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Reviewer: Lizzie_Harrison Signed Date: 2007.10.29 - 04:46PM Title: A Quarrel with Quirrell

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Reviewer: saz j Signed Date: 2007.05.08 - 11:22AM Title: A Quarrel with Quirrell

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yikes, it's getting intense now. but well done.



Reviewer: Chreechree Signed Date: 2006.05.26 - 07:44PM Title: A Quarrel with Quirrell

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Well, of course, Ron, Hermione, and Neville would be a bit put out. It’s kind of sad that they didn’t get to run the gauntlet to the stone, but this way was certainly easier. Plus, they didn’t need all the points this time since they didn’t lose them from that detention. Again, the confrontation with Dumbledore was interesting. It has to be difficult for Harry to try to manipulate Dumbledore and not let on that there’s more to Harry than meets the eye. It’s good that Hermione is on the right track. The whole lot of them need to learn occlumency before Harry can fill them in on what’s going on with him. I’m glad they won the cup this time around. No hook around the navel, so what just happened to Harry? I’ll go find out. This chapter was great fun as usual.



Reviewer: Ginnyrules Signed Date: 2006.05.16 - 04:29PM Title: A Quarrel with Quirrell

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I love it. Just pointing out that centrifugal force doesn't exist. It's centiPETAL force you want. :)



Reviewer: JanaGryffin Signed Date: 2005.11.11 - 11:04AM Title: A Quarrel with Quirrell

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More Please????? ;)

Author's Response: The next chapter has been sent. Not sure why it hasn't passed yet.



Reviewer: IHateSnakes Signed Date: 2005.11.11 - 09:11AM Title: A Quarrel with Quirrell

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Really great story. Are you planning on carrying this through 7 books? Ouch, that's a lot of writing! One thing: the letters from GW to HP don't sound like something a ten year-old would write, they seem too mature, but not overly so. Anyway, I look forward to the next installment. S.



Reviewer: aryell Signed Date: 2005.11.10 - 08:30PM Title: A Quarrel with Quirrell

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Oh no! A cliffie! Please update soon!



Reviewer: harrypgirl Signed Date: 2005.11.10 - 07:12PM Title: A Quarrel with Quirrell

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Update or die! Jk



Reviewer: Dan Anonymous Date: 2005.11.10 - 05:15PM Title: A Quarrel with Quirrell

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Brilliant story. I am just loving reading each chapter, everyone so far have been really interesting, I can't wait to see how Ginny reacts this time around when he meets ginny again. The way your going Itis going to take awhile to get through all of his years at hogwarts, but still keep up the awsome work. PLEASE update as soon as you can, I can't wait to read another chapter



Reviewer: Dan Anonymous Date: 2005.11.10 - 05:10PM Title: A Quarrel with Quirrell

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Brilliant story. I am just loving reading each chapter, everyone so far have been really interesting, I can't wait to see how Ginny meets harry this time around. PLEASE update as soon as you can, I can't wait to read another chapter



Reviewer: me Anonymous Date: 2005.11.10 - 03:38PM Title: A Quarrel with Quirrell

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I start wondering if there is any point left in me reviewing this story. I just go again and again saying what a great story this is, that this is without any doubt whatsoever one of the best fics i've ever read ( and probably will ever read :P) and it gets really difficult to praise again and again without repeating myself ( yeah, it's all your falt for not making mistakes i can point). By this point i'm reading your story in fanfiction.net, but since i started reading and reviewing here i'll keep at it. All i can say is that your story is by any means great, even some not totally well received chapters, and that's just because you seem to know pretty well where you're going, and making such a great job taking us there. Hum... this is getting lenghty, so i'll just finish by saying ( again...) : GREAT WORK

Author's Response: Thank you kindly! I'm having a lot more fun with this than I imagined I would be... the feedback I've received was a big part of that.



Reviewer: Revan25 Anonymous Date: 2005.11.10 - 01:28PM Title: A Quarrel with Quirrell

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bloody brilliant story, please keep it going, UPDATE SOON !!!. I must read more :)



Reviewer: erin Anonymous Date: 2005.11.10 - 06:00AM Title: A Quarrel with Quirrell

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I'm really enjoying this story - although I wonder how long it's going to have to be to cover all Harry's years at Hogwarts! : ) Anyway, that's a horrid place to cut off the chapter (but an excellent-sounding quiddich move). Nice job; I hope you post again soon.



Reviewer: Vivek Anonymous Date: 2005.11.10 - 04:26AM Title: A Quarrel with Quirrell

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Oh, this is getting better by the day. Can't wait for the next chapter! On another note, it was good to see that you didn't overplay the experiences Harry had at the Dursleys. Many authors tend to horrify it further by adding more physical torture, and even sexual assault to it. I think that the emotional torture that the Dursleys made Harry go through, by suggesting to him that he and his parents were worthless, and treating him as a slave, was horrible enough. Imagine having no fond memories at all of a childhood till you're ten. Its a miracle Harry survived that. Its fun to see a cocky and confident Harry this time around. I wonder how Cho would react to him this time around, with his attention directed towards Ginny. And please go a bit easy on Dobby this time. Why is Harry still refraining from using non-verbal spells, and the ones he learnt from Snape's book this time? He could really use 'Muffliato' and 'Langlock' this time around. It would be good to see him use non-verbals more, as they bring a whole lot of difference to combat. If Harry had silently disarmed Quirrell, it would have been more hilarious. Nonverbals, and legilimency assist a lot in duels, and even against Malfoy in class. Please consider having Harry use nonverbals.

Author's Response: Things with the Dursleys will soon be coming to a head. Harry is indeed getting a little cocky and conifdent with his ofreknowledge, too...



Reviewer: Ima Quidditch Fan Anonymous Date: 2005.11.10 - 12:39AM Title: A Quarrel with Quirrell

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So sad... I check for updates to this SEVERAL times a day. LOVING this fic! More Ginny on the way? She will like him right? He will save her from Tom and the snake right? Jealous!Harry is my favorite, just so you know as Christmas is nearing. Have I mentioned what a brilliant story this is?




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