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Reviewer: I Love Ginerva Signed Date: 2014.09.06 - 01:40AM Title: A situation out of control

actually, something I just realized (even though this is my 4th time reading this)... They wouldn't have expelled him... he would have used magic in "defense of himself or another".


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Reviewer: Lizzie_Harrison Signed Date: 2007.10.29 - 05:43PM Title: A situation out of control

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Reviewer: saz j Signed Date: 2007.05.08 - 11:50AM Title: A situation out of control

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ooo, getting tricky now, but it's still a good read.



Reviewer: jlwitch Signed Date: 2007.03.23 - 10:20AM Title: A situation out of control

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hrmm... I'm not sure what I think of the physical abuse from Vernon. I don't think I could see him resorting to such violence, even with the altered timeline it's just... I don't think he'd have the blood-pressure for it, and would be more prone to getting so angry that he'd cause himself to have a heart-attack first. I just *shrug* I don't know what I think. Not bad, not great. just. hrmm. it has given me something to think about.



Reviewer: Chreechree Signed Date: 2006.05.26 - 09:02PM Title: A situation out of control

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I see why this might have created some controversy, but I’m not going to complain. As horrible as it was to see Vernon beat Harry, it’s not much of a surprise as you could see it coming. Still, at least things went well with Dobby, so I guess the rogue bludger won’t be necessary. That’s at least avoiding some pain down the road – not that I’d trade the two. Can’t wait to see what’s next, so I’m going to shut up and get to it. Fabulous job!



Reviewer: IHateSnakes Signed Date: 2005.11.18 - 11:28PM Title: A situation out of control

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Fantastic chapter. It's really hard to read the physical violence part, but you didn't linger on it and pulled it off well. I read one other story where the author had HP physically abused, it's just tough to read, at least for me. Anyway, I'm looking forward to the next chapter, you're an excellent writer. S.

Author's Response: Thanks... it is tough to stomach. Child abuse is an ugly damn thing. But it's also part of what molds Harry's character. The fact that he is still a decent human being really marks him as extraordinary,



Reviewer: Marsella Anonymous Date: 2005.11.17 - 05:49PM Title: A situation out of control

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Your story is pretty good and entertaintment, I think you will have a lot work to do 'cause it seems that you are rewriting all the books but until now your work is fantastic, I loved how Harry is playing with the future and the past and I liked how you describe it and the others Ginny and Hermione are brillant I like the role that they play. Keep going with your marvelous work and I hope you update the next chapter sssooonnn, I'll be waiting for it. 11!!!




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