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Reviewer: stinky_head Signed Date: 2008.07.05 - 05:48AM Title: Owl Post and Broomsticks

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I really enjoy this story, I really do, but personally I find many things about it to be... odd.

For one thing it seems as though Harry doesn't try very hard to hide the fact that he's from the future. He tells those closest to him that he is practically a muggle-born and yet he tells them things that even Hermione doesn't know. Now you could say that he read a lot of books before going to Hogwarts, which you did, but I would think that his actions alone would be suspicious to any adult.

Another thing that jumped out at me was the fact that as a first year, and not future knowledge of anything, Draco can perform both the Summoning and Stunning spells. The latter of which can be used by Crabb Goyle, who are easily the dimmest students to enter Hogwarts in a good long while.

Can you see my point?

Now while these bother me, I really don't see it increasing to the point where I no longer wish to read your story. As I said I've really enjoyed it so far.

~Stinky



Reviewer: Lizzie_Harrison Signed Date: 2007.10.29 - 04:37PM Title: Owl Post and Broomsticks

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Reviewer: saz j Signed Date: 2007.05.08 - 07:48AM Title: Owl Post and Broomsticks

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intresting, very much so.



Reviewer: NaruKoibito Signed Date: 2007.04.05 - 01:40PM Title: Owl Post and Broomsticks

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Wow, once again, another great chapter. There were two typos I caught (one being that a could should have been couldn't and "stream on consciousness" should be "stream of consciousness",) but don't worry, happens to me all the time. ^_^ I think my favorite part, aside from the ending was when you described Ron and Harry dodging and fighting like "crazed monkies."



Reviewer: jlwitch Signed Date: 2007.03.22 - 02:43PM Title: Owl Post and Broomsticks

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Hrmm. Interesting. I'm struck speechless, I love how you worked it in though, that he would become Quidditch Seeker for Gryffindor, and Neville would get hurt anyway. The twist was interesting, and definitely well thought out. It works perfectly and holds the reader in suspense.



Reviewer: Chreechree Signed Date: 2006.05.26 - 04:54AM Title: Owl Post and Broomsticks

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Oh, this was very cool. I can’t wait to see the answer to that very big question. Harry tries to do right by Neville and his injury was even more severe. The difference, however, is confidence. This time, Neville was injured because of Slytherin nastiness, not because of his own clumsiness/ ineptitude. That will make a big difference to Neville. These subtle shifts might be enough to change some instances enough to make a larger difference down the road. Still, if fate made the “diving” incident play out anyway… Really, a very interesting quandary for poor Harry, and it could be a long time before he gets a definitive answer. Ah, Harry and Ginny. It was sweet that her letter allowed him to experience pleasant memories rather than painful ones and blocked out the nightmares. Well done!



Reviewer: IHateSnakes Signed Date: 2005.11.11 - 07:47AM Title: Owl Post and Broomsticks

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Great story...reminds me of the Butterfly Effect. S.



Reviewer: destin4fl Signed Date: 2005.11.07 - 02:39PM Title: Owl Post and Broomsticks

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wow! i just can't sau enough good things about this story. another author might just turn this into a fluff story but you've preserved the angnst perfectly!!!

Author's Response: Fluff is okay. Angst is okay. A good mix is even better, in my opinion. Harry's nightmares and second-guessing himself will hopefully maintain the tension.



Reviewer: dolphingirl79 Anonymous Date: 2005.11.05 - 12:59PM Title: Owl Post and Broomsticks

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you have a good story going, I can't wait for more!

Author's Response: I'm working on it! =)



Reviewer: me Anonymous Date: 2005.11.05 - 06:36AM Title: Owl Post and Broomsticks

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There isn't that much i can say i haven´t said yet, except that you're managing to make your story even more interesting ( i must be honest and say i almost doubted you would be able to, but looks like i was wrong ) Simply one of the most interesting stories around.

Author's Response: Thanks! It should get even twistier as the sotry continues and the timeline begins to deviate even more.




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