have easily been ruined if not written properly, but you have done an excelent job with it.
I am so happy that Harry's friends had no hard feelings when he finally told them everything.
I am interested to see what happens wtih Snape and Malfoy out of the school. Who is going to give Harry a hard time?
Can't wait to read more.



Reviewer: Chreechree Signed Date: 2006.07.05 - 02:40AM Title: Conversations, Confrontations, & Quidditch

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I loved all three of the scenes where Harry spoke to his friends, and they all were perfectly suited to each person’s temperament. Ginny’s was the most emotionally difficult for Harry, and she hugged and soothed him. Hermione’s analytical approach turned out to be helpful in its own way, and she should be able to help Harry discover things that should help this time around. Neville trusted, just as he always does, and Ron knew there wasn’t a hurry and linked it to chess – and then asked about Quidditch – again. I love his friends for their faith in Harry and am grateful for the different strengths they share with him. I was also particularly fond of both McGonagall and Harry separately stating that Dumbledore succeeded in completing the Slytherins’ goal by not letting him play in the match. It was gratifying that Dumbledore realized how badly he bungled that and set things to rights. As for the match, the twins’ bludger move was cool. I like seeing players other than Harry get some of the glory… but just some. My favorite part of the chapter (besides Harry’s confessional discussion with Ginny) was their discussion after the tournament when he told her that part of the challenge of tournaments was determining how to win within the rules and, of course, that she deserved her victory. I’m so glad I am finally caught up. I really did take my time since I knew there was a long way to go in this story, so now I will wait somewhat impatiently. It’s been so much fun so far, and I can’t wait to see where you take us next.



Reviewer: Crazygal4lyf Signed Date: 2006.07.04 - 03:08PM Title: Conversations, Confrontations, & Quidditch

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This fic is brilliant. You said before that some muse wouldn't leave you alone, and if you keep writing stuff like this, then I hope it bugs you until your dying day. =P
It took me a while to read, but every minute was worth it, and I can't wait until Harry talks to the Weasley parents and Padfoot again. =D



Reviewer: SueP Signed Date: 2006.07.03 - 08:52AM Title: Conversations, Confrontations, & Quidditch

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There are so many bits and parts of this chapter that were perfect. I’m glad you decided to have Harry let Ginny and Hermione know about Harry’s first future. I think you played it very well. I've always thought Harry needs to be honest with Ginny for his own sake – she’s always his strongest supporter and Harry’s stronger with her supporting him. But I think he wouldn’t be able to accept her support if he hadn’t been completely honest with her. And I love how organized and focused Hermione tried to be with the information – go timelines and library research! And still in the end she bursts into tears because of Harry’s “inner Hermione”. That was so very cannon!Hermione. LOL that Neville was able to decipher Luna’s strategy for countering the ambush and then tried to imitate his gran to intimidate others. I love your Ron – you’ve captured all his goodness (I choked when you described his first future sacrifice) yet you let him still be a bit of an overprotective goof (which he is at 13), although now he alternates being protective of Harry, to Ginny, and to Hermione. His reaction to the Weasley is Our King song was beautiful! I also want to give big kudos for pointing out that the HUGEST difference between Tom Riddle and Harry is that Harry cares desperately about his friends, enough to die for any one of them, he’s not looking for supporters or to gain power. Bravo on pushing that point through Dumbledore.

You’re doing a great job of keeping the humor factor up. I loved Ron’s description of what would happen if Mrs. Weasley heard that Harry thought of him as a mum. Everything about Luna is beautiful. Harry’s jibe to Ginny about her mum’s reaction to the dueling trophy was perfect.



Reviewer: mystic_black Signed Date: 2006.07.02 - 10:30PM Title: Conversations, Confrontations, & Quidditch

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I really love this story! all the plot twists and time line changes all seem to tie into one another...every so often when I come onto my computer, I'll come and see if there is a new chapter to read, but when I see a new one, I have to go back to read the whole thing! its just so good!

Well done



Reviewer: Katehc2 Signed Date: 2006.07.02 - 01:03PM Title: Conversations, Confrontations, & Quidditch

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Indeed, this is a grand AU you have developed. I await the next book.



Reviewer: hpf2114 Signed Date: 2006.07.01 - 04:13PM Title: Conversations, Confrontations, & Quidditch

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Reviewer: reel_macguffin Signed Date: 2006.07.01 - 12:01AM Title: Conversations, Confrontations, & Quidditch

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That was AWESOME! I loved every absolute bit of this chapter! Fanfreakingtastic!!!!!



Reviewer: Sibling Creature Signed Date: 2006.06.30 - 02:33PM Title: Conversations, Confrontations, & Quidditch

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That was a wonderful way to wrap up the COS story arc. I must say i'm impressed. I especially liked McGonagall confronting Dumbledore regarding his treatment of Harry.

Have I mentioned how much I love your Luna? in this chapter I my favourite Luna line was 'Harry almost fell off his broom when her friend asked “What if I want Neville to catch me?"' I am of course still hoping for an interlude showing the year from her perspective, especially if it includes her sorting.

Oh yeah, and one thing I neglected to mention in my last review. favourite quote from chapter 27, even above the one I quoted last time: 'Luna looked as though she’d been told the house elves were serving roast beef for supper — mildly interested, but not really surprised.' :-)




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