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Reviewer: Belcris Signed Date: 2007.10.16 - 01:25AM Title: Chapter 34: Life, Death, & Quidditch

A wonderful story. I found I could not stop reading it. My hats off to your betas as they have done a marvelous job helping you create such a wonderful AU. :)

Chris

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Reviewer: demarc Anonymous Date: 2007.09.07 - 12:17PM Title: Chapter 34: Life, Death, & Quidditch

Very Good

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Reviewer: hogwartsprincess Signed Date: 2007.08.27 - 07:52PM Title: Chapter 34: Life, Death, & Quidditch

Great chapter and I almost cried when Melissa died. Though it was a slightly depressing chapter, I thought it was really good! Update soon!

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Reviewer: Diviniti Signed Date: 2007.08.25 - 01:28PM Title: Chapter 34: Life, Death, & Quidditch

I love this story, especially the relationships between Harry/5 other friends, and Harry/Weasleys.

I hope we see an update soon, im really curious about who killed Melissa, i suspect either Pansy o possibly Draco under the polyjuice.. Also, i guess the slytherins will think they now will vbe able to ambush Harry, but i bet Millicient will help Harry out.

Also, can't wait to see H/G, as unless i am confusing quidditch games, this was the moment when Harry started noticing Cho

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Reviewer: Breaten Signed Date: 2007.08.21 - 02:01PM Title: Chapter 34: Life, Death, & Quidditch

I cannot describe how happy I am that this story has been updated. For a while i was afraid that this story had been abandoned. I love your ideas to bring out comments in the book, and based on changes Harry has made to the time line increase the damage (i.e. Cho's injury, that has to be one of my favorite original ideas that deals with cannon). Melissa's death was an interesting turn, but you have proved that you have a reason for everything that happens, and the conversation with Millicent at the end of the chapter proved it. The only thing that i don't particularly like about this story is Harry's relationship with Dumbledore, although i recognize that that is just my biases, I do appreciate your explanations for his actions, and reasons for keeping things from him. The way you revealed Harry's story to the Weasly's is another thing I liked about this story, it was written extremely well and the conversation was believable. While I hope you will update on a more regular basis, i understand how life gets in the way, please continue this story as fast as you are able, and continue the great work. I am going to re-read this story so i can remember the entire story, and not the few points that I remember after reading many stories since i finished this story. I will review on anything i particularly enjoy, but this entire story is a great piece of writing and very thought out.

-Breaten

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Reviewer: Fleury Signed Date: 2007.08.20 - 01:11AM Title: Chapter 34: Life, Death, & Quidditch

I rather liked Melissa. Her loss completely surprised me. That's actually what I love about your writing; I've read other fics where Harry goes back, and they all suck. Your ideas are much, much better developed than I normally see, and that's what makes me come back to check for updates. Plus, your writing style/grammar doesn't terrorize my pet-peeves (ie, you've got great writing style/grammar). Love where you're going with the fic.

I was wondering if you were going to incorporate anything from the new canon at all... your explanations are good; I'm satisfied.

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Reviewer: pigwidgeon Signed Date: 2007.08.19 - 11:43AM Title: Chapter 34: Life, Death, & Quidditch

I'm so glad you've updated! This chapter was great; my favorite part was the beginning with Neville. Melissa's death was a shock and a huge twist. This is one of the best fics I've read and I can't wait for more.

Michelle

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Reviewer: hjp74 Signed Date: 2007.08.19 - 09:56AM Title: Chapter 34: Life, Death, & Quidditch

Great chapter the oppaning conversation between nevile & his nan was very well done & it nice to see such a much more confedent nevile then we see in cannon (alought it dose fit nicly with what happens in DH) hopefully the two of them can start to mend some bridges between them as iam sure Augusta could be very helpfully to hary in the futur.

Nice to see that hermione is still the same girl at hart i know that she has easied up a lot in this srory but she dose still care about schoolwork & was very much in carector by going after oliver for daring to sujest that quidditch may be more inportant than homework.

Loved the quidditch match & as for harry patronus woo that was very impresive although iam sure it will raise a lot of questionsabout just how powerfull he is (Also is that normall for the patronus to appear from a sphere of magic as i was under the impresion that it appears from the wand itself.) of course when the rest of the griffindor six start producing there own Patronus that is only going to raise suspicons about the grop in general.

The death of melissa was a shocker but it dose fit very well into the story & ether it will help unit the house to find out who the killer is or it could further alianate the slythirne hous from the rest ether way it going to be a very intresting year.

Harry convasation with the headmaster was very well done & had just the right amount of anger & resentment form harry but then to have harrry temper that with the fact that ultimatly it was his desions to befriend Melissa that ultimatly lead to her deth & putting the blam onto the headmaster was shirking his responsabilatys was completly with in carecter & rlly shows what a complex charecter harry is iam also quite intrigued by not only what teh goblins want for giving hogwart the anti dementor wards & the minesrtys reaction to them but alos harrys next conversation with McGonagall should be very intresting.

James

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Reviewer: Flavia Signed Date: 2007.08.19 - 01:24AM Title: Chapter 34: Life, Death, & Quidditch

Fabulous, as always.
But I assume you actually meant "Margaritaville", not "Margaretville" -
or are you saying *Luna* meant "Margaritaville", and just got it wrong?

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Reviewer: CaffienAddict Signed Date: 2007.08.19 - 12:07AM Title: Chapter 34: Life, Death, & Quidditch

Excellent chapter, and well worth the wait, lookin' forward to the next chapter as the plot is now running as thick as molasses.

Keep up the good work

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