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Reviewer: saz j Signed Date: 2007.05.08 - 05:10PM Title: Hermione's Research and Unwholesomely Clever Muggles

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as always, it is turning out brillient.



Reviewer: Chreechree Signed Date: 2006.05.27 - 02:01AM Title: Hermione's Research and Unwholesomely Clever Muggles

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Ha! Your remark about Hollywood endings, anime, and not being an angst junkie gave me a good laugh because, no, I now have no clue what you’ll do with the ending. Just don’t make it too painful. Me, I still think Harry deserves a happy ending. That’s the whole reason he came back, right? To save lives and do it better? I want him to succeed, but this is your story…. Anyway, I enjoyed Hermione’s self-evaluation, for good and ill. I think fanfiction authors make her way to flat sometimes. She’s only bossy, clever, or fighting with Ron. Thank you for giving her some depth. She has it in the books even if we aren’t privy to her inner musings. I enjoyed it quite a bit. I also appreciated her thoughts about Ron who also comes across flat in many fanfics. With him it’s always being funny, Quidditch, eating, and rowing with Hermione. Ron IS perceptive and fiercely loyal and protective. I’m glad you’ve done such a good job bringing these things out even as they’re still so young. I can’t say I’m surprised about the Dursleys. I can’t wait to see Harry go at them. My guess is that they can’t pay for that top lawyer if he’s unemployed. Oh, yes, that would be beautiful even if they don’t go to prison. Ginny is still a sweetheart. I’m enjoying seeing more of her at this age since Harry is paying attention to her this time around. Wonderful chapter.



Reviewer: Tith Anonymous Date: 2005.11.24 - 10:37AM Title: Hermione's Research and Unwholesomely Clever Muggles

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Yay, an update, and i had only just finished reading the rest of your story on Monday!! I adore this, it is so original.....like nothing else I have read Can't wait for more!!

Author's Response: There's another one in the pipe!



Reviewer: Nemo1024 Anonymous Date: 2005.11.23 - 08:22PM Title: Hermione's Research and Unwholesomely Clever Muggles

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Incredible and exceptionally original story. I generally find time-line changing stories appealing, but extremely few of them are any good and almost none are as good as this one! Looking forward for the next chapter with baited breath!

Author's Response: Thanks!



Reviewer: Michelle Anonymous Date: 2005.11.22 - 10:10PM Title: Hermione's Research and Unwholesomely Clever Muggles

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I love this story so far! It just keeps on getting better! Keep up the great writing.

Author's Response: Thank you!



Reviewer: General Kenobi Signed Date: 2005.11.22 - 09:08PM Title: Hermione's Research and Unwholesomely Clever Muggles

MORE MORE MORE!!

Author's Response: Thanks!



Reviewer: Dan Anonymous Date: 2005.11.22 - 04:57PM Title: Hermione's Research and Unwholesomely Clever Muggles

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This story is awsome. It keeps getting better after each chapter. I hope Ginny stops being so shy around him soon and I can't wait to see how everything with the Dursley's is going to work out. Please keep up updating chapters as fast as you have been I have enjoyed reading a new one about every two days it seems.

Author's Response: Ginny's doing a little better than in the original/canon storyline. But it's going to be (realistically) slow going.



Reviewer: aurorasky Signed Date: 2005.11.22 - 12:26PM Title: Hermione's Research and Unwholesomely Clever Muggles

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very interesting chapter!! i can't wait to see how vernon dursley reactes when he finds out that harry got him fired!! update soon



Reviewer: IHateSnakes Signed Date: 2005.11.22 - 08:35AM Title: Hermione's Research and Unwholesomely Clever Muggles

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Another great chapter, good job. S.



Reviewer: erin Anonymous Date: 2005.11.22 - 06:33AM Title: Hermione's Research and Unwholesomely Clever Muggles

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This just keeps getting better!



Reviewer: General Kenobi Signed Date: 2005.11.22 - 05:17AM Title: Hermione's Research and Unwholesomely Clever Muggles

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"Hermione wrote a scathing letter to the editors of the Surrey Advertiser, suggesting that Little Whinging should have the tap water checked for lead, as the town was obviously full of imbeciles." Omg, I couldn't stop laughing when I read that. This story is turning out very, very well. Keep up the great work. *thumbs up*

Author's Response: Thanks, That bit just popped into my head as I was writing that section and I couldn't resist including it. =) You KNOW Hermione would have a devastating wit if she were properly motivated to use it.




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